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This fanfic is not written by me but by: cr4zypt.https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9172570/1/Legacy--------------A fanfic from Naruto...-------------------------------DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN NARUTO OR ITS RELATE NOVELS
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Some one has already done this dummy. .............................................................................................................................................
The story is completely illogical. Kissing each other at the age of eight, expelling Hinata from the clan, discovering Inbu hiding and killing Junin, infiltrating the clan's headquarters and stealing techniques. There are many illogical things.
Very good story... ...................................................................................................................................................................................
Yep another one. another one. another one. another one. another one. another one. another one. another one. another one. And another one.
man story is best but too many plot holes 1. why rin died (in origionals madara killed her to manipulate obito thus giving him and kakashi mangenkyo 2, you said byakugan came from sharingan wtf what about otsuki clan etc etc
Such an amazing fanfiction i’ve read. I just wanna keep reading this forever. too goooooooooooooood. Just the storyline makes me love it.
this is a really good fan fiction which takes and changes the story of naruto in a good way. there were some grammar mistakes but they weren't bad in all honesty I was a bit sad and shocked when they killed Sakura off and a bit sadder when they didn't bring her back. but all in all really good story.
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it was an interesting and good story. could have used a few more jokes. Spoiler: i would have written in the description / summary that Naruto is a descendent of Madara and Hashirama. only to make more people interested
Well it has a few mistakes in spellings but I am overlooking it because of the story itself as it makes more sense than others This is executed Perfectly without any mistakes
one of the best, if not the best Naruto fan fiction I have ever read. the story progressed fluidly, character developed so much better than the original. the ending was so much better than the Canon as well. if this was the story for canon (anime and manga), it would have topped my lists.
One of the few fanfictions that achieve a near perfect balance between creating your own twist to the overall narrative and remaining true to what Naruto ultimately is.
the only thing I didn't like, was that it ended, it was perfect......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
perfect ending, perfect journey, arguably better than the original. The perfect balance between OPness and actually intelligent, not some power hungry fool
This story was amazing and I would love to read it again. I would recommend it to a friend. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
It's great. I read it in fanfiction.com. And just reviewing it here. one of the best Naruto fanfic ever......................................
it's good, I like the story that it's rolling out so far, it's diverged from canon in interesting ways. there's one glaring issue in my opinion though. granted, I'm not terribly far in yet, but the relationship/romance feels SO forced. the romance bits are not enjoyable to read at all.
This was one of the first naruto fanfics i have read so it holds a special place in my heart, but it definitely does not deserve all of the hype and stuff it gets.
This is the first novel i read in years, it made me laugh, smile, cry, and be proud of Naruto i hope that anyone who reads this book finds as much enjoyment as i did when reading this
the Best naruro fan fiction ever, that is not a reincarnation or an tramsmigration. pretty well written, not that far fetched form canon, but aamzing storyline,plot twist and ending, 🔥
I think this might be, honestly, the most... It's hard to find words, there were others that managed to do things very well, but in a completely different direction than this one. If I had to choose what makes this worth a 5 out of 5, I'd say it's how the author uses the canon to construct a wonderful story with comedy and emotions similar to the original story. That said, there were a few faults, making Haku a girl for no reason and hooking 'her' up with Gara out of nowhere caught me off guard. Sasuke was handled well, but he could've been handled better, which brings me to Sakura... This probably pissed me off the most, you actually managed to develop Sakura into a 3 dimensional character (very impressive transition from the initial gag character she had been), but then you have Sasuke kill her. To me, this is where their arcs went awry. But that's the bulk of it, aside from a few changes from the original canon that I found a tad bit unnecessary and far-fetched, it was constructed and delivered beautifully. Thank you!
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