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It's good in everything, writing, updates, wb, character design is great except plot, which is not to my preference. MC becomes a child slave in Marie jois, then nothing goes his way, and he suffers, and looks like the only thing that will happen anytime soon is more suffering. Yes, there is 2 years until fisher tiger comes to free slaves, but as of ch17, a year hasnt yet past, so... Plus it looks like the world government is gonna be experimenting on him, which they will benefit, and my absolute no.1 thing that will make me instantly drop a ff, is when enemies of mc benefit from the mc unwillingly, eg stealing blood/DNA from mc and getting stronger
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A very good start, this fanfic can become one of the best, so do not spoil it and continue at a very good pace.
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This has a unique consept and a good execution and of what i have sean it updates around every 3 days ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
From the first chapters I can say that the fanfic is very good, I hope you won't spoil it.
Fantastic fanfic, a good idea in the One Piece universe that the hero will suffer at the beginning of his story
please give him a very unique devil fruit