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Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
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"Out of all of the worlds I could have gotten, it just had to be this one. As if there wasn't a plethora of Naruto inserts already... Oh well, at least I rolled a decent ability to accompany me in this cruel world!" OC Insert With The Ten Shadows Technique. Slow Burn Fic
For all those asking... *NO HAREM!*
This is a Fanfiction, As such, I own nothing. Not the cover. I don't own Naruto nor do I own Jujutsu Kaisen. The credit goes to the respective creators and kudos to them for creating such fantastical works. If you haven't. Go read the originals and support the creators. They're better than this I promise!
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With this treasure, I summon... a 5 Star Review. OC Insert Reincarnated with The Ten Shadows Technique From JJK into the Naruto World, with LIMITED Knowledge. The Story takes its time to develop. It's Funny? (Sometimes, though laughing at your own jokes is kind of weird so I'll leave this option vague and up to your judgment) It's Interesting? (Could be) It's Slice Of Life? (Sort of.) Has Action? (Working on it) Has Adventure? (Working on it) Has Romance? (Eventually, not any time soon) No Harem? (Yes, there is no harem) Realistically Strong MC? (Still too early to conclude but I'm trying my best so that would be the case) Does He Have Mahoraga On Speed Dial? (Mahoraga has been ghosting him lately) Does his Domain Expand? (Later on in the far future. When cars can fly and chickens can too. Chickens can't fly, you won't convince me otherwise.) Is the MC a Chad? (No, but he's trying) Conclusion... Read it if this interests you! If you have any questions I try my best to respond to them! I also enjoy any time of feedback and interaction! It helps me improve the fic alongside you readers! *Cough* Steal Ideas *Cough* And hope you enjoy the fic if you decide to read it!
Translated by: Google. This story is somewhat disappointing, it has an interesting premise, but up to that point, the pacing of the story is very inconsistent and instead of giving development to important points, it takes six long chapters in a rather pointless mini arc about the MC's childhood stage, then it's 8 chapters in total to show the power of the MC, something that is in the title itself, there was no need for all that internal MC talk. Developing his social relationships would have been something more interesting, because it's the perfect time to do it, when the main conflict doesn't appear yet, but no, 8 chapters of 90% mental dialogue and another 10% of not very relevant events (the only exception would be the death of the MC's parents). In conclusion: The author doesn't handle the rhythm of the story well and wastes the resources he has at hand, besides filling many chapters with mental dialogues that go nowhere, rather irrelevant characters and a lot of delay in getting to the action, the latter is the minimum expected from a Naruto Fan Fic (a fighting shonen). Things in favor: Good spelling, grammar and the story has few chapters yet, the author still has time to keep improving. But with what I currently have on hand, unfortunately I can't give it more than two and a half stars.
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A solid story for me .... story pace is good .. MC is really beautifully fleshed out ... update stability is decent i guess and author says he is working on it ... a 9/10 story for me
I have been reading fanfics for about 3 years now. some of them are Naruto ones , Avatar ones, a few Dc ones a few Mtl ones majority of them consists of naruto ones tho genshin fics and MHA ones but this is the diamonds in the rough this story has the most natural integration of the mc in the world and the clever use of Kyubbi attack to orphan him and make him feel iffy about Naruto and his 30% retention of memories is an ingenious idea truthfully. I don't really care about Harem since people can have multiple relationship until they commit to someone. So I don't mind him having a more humane side since we all have had various relations. Bro I love how he interacts with his aunt and uncle. And the most fun times for me were when he thew jabs at sakura's forehead without even saying it. WHAHAHAHHAHAHAAA
I'll give you 2 power stones everyday i don't know if this will help you be motivated but please continue this fanfic
Ok, this is honestly a pretty decent story overall. It has all the hallmarks of a good story, with pretty good grammar and plot-line. However, it does have some issues. The pacing is pretty abysmal, and despite there being 15+ chapters, it feels like it is still at the starting line. Not necessarily bad, but the extraneous plot-lines are really interesting enough to keep my interest. Most of the character are pretty in-character, as far as I know. The MC is a bit irritating, while it is good that he isn't the 'instant prodigy OP', his general attitude can just be a bit annoying. Especially since with the whole Ten Shadows thing, I was really hoping for a more JJK character mentality. A lot of these issues could be resolved with time, but right now they are a bit too much for me to continue with this story. I wish you the best of luck author!
Keep up the great work and I hope you could maintain or improve your novel quality in the future. Lastly be safe and stay awesome 👍 👍 👍 👍
So far so good. It has insane potential, considering your MASSIVE talent in writing. While some people might find the pacing of the story slow, i disagree. The only way for the world to be authentic in my oppinion, is a resorcefull and slow approach.
Pretty good. The only problem I see is how the MC acts as someone with low social abilities when he should have been a rather common guy in the first life. Anyway, this is pretty good.
really like this Ff 😁😁👍👍👍the only thing that I can say is the ten shadows power !!! instead of just summoning shadows and having to defeat them it should have been instead defeating a chakra beast entirely by using shadow power like each strike should have been infused with your shadow power otherwise the taming doesn't count !!😅😅😅it would have flesh out a little the power instead of just no even knowing how all this is happening 😅😅😅😅
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A solid story for me .... story pace is good .. MC is really beautifully fleshed out ... update stability is decent i guess and author says he is working on it ... a 4/10 story for me
Hey, so currently 9 chaps in and just can confidently say story has a lot of potential. Rlly just hoping this doesn get dropped cuz this is hones just a flat out good interesting concept and idea.
One of the best Naruto fanfic ever (at least for now). The story is interesting and the pacing isn't bad either. Idk if there were grammatical mistakes since English is not my first language. I recommend trying this book.Author-san mind telling me if he will remain sing-virgin forever like me or have a girlfriend.( pardon my English)
As I'm writing this the fic is in its early stages but it's looking really good. Onto the review: Writing Quality:5/5 supreme. In all the fanfics I've read I'd notice a bit of grammatical errors this is pristine. good stuff. Story Development:4/5 Pacing is nice but l can see you getting better at it. The second chapter of the child arc before the academy seemed a bit drawn out but you established how the characters synergise with each other so no complaints. Character Design: 5/5 Loveable MC nara clan isn't loud and annoying love shikaku and shikimaru The main character akira nara for once in a Naruto fanfic will not make you cough blood like your in a wuxia novel. just for that read it also I adore ten shadows. Updating Stability: 4/5 The fic is in its early stages so can't say a lot bout this. World Background: 4/5 only 4/5 cause I've personally suffered so much Naruto fics. To the author you'r doing God's work supremely done. I hope l can see this go a long and prosperous way. Also thanks for replying to comments! In short: author Is goated same with the story definitely have my eyes peeled for this. this is the good stuff