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Jujutsu Kaisen: Verdandi (ON HOLD)
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a boy in jujutsu kaisen with Cursed Technique called Verdandi (goddess of time)
Check my p@treon so you can read ahead of everyone.
P@TREON - p@treon.com/lessaservantofcosmos
this is me trying to write a jjk fanfic and english is not my first language btw.....bye
*i don't own JJK and GOH, Some changes might be there, seeing as its a fanfic.
The cover art is not mine.
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the story is copy paste from original but interesting to read. give more highlights for the mc... seems like author just force the mc to follow the original story with a little twist here and there... if can make your own arc for the mc character development so that the mc feels more alive than just an extra.
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this is my first time writing so please go easy on me, if you have any feedback please comment, oh and i still don't have any idea about what my oc domain expansion should be so there'e that, well that's it byee
Love the idea even before reading I think if he better have that renewal lol
You need to fix your main character. The stories are copy and paste from the original with a random person in the background speaking from time to time.
Pretty great so far Author keep it up!!