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A Child who was killed Countless millions of Time Before he could even be 2 year's old. Because he was in a mortal world The Reincarnation Guardian always Reset his memory but Thing's are about to get serious when A Celestial Being See's this ......
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I think it would be a good story if you can correct the capital letters and grammer mistakes but I have to say the story line is interesting but why every 10 sentences do descibe the MC’s beauty?
the way it is written gives a feeling that you are reading a physics textbook. But at least I can understand a physics textbook. Author, as of now, does not seem to have story telling quality.
This is recomended I like how your build the mc, and of course the harem doesn't follow character like canon[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
It's pretty story line and all really looking forward at how you will continue this story during the canon.all tho I wonder who all is in harem
By far the most wasted potential In a dxd fanfic I’ve ever read. The good things that made me keep reading. Interesting start Unique Peerage members BUT the negatives Constant reminder that he is beautiful Annoying mc that cries alot Almost no interection with his unique peerage members . Dude literally only talked with kushina and mito once and they are forgotten and the others aswell. Useless passive ability that got him a second fiancé that literally didn’t listen to him for waiting after marriage for snu snu and raped him. Again passiv ability forced him to not meet with his first fiancé for a long time. Basically we got no good romance No fights that are interesting No goals No interesting mc Just a beta mc that gets used by everyone.
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The story was good from the beginning, but then it sank to the bottom. no interaction between characters, always sobbing mc without any development, the first thing is quite interesting, but again, no interaction with them. no interesting battles, and the forced death of the character, again without development, makes him more and more disappointed, and so it is thrown on the 16th chapter.
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honestly its hard on my eyes if you have to read it... would be great to get someone to check it after you write a chapter before posting it
I usually don't read where people add a whole new character or change some character since I like reading reincarnated or releated stuff but this one is good with a mix of cultivation so I recommend this if you want to read it
story line is very good . Keep it up the good work ❤️❤️❤️ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
ahhhggggg this innocence it fills me, anyway this story deserve more fame I really like it to the point of me adding a review, good job author and please add more chapter 👉 👈 UwU
Grammar could be better, but till now the storyline is interesting. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Grammar hurts my eyes "Yes" I want to throw a pillow at the author for 'Caps Lock' "Yes" With all the minuses, the work is very interesting
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I like the story I’m just wondering what the cover of the story is supposed to be
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My opinion this has great potential but the grammar is horrible and if you could get an editor then the novel would be easily 4.5 stars but as it stands it is a 2.5-3
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It's just not that great. Get an editor or use Grammarly cause it is very difficult to read. Readable but the immersion is lost and is not enjoyable. So unless this has been addressed I can't continue the novel. Hope you get better👍