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In the world of pokemon
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Thanks, Mr Frightknight88
Let's join along with Ash Ketcham in his journey.
When Ash was a kid his father went messing it is believe that team rocket was behind this, they were the evilest organisation trying to dominate the world by creating genetic pokemon and capturing legendary pokemon to destroy the world government called S.H.I.E.L.D and rule the world under their command.
But when Ash father stole their most valuable resources their plan to rule the world was pushed backwards for ages. After that team rocket viciously captures Kanto region. The shield were defected form the region as a warning to the world that even some of the valuable resource was stolen from them they are still powerful enough to cush other 10 regions.
After all, this happens The shield declare war against Team rocket thereafter this two stong forces are fighting against each other. Meanwhile, Ash and his mother are hiding from team rocket in the kanto region.
Will Ash defeat team rocket, will he find his lost father and will he be the greatest pokemon trainer in the world? To find out join Ash along with his journey fueled by the vast aura of imagination and suffering be with Ash and help shape the story with your comment also support me on Patreon your financial help is all I need to continue writing the story
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Best Pokemon book out there I really love the way you are developing the story. Thank you for writing such a book. I hope you will continue writing more and more chapter. I will surely support you financially please keep on writing more and more chapter., , ...........................
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Hello there Really nice novel you got there author. And who mr.knight88? It git me really confused man who is he?...love your porce of art man....
Really entertaining book so far. Thank you writer for writing this fanfic totally entertaining from original anime I really enjoyed reading this book I would recommend this to other Pokemon friend out there.. Best wishes from me.
Writing Quality 3: Generally good, alot of minor grammar mistakes but it is usually something comprehensible because it will be either just like a simple sentence or a word like envy used instead of envious or guilty instead of blaming(think that's google translates fault). Otherwise sentence structure and flow is good. Things are actually capitalized when they should be and correct punctuation is actually used, so the story doesnt look like it was written by a 5 year old but instead by an ***** learning a new language. Stability of Updating 4: Its not a 5 and quite honestly almost a 3 because I haven't seen a new chapter be posted in a few days. Story Development 4: Almost gave a 3 but I think it's too harsh a review this early in the story. You can clearly tell when time passes and how much time had passed when scenes transition, and right now it seems to be going sort of like the anime just with different interactions happening and with the cast at a higher age. Character Design 4: Just because there's no OC character yet, but it's not lower than 4 because these characters have a placed established in my mind either from the anime or other fanfics. World Background 5: basically everything you know from the games and the anime, but author introduced a few details I am not aware of that I didnt know beforehand but they might be original details because I've never seen another author give them in their fanfic so I give the author a 5 for initiative and possible originality here. All in all, don't go in expecting a great read or god like use of the english language but don't go in thinking the story is gonna be **** because it's not so far, it's just kind of average is all.
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Woooo***w nice book please write more more chapter I am loving it love from India😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😘😍😍😘😘😘
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Really nice fan fic,enjoyable. Please include characters of anime too , I personally Like brok to be included, and team rockets are much stronger now, really liked your creativity better than actual anime. Just keep on writing.
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Knees weak arms are heavy there is vomit on his sweater already mom's spaghetti he is nervous but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs.