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IN THE EYES OF THE KILLER

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Autor: Phantoms_are_true

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The world is bright, even brighter than what I imagined. The first seventeen years were dull, spending all my time touching all things, pretending to be satisfied with the texture of it.

Mom whispered, "The world is cruel, it's better for you not to see it."

Dad uttered, "Secrets are meant to be secrets. If you heard that "access denied" don't ever cross it."

The confrontation lacks weight as they try to intoxicate me with various information as I grow up. Let me ask you, what's essential? Is it your sense of smell, your privilege to hear things, your ability to taste everything, or is it your hands?

Ever considered living without your sight, who are you? You define yourself as to what people tell you. You dress yourself the way they wanted too coz after all, it's their satisfaction that matter. You touch things to feel it, hoping your brain can understand what's behind a rough or a fine surface. From the start, you are seeing things differently to what they see for your eyes are their mouth and they only tell lies.

Grandma said, "Be contented Lucy. You are denied of something for you are gifted about something. Isn't it fair?"

Grandpa said, "You'll realize it as you grow older. You'll realize in time how having no sight is more of a fortune than a disgrace."

Until I get older and my egocentric psyche grows with me, holding my hand and even taking over me. I wanted what's theirs, I wanted to have those. Let me have it please. Let me have a chance to see until I regret it. Regret seeing my mother cried in your hands, you cruel beast.

You deserve to die. Let her live.

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    Tyunning_Choi

    Enjoying reading the final chapters that I spent 10 fast passes. A novel that's worth my time. I love the thrill than it causes me. I'm at the edge of my seat.

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    Phantoms_are_true

    AUTHOR'S NOTE: How I hope you'll enjoy reading my first story here in Webnovel. Please leave comments and don't forget to vote too. I will appreciate it so much. Keep safe everyone❤

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    jeje_elg

    OMG I'm gonna cry I didn't Know there were closed chapters I got really big attached to the story Is there someone reading it for the end? Please tell me what it will be like. T-T

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    _Jaeee

    I didn't expect the first chapter to amuse me and get me hooked to read further! It's definitely a challenge for the main character that she doesn't have sight, which made it more intriguing to me as I read through. Looking forward for more works from the Author!

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    Mary_Algen_Guiang1

    what a beautiful story! it already captivated me from the very start. I love the way the author narrates the book. and I love that the protagonist is not a perfect person, I am excited to read more into the novel! The story promises to make the readers scared, but I did not expect I'd fall in love with the protagonist as well! a job well done!

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    Shanique_Mahbeir_3863

    It is quite an interesting point of view. A story told from the eyes of the blind then from the eyes of the borrowed. It fascinates me to think that such depravity of sight could awaken trust in even a stranger.

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    Yewon_Choi

    I rarely open this app but all I can say is this what I've been reading every time. Give this novel more reads and votes. Tha author even said it's her first story here yet this never disappoints.

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    siaaa_mir

    even though not having her sight, the main character is designed in a way that makes me feel like I'm in her place at the moment this story has every thing in it and honestly I'm getting attached to it❤

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    Hakdogs_

    The first chapter captivates me. It really got my attention and I want to read more. I want to know what happened to the main lead. I love how you narrate and explain the scene. It gives me the thrill!

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    Jacket_Josh

    Really well written story, especially for a first time writer! There are a few small grammatical errors sure as a whole the story is engaging, the mystery and characters are well established, and the read as a whole from what I've read so far is really interesting! Definitely a strong suggestion from me for fans of the genre!

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    Deborah_John_8098

    I felt so connected to this book Somehow it feels like I am Lucy and Lucy is me Great story idea and good choice of words This book is amazing and out of this word Kudos to the author

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    Megana4

    The storyline is eye-catching. This is the first time I'm reading a Horror & thriller genre. The writing style is well written. The dialogues are on point and didn't exaggerate much. The characters are well portrayed and developed in each chapter. The author showed the story in a realistic way which I liked. The updates are steady. Highly recommend it for reading. Kudos, Author!

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    Jo_J
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    An intriguing cover page! From the beginning of the story, you nicely introduce the reader to the world of your main character. The plot is interesting, the descriptions are skillfully written. Well done!

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    I really enjoy reading this my time didn't waste at all😁😁😁Very interesting and exciting story ❤️❤️❤️I'll make sure to finish reading it🤗🤗🤗Kudos Author👏👏👏👏

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    3 chapters to go and I will fully open all the locked chapters. I enjoyed reading this so much. Will always come back here to vote and support this work[img=recommend]

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    Great story, I love the foreshadowing going on in every chapter. Also, please give me a guy like the ML huhu. So sweet and caring man, not to mention he has blue eyes whaaaaaah!

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    First chapter is heavy and dramatic. I'm afraid I'll be attached with this stories for some time. The problem is I have no key pass HAHAHAHAHA but the story is quite interesting

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