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In Naruto World with Perfect Control
3.07 (33 valoraciones)
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Hiroto Shiba reincarnated in Ninja world as a civilian with Perfect Energy Control.
How will he survive and change the course of future?
Find out in the next Chapter of Drag--
Ahm! Find out while reading the novel with some twists from the original world.
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misleading tags. its just another Naruto turned into a Chinese cultivation novel for no reason. the writing quality is nice though and so is the update rate, so there's that at least
Interesting start and an intriguing premise, though you broke the initial promisse already at chapter 2, it is not a fic on Naruto wolrd but a fic in an AU Naruto world, this discovery broke my immersion and unfortunately took my will to keep reading. You should update the summary and make it clear it is an AU, anyway good luck on the story
you can believe she turned the chakra into "qi" and practices xuallian (she was able to turn on her wise mode 2 weeks after she regained her memory) actually I don't have much problem with that but when hinata was 6 she acted like a nasty teenager of 14 years old. Read it if you can stand these two reasons.
C’était écrit par un chinois en infiltration ou je rêve ? Ça envoie des vibes de roman chinois de cultivation. La discussion entre Tsunade et le Mc se sentait irréel 100% Quitter le village est encore plus dur que d’y entrer et pourtant il a réussi à le faire avec hinata à la traîne. L’histoire progresse trop rapidement aussi
Alright... I'm out. This isn't my cup of tea. Stopped at Chapter 11 though. Read at your own discretion
The Novel feels like a bad Chinese machine translation; with glaring grammar mistakes. Furthermore, while it's set in an Alternate/Augmented Universe; I don’t feel the Author has a good grasp of the Naruto Universe as a whole.
Made it like 11 chapters but it just feels wrong. The concept of Hinata being forced into the branch is pretty cool but everything else is just wrong. It's way to chinese cultivation novel like. Already master senjutsu at the age of 10 all under the guise of perfect chakra control and even created Tsunades forehead seal to store senjutsu chakra and not yin chakra. Everything screams "I'm a Chinese reincarnator/transmigrator so no matter what I do I will succeed everyone else is a background character with less IQ than normal"
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Intresting & Entertaining. Keep up the great work. Continue doing the greatness. Hope & Pray that AUTHOR will not drop & complete this wonderful FANIFIC-STORY with greatness.
really bad. doesnt really have any common sense to it. its breaking every logical construct ever.
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I hate the fact that it's au, but overall I liked it. It's an average fanfic tho. ........................................ ........................................
It feels like I’m reading a Chinese cultivation novel sorry not for me