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Due to an early death our protagonist is given a few wishes will he be able to live as he pleases? Find out next time on D…
Oh yeah I don't own any character except my OC and the pic also isn't mine, ill probably draw one in the future
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Escribe una reseñaBro this is peak wish fulfillment and I like it. But change that cover pic to a better one. Btw why only one seal, if you use more wouldnt it be more efficient or is it because you felt it would make it op too fast?(if so i dont mind a slow but calculating mc is better and even if he doesnt become a shinobi i feel its better but dont let him blow his cover easily)
For Naruto fanfic the MC is too overpowered. Btw, add Shion to Mc's poke-*cough* Harem. Hanabi is hot!🥵
I suggest you read a few chapters and you will fall in love with this story, maybe the story is a bit fast and I like that he is not too close to the main character Which eventually makes him a plot dog. But here the character of mc really suits my taste. So five stars for you🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
The Mc as a Character/human/person is boring and simpleminded. The story is as Flat as a sheet of paper and the world background is very weak. The writing quality is basic but the stability of updates is there. The Development of the Story is as clear as it is unclear. There is not a clear cut direktion for the story on its self.
The story is good for me but when I saw the #weaktostrong and #overpowered, I was like . . . . . .. . .
It's like a person speaking continuously without taking a single breath. The paragraphs are just big sentences and it's abhoring to try and read something like this. Bro, you are Canadian. Canada is an english speaking country. At the very least, use punctuations and periods.
Interesting, I hype mode and pervert mode active, like history original and please battle in history. ( Very good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I hope u keep going ........................................................................................................................
Bro this is good keep going and sont make him ninja/shinobi [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Pues que se puede decir que sea entretenida y buena para pasar el tiempo pero si estás buscando una novela sería no es algo que recomendaría para leer mucha gente se molestaría y comenzaría criticarla así que si no me quieres pasar el rato y dejar que tu cabeza fluya pues esta es una buena opción para divertirte un rato y relajarte y no buscar una historia que diga eso estoy muy urgido por más capítulos pero si es lo suficientemente estar tenido como para no dejarla de lado
Story is good with an overpowered Mc and all....But ur chapter update is very slow🐌.......other things are all good 😇.............................
creepy imba, well, I like it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
wooo esto parece interesante jeje , ojalá se actualice todos los días y además que este Tsunade en el harém y que sea la principal jeje zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Summary of first 9 chaptera is grwoing OP in a narrative and apparently wanting to stay lowkey and making the hokage and root ignore him (mind wipe annd compulsion). hee wants random changes to the world and complainss but doesnt cchange uch because of the plot. actual plan is to open a Restaurant and make it lowkey and doesnt plan to use his abilities to have the,funds and paper trail for the opening. characters (only mc till now) seem rather flat and actions more than random. a plus point would be the slightly, more realistic take on the ninja work
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