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IN ANOTHER WORLD WITH A SMARTPHONE AND SYSTEM
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Our hero will go to different worlds to get stronger and do missions for GOD in order to participate in the fight against representatives of other worlds
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tags:- ACG, another world, magic and sword, jutsus, harem, no r-18, op mc, cunning mc, ruthless mc, caring mc, modern, fantasy
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My brother, it seems that you are a person of taste. I hope that you will continue to release more chapters. I hope Mc will go to one of these animes : 1 - That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime. 2 - How NOT to Summon a Demon Lord. 3 - Overlord 4 - KonoSuba 5 - Goblin Slayer Thank you and please do not drop the novel.
The only reason I gave this story 3* is not to get the review deleted. This story does not even deserve 1*. The dialogue is so fake that it makes you curse the author. Logic in the story is non existent. For example Mc is crying for leaving his family and next chapter is speaking how happy he is with harem. Killer breaks his cover not wanting to eat poison and next sentence kills himself by taking poison and more examples like that. The style of writing is like a primary school kid. Grammar sucks, a lot of mistakes in sentences. World is the same like in the anime and there is nothing new. So to make it clear this story sucks and I would not recommend anyone to read it even for leisure as God is my witness I tried but just managed to get to chapter 5 or 6.
I'm not gonna lie to you, this is bad. Like really, REALLY bad on most accounts. I'd write a list of what's wrong with it, but that would be putting in more effort than author did (when he wasn't having hysterical all-caps fits of how "meaniepoo everyone is to him" and blackmailing peeps into stroking his ego with stones and good reviews or he'll drop the novel).
A downgraded version of In Another World With A Smartphone. The writing and punctuation need some work. So do the character design, story development and world background. The protagonist, for being a former important soldier and scientist, married with kids, is no better than an ordinary teenager. And I really don’t see how a pervert set on collecting girls before finalizing his reincarnation, can be considered pure. He doesn’t even properly use all the cheats he was given. Mostly his potential for spell creation and his smartphone (it’s in the f*cking title!). Finally, the unreasonable super-kid treated like a budding **** or older despite being f*cking 4yo. I forced myself to read until chap 21 before giving up.
don't read this novel. player system is all wrong. so much capital letters than the headache. nothing makes sense. Writing Quality 1star Stability of Updates 4star Story Development 1star Character Design 3star World Background 4star
The MC used to be a veteran astronaut yet he act like your typical teenager japanese mc, he mostly act so retard that I wonder just where the heck is intelligent from first chapter is gone.
The only good thing about this story is the number of chapters, the chapters are short though. The system went on a vacation right after reincarnation. His house is a duke house, yet everyone aside from the MC is tr*sh, the dude got poison and no one notice, where the fcking doctor? The guy the poison him is dumb, but apparently the Duke house is dumber....After he recover, they got him train in order to rehabilitate, next chapter he got train till he faint from exhaustion, look like the word "rehabilitate" got a different meaning there. Also the reason his house survive again ambush is because MC help fight against them and pass out again. After capture their assailant instead of interrogate right away, they wait for the MC to regain consciousness to join them, did I mention that the MC is 4 yo? 4years old!!!! The dad was super proud of him for wanting to fight assassin instead of feeling ashamed of how useless him and his house is, they're a fcking duke house not duck house, how the fck did they survive till now? And don't give me that cr*p about don't read if I don't like it, the review session is here for a reason so that new readers know what to be expected.
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Alright ima say two things: First: this is one of the very few novel that don't get me bored on the first 5 chapters, has good writing quality, interesting plot, and you somehow know what to do with it unlike the other authors that mess up any multiverse traveling novel they write, so it's excellent in all ways, and i hope you come back to continue it. Second: i need to be harsh on this one, but it's for your own good, listen you weak-willed fvcking piece of of sh1t, if you think life is all fun and rainbows, and expect people to throw praises at you all the time and never meet any of those annoying pricks that like to make other people's life hell, then you don't even deserve to breath the same air as us, you disgust me, people like you who give up on the slightest hardships are nothing but trash, grow yourself a backbone and stand up for yourself for fvck's sake! Tell those people who bad mouth you and your novel without reasons to fvck off! You think all those people who their novels, their social standing, and all the success they made are just given on a silver plate?! Grow up! The world is harsher than you think it is. Now that I'm done, i will have to say sorry, I'm not really skilled at encouraging someone, but i can give a somewhat good scolding to people, it mostly gets them to man up, so i guess it's kind of the same? Tehe~ 😇😄
I love your work dont quit because of uncultured and jelous people keep up the good work.
Not much to give review as there are too many bad development which is 1. chapters are too short 2. story development is worst than other which is not related to canon or filled with junk chapter 3. There are not much progress in character development 4. Is there any reason for MC to go the other world? It's feel like he want to go other world for vacation. 5. World background is also poor. My review is harsh but it's truth. You need to rewrite it or continue as it is.
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Hey, isn’t that a rip off. I think it's a copy from a Japanese novel "Isekai wa smartphone to tomo ni". But well it's not that bad i guess. Just the name of the protagonist changed, but the 'Yumina' character is still here.
Beta MC .. .. Hmm. .. Still beta MC. ... .. Naive MC. .. .. .. .hmmm. .. .really naive beta MC. .. .. Hmmm. .. .. I guess author is beta and naive too? ?? ?
The romance is forced and they love each other at 4 years of age. You forget about the system forever. He’s weak. 20 chapters and there is no increase in abilities.
i just started 2 day ago, i like the way you introduce your character and the way the character communicates, the way plot progress and the whay information was given. well idk what next to say but i'll be staying till this fic finished (っ'-')╮=͟͟͞͞💌 (づ￣ ³￣)づ (≚ᄌ≚)ℒℴѵℯ❤
I like your work so I hope you don't drop and keep up So hope you write more chapters if you think of writing So I will keep it in the library if you thinks of writing more chapters so Waiting to read new chapters if you want to write
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Overall nice story with a lot of potential....just dont time skip it to main plot.Try to show the world in different angle. Nicely done to make it not too op at start.Alll in all best of luck in your endevaours....😊😊😊😊😊
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!!
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