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So adam accoding to your karma-
hold on who is adam,
you are obvio-
naah naah noope i am ron
oh shit!
you stupid goddesses!
AN EPIC BATTLE OF A.I VS MAGIC
hey why don't you save the world.
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I liked the emojis the author used while writing. The writing style is a bit chaotic, making the story a bit hard to keep up with, but it also has a lot of energy and emotion, making the tone of the story very upbeat and positive overall (the comedy aspect of it really shines through). There's a lot of dialogue, which is not bad, but I would like if the author would describe more of the characters and scenery, etc. The story feels a bit like a script at some points, since the author uses colons sometimes when writing about who is speaking. This makes the story feel a bit inconsistent, since the dialogue is switching between two styles of writing, but it gets better a few chapters in. I think that a bit more paragraphing could be beneficial, but ultimately, it's the author's choice. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing too bad. I have nothing to say about the characters, other than how interesting and human they were. They each had their own flaws and hilarious moments. The story was quite interesting, and I found myself finishing the whole 25 chapters.
It's a good story I recommend this book because it's unique the quality of the store is amazing and the characters design and the updating stability and the world is amazing and the characters design.
So our mc who got accidentally killed by the goddesses for looking too average now got a task to save the world...he was not granted any innate power and all but the god gave him a tool, a magical diary that can create anything he imagine.....now his task is to end this conflict also to know why sudden dungeons are forming? he created an A.I.- IRIS to help him clear the task.......... do write review and how are you feeling about it ? also some suggestion and feedback
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