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"The path of a peerless hero is one of martyring yourself. It is one of thorns, a road filled with pain and blood. Are you prepared to walk down such a path?" One asked.
The other replied, "Of course. I am fully aware of it, and I continue down this path despite the fact."
The other then took in a deep breath before letting it out. "The hardest of choices require the strongest of wills. This life didn't choose me, I chose this life. Even if I cry out in pain, even if I'm bleeding from a severed arm, even if I'm on the verge of death with swords and spears running through my body, do not pity me. I hate being pitied."
A different take on the classic Waifu Catalog. A true/lawful good protagonist. No bindings, no stamps, the only way to capture someone is for them to give you a true love confession. Crossposted from Questionable Questing under the name 'You are being saved, please do not resist'.
Kukulkan possession.
Current World: Fate/Grand Order Part 1
Past Worlds:
- SCP-001 S.D. Locke's Proposal "When Day Breaks"
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This is very best and amazingly!!! It's make me cry because joy!!! It's pained me to see her struggle!!! It's the best of the best story about Good morally and lawful person MC I'm have read!!!! The best one!!!! Seriously!!! You make very good and amazingly MC who me just can relate despite just few chapters, it's already hook me to read more and more!!!
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Entering the story if you do not know SCP (like myself) you have no understanding what is going on. There is no real explanation of what is going on just horrific event after horrific event. No explanation of characters appearance outside of their fingernails. Knowing that SCP - and having no previous understanding or where to find the source - is the majority of this story as of current, I find the story lacking as a fanfiction. I know recently a new arc for FGO has begun but the question stands do i need to read the previous arc to read the new one? If not then why is it a continuation of the story? If yes then I would say it was executed poorly for anyone who doesn't have canon knowledge.
Faz tempo que eu não vejo um história tão interessante. Faz tempo que eu não vejo um MC normal que lida com o medo, tristeza e frustração de uma forma humana.
This story is definitely one of my personal favorites. It’s a more than decently well written story, with great grammar and great world building. Now for new incoming readers just a heads up, this is NOT a Villain story Or even aAnti-hero fic. you can argue the MC is somewhat grey, but overall she’s a goody two shoes, a martyr to a fault. She pursues heroism to damn near inhumanly fault. (I personally liken her to Shirou’s Emiya’S hero of justice deology, which is a Plus for any shirou fans reading this.) Now then, Onto the review… The SCP Arc was definitely my favorite and is what actually got me to love the MC & by proxy Kukulkan’s character. what can i say? I just really like Heroic MC’s . The fight scenses are Great, and the character interactions are a treat. Especially that Final battle in SCP arc, Fuckin marvelously well done. What i did not like though, is the waifu catalog thing… its so… shoe horned in? I just feel like it doesn’t really fit well with the stories theme and Overall mood and settings. Its like a cat at a dog park. like the story is so tense, so seat grippingly suspenseful & exciting , with action and drama, and then theres the whole waifu catalog thing. I can understand if the story is leading up to like an eventual final battle against the waifu catalog as a Whole… but meh. it just feels unnecessary from a narrative perspective . You could’ve probably picked any other multiversal super power and it would not chamge anything. (Except a few key things) Like *SPOILER* During the final battle it was masterfully used to end the battle, but it also felt … Sudden? It kind of felt like it broke immersion, it was like i suddenly realized , “oh wait this is a waifu catalog fic & not an actual crossover fic” Don’t get me wrong, you executed that Arc & chapter masterfully, my respect to you. (I actually really liked how it was the catalog which saved her in the end. It was quite ironic .) It’s just my opinion honestly, you could take out the whole waifu catalog thing and it would not change a thing. (Not that I Hate the idea, just not overly fond of it . ) —- Now For the fgo Arc, at first I was a but hesitant , I thought it was way too early for a homeverse Arc, But it turned out pretty well it all honesty. Your interprrsonal writing of characters & their personalities and growth definitely improved. like i never really liked nor disliked the gudao’s/Gudako’s but I did find them really bland compared to all other type moon protagonists . But, I’ve gotta hand it to you, you definitely breathed life into these characters, especially Ritsuka. I also like the gradual slow steps ku takes to regaining some sense of humanity. While a bit rough and could use a bit more fleshing out, i tough it was well done. (Like sometimes it feels like she comes to the correct answers too quickly? That Just might be a by product of her being OP though) Writing quality definitely Improved as well, like wow. (Them horror scenes, *mwuah* cheffs kiss, also fuckin horrific .) The best thing about this Arc tho, is how you actually incorporated the real world into the story. it was subtle, but well done. Anyways , Thats the end of the review, would just like to say thank you for writing this story. Its definitely been a journey, I hope you continue to write and improve! Never give up!
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This fanfiction is hands down one of the best I’ve ever read. The main character is super interesting, and all the characters feel alive. World building, descriptions, grammar, words can’t describe how amazing this fic is.
To me this is peak fiction. While some may get put off by the hero complex I think it fits perfectly. Also science!
Great story! It’s a rare gem that has lots of potential! I find the combination of SCP with Fate to be very interesting.
All I can say is this is one of the best things I have read in a long time
This is by far, one of the best and enjoyable story I've read in months. waiting for more updates
Very interesting story and concept of kukulkan in SCP-verse , I'm didn't many stories of kukulkan , I will wait for more chapters in story [img=update][img=update]
Hey love the story want to see more, but I have a question, as I was scrolling through scribble hub I saw a story called "You Are Being Saved, Please Do Not Resist (WC/SCP-When Day Breaks start)", that as far as I can tell seems to be the exact same thing, with the same name as you with only a single number changed. I just wanted to make sure it is you and not someone stealing your work, they also said they were cross-posting on questionable questing
Amazing story, the waifu catalogue doesnt take a waifu to go with you but turns you into the waifu instead! Also its nice to see the mc struggling with the tragedy infront of her
it was very great it mix with realism and a lot of thing I read it all(until now) in just 2 day, I don't know that much about fate lore but I try to watch some and it is very interesting as for this fan fiction it was very great and I like it very much probably my top 3 to be honest and in my opinion I have read lot of fanfic but I mostly stop after 20-30 chapter and then stop but as for this fanfic I have nothing to say anymore it just great! (this is my first review in this webnovel sorry if it might not be a good review)
A very good story that I would recommend to most people that wants to find something different.In short, this story is about a being so powerful that she could end the world then and there, but even with all of her powers she couldn't save everyone. There is no heroes or villains, only people with clashing views.This is by far, one of the best and most enjoyable story I've read in a long time. Something I've yearned for a long time. It deserves a 5 star, so thank you author for making such a good story.