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Capítulo 15: CH 14 Unspoken Gratitude, Unspoken Offering, Unspoken Storm

Hello everyone! It's been a long time since I updated this, oh boy.

I read the whole story so I could have a refresh.

After I left for a break and practice, I checked my short list of ideas for future chapters, and I felt I would make some changes to what will be in the upcoming chapters later.

Hehe...

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Also, Yes this one has some drawings and images for visual representations for this chapter, but its optional :D

Its in Wattpad, here is the chapter link if you like with the one with my drawings and image references:

https://www.wattpad.com/1370294899-i%27m-a-husk-in-honkai-impact-ch-14-unspoken/page/3

This is gonna be fun

Thank you for the patience!

CH 14 Unspoken Gratitude, Unspoken Offering, Unspoken Storm

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Elysia and her friends, Eden and Aponia, ride on Elysia's pink motorcycle, skillfully maneuvering through the thick and dark forest, dodging trees with ease. Though the forest is dense, sunlight manages to filter through, casting faint rays.
"Okay, this is our stop," Elysia announces, driving the bike toward a wall of trees. Eden and Aponia look a bit confused, and Eden asks, "Elysia... Is this the right way?"
"Yup!" Elysia replies excitedly. They pass through the wall of trees as if it wasn't there. Eden and Aponia close their eyes, expecting a collision, but to their relief, nothing happens. They slowly open their eyes to see a large base before them. Aponia is left speechless, while Eden exclaims, "H... Holy... Goodness..." The passes through the camouflage barrier that they just pass through.
Elysia smirks cutely and drives the motorcycle toward the entrance—a massive metallic sliding door that resembles a garage entrance, only much larger.
Elysia stops the bike and parks it in front of the door, telling her companions, "Alright, hop out, girls!" Elysia jumps out first and happily sways her body toward the metal ramp leading to the door. Eden and Aponia follow, with Eden looking around a bit nervously, though she manages to maintain her professional composure. In her mind, Eden wonders, "I have to present myself well. After all, it's her uncle. And this place is huge... Is her uncle a scientist?" Eden imagines a man in a lab coat with pink hair.
Aponia also hops out, still unable to say anything. She looks around the front of the base, calmer than before, and clasps her hands together in prayer, her eyes moving slowly in a dim and lifeless manner.
Elysia reaches the door with a smile and sees the doorbell. She presses it, and Eden and Aponia stand atop the ramp, waiting for a response. After a few seconds, a large CCTV activates and focuses on the three of them with a red glow. Elysia smiles wider and waves at the camera, saying, "Hi~ uncle! I brought my friends along. You said it's alright to bring them, right? Right?" Elysia cutely shows her affection on the CCTV.
The mysterious uncle chuckles in a low and mechanical tone, which frightens Eden slightly, causing her to flinch, and sharpens Aponia's eyes a little upon hearing it.
"Alright, bring them over. I'll ready a cup of tea then..." The CCTV turns off and hides back into the wall, becoming unrecognizable. Elysia excitedly hops in place, and Eden calms her nerves by patting Elysia's shoulder, asking, "Elysia, you seem quite excited. Do you really like your uncle?"
"Of course I am~! I can only come here every few days or perhaps even weeks! I think I was able to see him after a month from one operation~" Elysia then pretends to look sad and whimpering before returning to her happy expression. "So yes, I miss him~"
Aponia smiles slightly and nods. "Ah, having someone in your family you can reach out to. How lovely. Your uncle must be very dear to you."
"It sure is~" Elysia says as the lock of the large metal door makes a clunk sound, followed by small clanking noises. Slowly, the door unlocks and slides wide open. Elysia looks back at Eden and Aponia and cheerfully says, "Come on~ Uncle is making tea for us! Oh! And He's such a good cook! Come, come!"
They keep walking as the unlocks; it was huge. Elysia hums playfully and happily. It is quite dark at first, but the lights turn on once the three ladies enter. Aponia feels uncomfortable with all the silence, and Eden feels a bit uneasy as well. The lights turn on as they fully enter, and the door is shut behind with a low hum, and air closed in tight shut. Elysia's footsteps can be heard joyfully, with each step accompanied by a metal clang sound. So do Eden's and Aponia's footsteps with each clanging sound of the metal floor. It is a very spacious hallway, enough for large vehicles like trucks or even taller and wider than that.
Eden looks around slowly, getting used to it. She looks at Elysia and says, "So what does your uncle look like?"
"Oh uncle? hmm..." she hums in a slight playful way as she smiles with her lips curving a bit more. "Uncle is VERY tall and BIG!"
Aponia looks around with each clanging sound of each footstep, "Tall and big..."
I know readers would say something, and it's not what you think—no horny.
Anyway, Elysia leads them to a large room. Then she presses a button as the large door opens to reveal a very large spacious living room. Accessories and items laying around are too big for humans, except for a few couches and one large table. It's an odd sight, but for Elysia, this is normal. Its color scheme is just the generic sci-fi blue glowing circuit design on the walls with the base grey color all over, with large lights to brighten the room.
Eden, seeing this bizarre sight, is in awe a bit, even surprised, as well as confused about why everything is bigger than normal, except for a few pieces of furniture. "Her uncle is... quite a person... perhaps a collector of such large items?" she thinks in her mind. The design is sci-fi themed, heavily so, and not her cup of tea, but it's not bad—just a bit too edgy for her taste for some reason.
As for Aponia, she is quite confused, not into any sorts of books or shows, so she really can't grasp the theme it is giving. But it's oddly unique, at least for her. She doesn't have any comment other than wondering why everything except a few pieces of furniture is so big.
Elysia then goes to the couch, a large and fluffy-looking one with pillows as a bonus. She looks at her two friends and waves her hand to come over. "Come! Come! It's comfy!"
Eden is the first to sit since Elysia suggested, finding it quite comfy, just as she said. "Huh... you're right. I guess I am just a bit nervous with all this decor."
Aponia follows up, despite not being the emotional type of person; her dull eyes slightly widen for a bit. It is indeed comfy on her rear.
Elysia then claps her hands to gain their attention. "So girls, what do you think of this place?"
Eden smiles, slowly getting comfortable, and her uncomfortable feeling slowly withers. "In all honesty, it is very scary, like something you see in sci-fi movies."
"Oh! I get that feeling! My uncle is really into sci-fi, so don't worry," Elysia reassures, making the two ladies sigh in relief. Her uncle is just very into sci-fi, or so they thought, as they presume that's the case. Aponia smiles very, and very slightly, with her dull eyes staring at Elysia. "Oh, so that's why... but... what's sci-fi?"
Elysia and Eden turn around with a slight gasp expression on their faces. Elysia scoots closer and then puts her hand on Aponia's shoulder. "Oh dear Aponia! Where would you like to start?"
Eden giggles slightly with a harmonic melody, not on purpose. "Maybe we should introduce her to some movies."
"Oh! That's a good idea~" Elysia nods in agreement.
Aponia just looks at the two and appears confused as she is barraged with information about what sci-fi is and suggested films she should watch. Being a nun and usually taking care of the injured and sick, she never has time for those things, and it's comical overwhelm for her.
And so, the trio of elegant women extends their conversation over the span of 30 minutes, as is the case, and that's the way it unfolds.
Step by step, the distinct sound of each footfall resonates—distant yet resonant, drawing nearer and amplifying. Eden and Aponia sense the subtle quivers accompanying the approaching steps. Eden scans her surroundings deliberately, inquiring, "What was that?"
Elysia grins, radiating joy as she applauds. "Ah! It's uncle." A sizable metallic door glides open gradually, retracting the doors to the walls. Eden pivots, unable to discern the unfolding events amidst nearing footsteps. Aponia, too, turns her head, glimpsing only the silhouette but recognizing a hint of familiarity. Her eyes widen slightly in recognition. "..."
The imposing figure gradually materializes, cradling a sizable tray adorned with petite objects, presumably teacups. Eden registers a mild surprise as the figure advances. Aponia's eyes widen further with a soft gasp, grappling with a sense of recognition but uncertainty about the identity. The footsteps resonate louder and weightier, each one carrying a hefty presence, metal echoing against metal with a subdued mechanical hum.
"Ah, Elysia, delightful to encounter you once more." A deeply resonant, eerie mechanical voice, understated and velvety, emanates an unsettling yet authoritative aura. It releases a resounding, but restrained, tone—neither a shout nor a scream, more akin to an indoor voice with commanding presence. The uncanny mechanical hum reverberates, eerie yet lacking aggression, reminiscent of the gentle resonance of a colossal being.
The enigmatic figure gradually unveils itself, manipulating the lights closer to the living room. The lustrous golden metal gleams in the illumination, revealing a network of pipes and wires within its black interior, pulsating with the movement of its intricate machinery. It unveils its distinctive red cybernetic eyes, initially appearing merely luminescent, but upon closer inspection, intricate gears churn, orchestrating the illuminating effect. Fixating on Eden and Aponia, the colossal golden automaton's eyes adjust their gears to meet their gaze. "And your companions have arrived."
Further metallic clanks resonate against metal as the colossal golden metalic-mechanical legs traverse the sci-fi-themed metallic floor, cradling a substantial tray adorned with dainty teacups, emanating the warmth of green tea. It elevates slightly, presenting the tea it has crafted. "I am Uncle Aeon, care for some tea?"
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"..." Eden remains wordless, observing the robot-like behemoth. "..." Aponia also maintains silence.
"That's my uncle," Elysia enthusiastically introduces her friends to the towering golden automaton.
"Eh?" Both Eden and Aponia express bewilderment.
Aeon chuckles with a low vibrating hum of echo through out the room

"well here is your tea, get it while its hot"

He delicately situates the trio of diminutive, human-sized teacups on the table. His mechanical digits handle the fragile vessels with an extraordinary degree of gentleness, lowering them onto the surface with such finesse that not even a hint of a crack surfaces upon contact. Eden emits subtle gasps of confusion and wonder, observing the teacups being meticulously arranged. Aponia, her attention more fixated on Aeon and his imposing form, recognizes him as the one who rescued her and the boy. Aeon completes the placement of the teacups, and his mechanical head swivels with gradual precision, fixing a calculating gaze upon them. "I'll be right back, have matters to attend to with Elysia."
Aeon ascends and proceeds to retrace his steps, Elysia waving cheerfully as he departs. "Hai~ uncle."
Eden and Aponia blink in stunned silence. Eden turns slowly to Elysia, who meets her gaze with a nonchalant smile. "Hm? Yes, Eden-San?"
Eden gestures towards Aeon retreating to the hallways. "Is he your uncle?"
"Yes?" Elysia replies innocently.
Aponia directs her gaze to Elysia, posing the question, "its a robot"
"Yes?" Elysia reaffirms.
"A colossal golden robot is your uncle?" Eden queries.
"Yes?" Elysia responds.
"It communicates as if it possesses a very human expression on its voice strangely..." Aponia interlaces her hands inquisitively.
"Well, yes?" Elysia confirms.
"I'm... I don't quite know what to say. Pardon my bluntness, but... how did you encounter that entity—I mean, him?" Eden inquires. Elysia beams brightly, gasping with excitement, and grasps both Eden and Aponia's shoulders. "Come! Come! Allow me to regale you with the tales of my uncle!" Elysia swiftly grabs her teacup and heads off, as Eden and Aponia exchange glances, lift their teacups, and follow suit.
As the two ladies go to Elysia's room, I'm kind of surprised that nothing really changes in her room. It's still pink, and there are lots of cute plushies everywhere. I wonder how many she will have. Of course, Aeon made it in his free time, and with that, Elysia explains her short story of how she and Aeon met to Eden and Aponia, which they listen to as they have tea.
In other scenarios,
Meanwhile, Aeon...
He goes to another dome As his base is like a little Domes with 5 other little domes surrounded it He goes to his laboratory His mechanical legs gears up and switching up Wheels reveal on his mechanical legs And skates through the laboratory for easy run way for him to move where ever he needed As he skates around He then goes to his large computer screen And types arround the holographic keyboards And then sees his monitor seeing number and text with holographic images showing on its monitor He checks And grunts with a low mechanical voice As he presses enter As then... A large metal hatch opens to the large main dome Right at the center top Opened And reveals inside the large hatch is appeared to be a large rocket Very looking higher tech But how the hell does he able to have the time to make a rocket? Let alone be able to have the materials to do it? Well its simple Since honkai keeps recking up cities left and right Those small cities are like a treasure trove for him to grab metal and make and melt metal and other components to craft it And of course the time to build is extraordinarily long time However he didnt do it along With the red archives or RV on his hands a exact or even better of having the necessary resources and materials to build a rocket, he could have easily acquired them through trade or collaboration with other technologically advanced communities.knowledge beyond then the honkai technology from within this world But also knowledge from other realms and different franchises Of course he uses this red cube of mass library device to find a fast or atleast a more like a better way and efficient way to build the rocket faster Simple he uses the RV to create a blueprint A large scale one at that It was a taxing job but its was better than making the rocket from scratch So he made a large vehicle assembler inside the main dome He just only needs to make the parts which he already made automatic machines to build them And make some conveyor belts to transport them Aren't automation amazing Anyway. Then what does the previous era today have to offer? He presses a button as he mumbles, with a mechanical voice and a low rumble, "Alright, launch." In the previous era, building a rocket from scratch would have been a laborious task requiring extensive manual labor. However, with the help of automation and advanced technology, the engineer in the example is able to use an RV to create a blueprint for a rocket. By using automatic machines and conveyor belts, he can efficiently manufacture and assemble the rocket's parts within a large vehicle assembly facility. This streamlined process not only saves time but also ensures precision and accuracy in the construction of the rocket. With everything in place,
He then sees the rocket flow up, and then smoking emerges from the rocket as it slowly descends out of the large dome, and its tip is showing as it slows outside of the large dome and out of its center top hatch. A few minutes later, the rocket is now high above the sky. And then Aeon looks at the monitor, and he hums, understanding that everything is up to his expectations. He then sees the rocket on his monitor as it slowly launches into space. "I hope there is no honkai in space. Ugh... that would be a nightmare"
He then sees that it finally reaches out of the ozone layer and into space. As for why he needs to make a rocket in the first place, of course we will see. As he then sees, the rocket is now in stasis. He then hums in expectation and presses a few buttons and keyboards. "Alright, next step: rocket detach."
The rocket detaches and disassembles itself as it leaves a small cube with a few satellite dish antennas all over it. Aeon then presses a few more buttons, and he then sees that it is as he expected. "Alright, final step: extend the satellite."
With that he then finish As the satellite extends and spreads its wings thingy And then starts activating He than nodded in expectations as he looks at his monitor He then grabs a large tablet He then turns it on on his mechanical hands holding on to it And sees that its on He then fiddle with it and then sees that he has a live Radar feed within in his tablet It is then Aeon chuckles in a low mechanical voice as he expected It was a success A great one "Finally Honkai Radar is now complete, now with this... we can be able to atleast prevent honkai eruptions with this, able to detect the mass of honkai from afar and even collet the exact data of the measurement of how much honkai before a honkai eruption might occur" For example, Aeon, a skilled engineer after years left alone in the large thick forest had been working tirelessly to develop the Honkai Radar. With his mechanical hands, he carefully assembled the final components and activated the radar. As he accessed the live feed on his tablet, Aeon's excitement grew. The radar was successfully detecting and measuring the mass of honkai from a distance, providing crucial data that could help prevent honkai eruptions in the future.
Of course, there are also a few devices that this timeline has that tech resembles this but is never accurate, or at least not in range. It is the best he can use for future needs. Now he needs to make a few more, just in case. With that out of the way, he then hums as he walks out of the laboratory main dome and has to check on Elysia and her friends to see how they are doing. Elysia, Eden, and Aponia are some of the most important pieces to make the future bright. Not in a quick run, but in a long run. It is just the beginning.
Meanwhile, Elysia finishes talking to her two friends, "And that's how I met Uncle Aeon." Her friends look at her in awe, fascinated by the story she just shared. They can't believe that she is with a machine that takes care of her like a family. For a golden giant robot, it is quite gentle, despite her mean-looking appearance. The friends exchange curious glances, and Eden finally speaks up: "Elysia, you've always had the most adventurous life! I can't imagine what it must be like to have someone like that as a parent figure. It's almost like something out of a sci-fi movie." Aponia nods in agreement, her lifeless eyes sparkling very slightly with excitement. "I not knowledgable about technology but this takes it to a whole new level." With that out of the way, the trio continues their conversation.
After a few hours of conversation, the speakers turn on, and a low mechanical voice enters the speakers "Elysia, lunch is ready."
"Hai~" Elysia stands up, and she smiles at her friends. "Oh, you girls are going to love Uncle's cooking."
Eden, not scared after that story, stands up as Aponia follows. "Of course, but I must apologize for my reaction to your uncle, it's quite rude of me." Aponia nodded slightly. "I must too apologize." Elysia giggles playfully as she waves her hand. "Oh, don't worry, uncle doesn't mind; it's understandable, so? are you girls okay with that and everything I said?"
"Speechless is all I can word out from the whole ordeal, really." Eden smiled with a sweat drop as she felt bad still.
"Indeed, ah, I must thank him," Aponia says as Eden turns her head as she hums, "hm? What for?" Aponia looks at Eden and says, "Ah, right, he was the one who saved me."
Eden gasped slightly, with a hint of holding her gasp. "Oh, really? When?"
"Hmm, it all started in where I live." Aponia retells her story as Eden listens, and Elysia only smiles and does not say a word since it is all according to Aeon's plan.
She keeps talking and talking until she finishes her retold story, in which case Eden told her story about how Elysia and Eden herself were in the party and suddenly explosions happened, but for some unknown reasons nothing was there, and a miracle how the MOTH arrived very quickly. But Eden and Aponia both stop walking as they both realize Elysia is connected with Aeon. Elysia is right on time. Elysia is there when there is trouble. As if she knows, they both look at Elysia as she just smiles, "Hm? Yes?"
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Eden smiles and then puts her hand on her chest. "It was all according to some sort of plan, isn't it?" Elysia giggles. "Of course!" Aponia is now slowly realizing more and more. How Aeon saves her. How she is now scouted by Elysia. She looks at Elysia. "Why me? Why... her?" She pointed at Eden. Elysia casually shrugs. She turns away her head and just smiles. "Don't know."
"Eh?"
"I don't really know why or why specifically you 2 but..." She giggled ever so slightly. "He only does things that are honkai related over these nearly almost 20 years. The battle he faces alone." She then had flashbacks as Aeon planned out how to handle the city where Aponia lived and also another for Eden her best friend. As Aeon says that he is glad that Elysia friended someone important, of course it's a popular singer. But the way he says that is another thing. As if he sees the future, Elysia continues, "It's as if he knew from the beginning, who I was, who the MOTH are, even you two."
Eden listened intently to her bestie, with a look of slight curiosity, but for Aponia, hearing of how he knew as if he... saw the future... And change it? Something Aponia is always trying to break that gap, but not sure. "Could he be?"
There was a silence for a few moments. Elysia continued, "He always wanted for me to live peacefully... to be like... an ordinary cute girl." The trio all gave a slight giggle across the hallway to ease the tension.
"From the beginning, he has strived to fight against Honkai; he may not be human in appearance... But..." Elysia turns around and gives a small but caring soft smile. "No matter what, I trust him, he's my best uncle after all~"
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Eden and Aponia look at her smile, seeing not a playful, giggling one but a genuine, caring smile. And it's so... It was beautiful and heartwarming to witness. It radiates kindness and sincerity, instantly making the room feel lighter. Eden and Aponia can't help but be drawn towards her magnetic presence, feeling a sense of comfort and trust in her genuine nature. They realize that her captivating smile holds the power to brighten even their darkest days, an extraordinary quality that sets her apart from the rest.

Eden can only smile and say, "Ara Ely, that's a beautiful smile right there." Elysia perks up a little and giggles slightly, playing Gul again. "Hehe, eh? Really?"
"Indeed, how about another one?" Aponia smiles ever so slightly as she clasps her hands together as usual in a praying-like manner. Of course, she is a nun.
"Eh? Should I? Uwa, but it's embarrassing."
Elysia playfully blushes as she places her hands on her face, acting bashful and shy, as she grins in a playful manner, and a tongue sticks out ever so slightly.
"Too late, I got it."
"Eh?"
And so footsteps echo and shake, getting louder and bigger by the minute. As it then reveals the golden-plated body, a large golden robot, Aeon, reveals himself again in the hallways. Elysia pouted and stomps her cute little feet, making stomping noises. Approaching closer to the large Aeon and bashing him with two fists, wailing around on Aeon's leg, "Mou~! Uncle!"
The large golden robot, Aeon, lets out a low mechanical hearty laugh and stops as he puts his hands on his barely what's left of the golden hips. "Cameras are everywhere, young Ely. Never miss a moment of it." He stares at Eden and Aponia. "Although... What was that all about?"
Eden chuckled slightly as she looked up with a soft smile. "Nothing; it was all girls talking, sir Aeon."
"Sir Aeon?" He let out a chuckle. "Aeon shall suffice."
He then turns around and walks away. "Lunch will get cold. I hope to please Elysia's friends. Is that to your liking?"
Aponia smiles ever so slightly. "Of course, we heard from Ely that you're quite a chef."
"Oh, well, I can't say they are not skilled however, Elysia always loves them," Aeon spoke out.
"If it's Elysia, then it should be delicious." Eden perks up as she smiles. Aponia then looks up at Aeon as she walks along with the others, and to him, she says, "And thank you."
It was only three words, but Aeon understood them.
And he simply answers with a nod and says, "Non-taken." He then perks his head slightly and looks at Eden. "Ah, right. Do you have a cup?"
Eden raises his brow as she walks and answers, "Well, I do have a cup of glass, but umm..."
However, she was cut off by Aeon's low mechanical chuckle "I have a beautiful vineyard with delicious fine-aged wine."
Few minutes later...
In the vast, futuristic room bathed in ambient neon light, a colossal sci-fi-themed table stretched across the center, accommodating nearly 30 people. The table, adorned with sleek, metallic edges, showcased an impressive array of culinary delights. A symphony of aromas filled the air, enticing the senses.
At the center of the expansive table stood a gleaming tower of succulent roasted meats, the outer layer crackling with a perfect golden crispness. Surrounding it, a galaxy of side dishes beckoned — velvety mashed potatoes, drizzled with truffle-infused gravy, and vibrant arrays of steamed vegetables, their colors mirroring the hues of an forest landscape.
Flanking the main course, an armada of dishes created a mesmerizing visual feast. Platters of hand-rolled sushi gleamed with freshness, each piece a miniature work of art. Towering bowls of steaming ramen emitted tantalizing fragrances, while stir-fried noodles sizzled in a wok nearby.
In the far reaches of the table, a legion of desserts awaited their moment in the spotlight. Meticulously crafted pastries and cakes glistened with decadent glazes, their intricate designs capturing the imagination. A chocolate fountain stood proudly, inviting guests to dip an assortment of fruits and pastries into its velvety cascade as the trio starts eating with quite of etiquette but with also with a hunger from seeing how much food Aeon have cooked
"Elysia, this is amazing." Eden chewed the near-perfect stake in her mouth, savoring it slowly as she tasted the delicacy of it. It was delicious, especially the wine.
Aponia is a nun, but she herself can fathom the dishes that are served in front of her and can help but eat with elegance, yet in desperation of how tasteful they are.
As Elysia giggles at her friends, "I told you so~"
"Seconds?" Aeon is right in the kitchen. Wearing a large pink apron with a chef hat, he holds a large bowl inside the large kitchen with tons of oversize utensils and tools to cook for Aeon to use. And Elysia did not hesitate to raise her hand with her wide smile. "Yes, please!"
"Coming right up.".

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As everyone is having a great time and enjoying their meals, meanwhile, inside the laboratory of the main dome, the monitor shows the map of the earth, and its speakers start to beep. As it shows on the monitor, a red dot is expanding. As the red dot is showing to be the honkai spreading fast, in the location showing the monitor of where it expands its range and radiation, it's over 9,000 honkai levels. As the monitor keeps beeping again and again as it's located in the MOTH base,
Specifically near the jail cells, a whimpering girl is crying inside her cell.
??? Sakura nee-chan...

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