/ Book&Literature / HOTD : Reborn as Spring Prince
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Reincarnated as Baelon Targaryen, a modern U.S. minister uses his knowledge of the future to navigate the deadly politics of the Targaryen court. As the Dance of the Dragons looms, Baelon must alter history to secure his own survival and prevent the brutal civil war that threatens to destroy his family.
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Escribe una reseñaHey man ! I really REALLY love your fic.Why? Because of the way that you reinforce the power of the Iron Throne by modern technologies. Another good point are the motivations of the MC that are really good. The only downside that I see is that at the beginning of each chap the year is confusing like in chapter 5 we are in 68 AC but in chapter 6 we are in 64 AC. Otherwise keep cooking!
A good HOTD FanFiction I hope you continue this work of art. And what is the updat schedule like?
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💞💞💞💞💞 so far so so good. It was a nice and enjoyable reading for me. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Revelar spoilerPerfect it's a really good novel with few grammatical mistakes. msmmsmsmsmsmmsmsmsmsmmsmsmmsmmssmsmsmsmssmmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsms
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Good story, just really needs an editor. Lots of little mistakes, not unreadable just annoying.
The writing is subpar, there are so many redundancies that whole paragraphs of dialogues are basically reused on the same scene. Pacing is too rushed, it's supposed to be the time of peace. I like the MC, but the side characters acted like they're some Xianxia caricatures. Updates are slow. World Background is subpar. The whole plot revolves around fan conspiracies that is way too overreaching.
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Loved the start , the story has so much potential honestly keep it up author