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Honkai Star Rail: Developing Mobile Games on Xianzhou
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Lin Yu finds himself transported to the world of Honkai: Star Rail.
Equipped with a divine mobile game development system, his first project is creating "Honkai: Star Rail."
Soon, his game captures the attention of the entire universe.
As players reach the Cocolia boss battle, the song 'Wildfire' begins playing.
"Woah?! This is a turn-based game; how dare you make it so intense!"
"The moment this music kicked in, I felt like I was about to take down an Aeon!"
Progressing further, they encounter Dan Heng's sea-parting scene.
"I thought 'Wildfire' was intense enough, but there's even more fire here!"
"Dan Heng, still denying you're Imbibitor Lunae? Now you're a five-star limited character!"
Arriving at Penacony:
"Huh? Have you listened to 'WHITE NIGHT'?"
"Acheron's power has been tested - fellow gamers, feel free to pull for her!"
"Duke Inferno: Children, this isn't funny."
"Before experiencing the story: Aventurine? Just another profit-driven fraud! After the storyline: May the Mother Goddess thrice close her eyes upon thee..."
"What Aventurine?! He's clearly my unfortunate yet loyal bro!"
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A good and fun story. My main criticism is the translation is somewhat lacking- it's clearly performed by a machine, with little if any proofreading.
Good fic, with a decent plot. Weird chinese romance so don't expect much. Absolutely ruined by the translator though. Names are messed up, it's hard to tell if the audience is speaking or a character.
As much as I've liked to give this a five or four point five, it's clear that the 'translating' part is either lacking or made by an AI. Aside from that, the story has potential, evident from the fact that there's a proper reaction from the characters and their story being revealed throughout the universe. In any case, have a four.
The lack of proofreading is destroying this good story, it's an MTL so expect typos, spelling mistakes, etc. For the story itself is focusing on reaction of masses to the game (HSR) developed by MC and the consequences when everyone get 'spoiled' by the game story, effective changing the canon a bit like some fight that supposed to be longer became short, the nameless travelers know their future journey from the game so they prepared much more thoroughly. The MC given really short screen time like once of twenty chapter, there nothing much known about him honestly he transmigrated, get game maker system, upload the game, then buying teritorial creation like abilities from the system shop (can control anything within the supposed range) and some kind of dream walker skill, that basically all of it. He only has few interaction with other characters and also not actively seeking some actions, a boring MC honestly.
harem anyone?.............................................................................................................................................
Please update 2 chapter per day hehe ^^ the story is so good that I really want to read it more!!