His Bite (BOOK 1) -(Moved to a New Link)

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Steryl_Sykes

This book has a lot of potential, and I see it being published and read next to twilight. Hoping for more chapters! [img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]

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moneiii_chichi

ang ganda guys, ang ganda rin daw sabi ng kuya ko, saka mama ko, saka nina tito at tita ko, saka mga pinsan ko, oo nga maganda, charizz. Great storyline, first story to read ditey.

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Sailormoon_1980

WOW. Just WOW. Well thought. Mesmerizing. Intriguing. Captivating. It'll really get you hooked. Author is naturally good with words, she knows what she is talking about, so intelligent, story is solid, you can vividly imagine everything as you read, and how the characters were introduced— superb!💖🎉👏👏👏

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phoenixhyperion

The initial chapter was good. Endearing kind of good. I like how you describe your characters author! It's well presented and they gave me a picture of who they should be. I mean you gave them life and not some bland description of their actions. And I think that's really really nice. Good job there author! Keep up the good work!

Simple exquisite work here. Great grammar, storyline is amusing and very vivid. The writer really knows how to work through words. Please update more often, I am one of your avid fans now!

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TofSpades

The plot, writing style, characters, and grammars were all absolutely good! I saw some very few grammatic flaws but despite those the story still is amazing. I think I'll keep on reading and find out what more will happen. A wonderful story! Highly recommend.

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Steph_Magat

So for some unknown reasons my first review got deleted, grr. Anyway, I really love this novel! It is absolutely great and I highly recommend this to everyone that is a fan of the supernatural! Love it! [img=recommend]

I LOVED IT! This story is absolutely breath taking for a starting novel, I do hope that many people would bump into this cause this piece is gem. Story line and grammar is a 100%! Love it <3

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Ade_joy

very beautiful story. I love reading vampire stories and I have read a lot of them but this one is really amazing and unforgettable. We are waiting for more chapters, please keep writing.

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xAlexiax

Great start, really enjoyed reading. MC is likeable and humorous. The world background is creative and imaginative. The flow of the story is great, keep up the great work author!

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AmateurAuthor

This is an amazing starting novel! Nice story, great concept, and good potential! Even though it has on a few chapters, it has already hooked me up! Can't wait for more update. Keep up the good work author!

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Mel_Aniv

This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and skills accompanied with hard work, this will fare well in the future! Congrats for a job well done! BTW, I am from review swap.....

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Darkjokes

Great First chapter. Little to no grammatical errors. A novel about vampires is always am interesting one. I like how you have described things in detail as well. Looking forward for more chapters :)

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DaoistKPi7rD

Great grammar, storyline is still on the shadows, which is good for it keeps tHe readers hooked.[img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp] Will wait for next update!

I really loved how the author spilled each scenes, it showed how vivid it was and imagery was greatly portrayed. A must read indeed! Good luck!

Excellent writing skills, exhibited great grammar! I sure can't wait for this to be on the top list of undiscovered, definitely worth the read!

I love how you’ve woven secrets and romance together in your story. The tension between the characters is palpable, and each revelation adds depth to the plot. You’ve created a world that feels both familiar and mysterious.

Great book, hoping for more chapters, I had been waiting and nice to see it updated again and in the works. Love this and more to come please.

Great story, great concept, not your usual vampire story indeed. I hope there's more. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp] Keep up the great writing, Author