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Tells the story of a boy who longs for a hero figure in a book he is reading, one day the boy meets a mysterious man who comes suddenly when he is still engrossed in his favorite book.
The mysterious man asked the boy "Do you want to be a hero?" asked like that, and of course, the innocent boy answered enthusiastically. "YES!"
From there, the mysterious man gave something in the form of a ring with a symbol engraved Ω after giving the ring he spoke again "Promise me, that you will not give up on your wish" with eyes full of trust he stared at the innocent boy, as the boy's response was nodding while answering "Yes, heroes often experience difficulties but don't give up until the end!. and so do I!" eagerly answered.
The man smiled happily at the innocent boy's answer and then unconsciously disappeared when the innocent boy turned his eyes briefly in a different direction, like an illusion but real because the ring the man had given him was already attached to the boy's ring finger.
Furthermore, how the boy's story fulfills his childhood wish, stay tuned for his story.
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MC become peerage of sona, for more exp u can read in ch12/13 i already leave my reason there.
At first I was very excited about the premise since it has a lot of potential, potential that is unfortunately wasted. the MC feels empty, without interesting background or something that is easy to recognize. It can perfectly be replaced by another mc and the story would not lose anything. The card system is interesting and manages well at the beginning (only giving tests and nothing permanent), but the more chapters you advance you lose how interesting it is and should be the "cards". It's good to give it a try but with low expectations.
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its a great novel and would love to read more of it in the future. .............................................................................................
The stability of the output of chapters is good, but the impression spoils the quality of the letter. The plot leaves much to be desired. The personality of the characters has not been worked out, there is too sharp a change in character or nothing happens to the character with a strong depression from death, as if the main character did not even cover his own death.
keep up the good work im loving this story so far [img=update][img=recommend]
i don't understand why he must become devil. it cliche you know, many fanfic write like that too.
First horrible grammar. updates at least once a day so that's good. not sure where this story is headed or whats going on some of the time but its a fanfic so its easy to understand some things but again the grammar makes it hard to understand whats going on sometimes. I'm confused by the main character sometimes. At one point he went to Johns apartment. Who's john? and he compared himself to the Greek omega symbol. omega symbol means ending in biblical sense and Yohan means god is gracious. they don't mean god. or whatever he was going for. but overall if you can handle the grammar then its an ok story. I recommend giving this story a try but if its not for you I would understand.