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Harry Potter: For the Emperor(EN)
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A Harry Potter and Warhammer 40k fan Person dies and finds himself in Harry Potter's body after talking to God, he also received a Warhammer 40k system (RTS version).
With his system and knowledge of the canon, he will take over the power of Great Britain and then the entire Wizarding World, then the Muggle part, and unite everyone under his new Imperium of Man.
JK Rowling owns Harry Potter, I don't claim anything from the Warhammer Universe 40k either.
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Not enough overall design. He is going from one place to another at a flip of a dime, plus things are going super fast as in way too fast for the story. You could have extended the chapters by adding discription for what he will do and why instead of it being on a whim. Overall the story has a chance to be amazing but it just needs a lot of work.
Good job man I love the way you are designing your story hopefully you keep it up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ***********************************************