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I don't write English well, but it will get better in future drafts.
Plot: Harry James Potter watched the fire go out, almost effortlessly holding his cousin by the shoulders and not letting him rush into the burning house. He looked at the ashes and had no false hopes. I realized that my aunt and uncle were dead, and it was his fault for their deaths. Notes: One day I was sitting after vacation, thinking about continuing my unfinished work, when an IDEA popped into my head. Well, then, you know how it goes ...
** AHTUNG: This work is Balance! ** The work is written to mock canon and fanon, but at the same time to present favorite stamps of fanon and moments of canon in a new way. So there are a lot of them here, but I hope they will be interesting because of my idea of introducing a character who has almost never been written about. So, meet the friendship and fidelity of the brotherly bond between Harry Potter and Dudley Dursle! And may the Cousins turn the world upside down together!
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Hi all. It's time to tell you about this fanfic (project).
This is an original Harry Potter fanfic, and it's being written in Russian.
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I initially didn't pay attention to the text in English, as everything was supposed to be normal. But after a certain chapter, I paid attention to the text. I noticed that for some unknown reason the text was not divided at all and was not edited at all, although everything was edited originally.
I looked into the problem and found two reasons. The reasons were the translator and the webnovel website. The translator was cutting a lot of indentation between the texts. And the webnovel website was making the entire text joined together.
After discovering this, I started fixing it as best I could.
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Escribe una reseñawriting quality : 2* story : 5* character : 4* update : 4* background : 5* this story is amazing. the story branched out pretty far from the original timeline but still interesting if not, very interesting. there are of course some loopholes in the story, but the overall story development is great. it's a pretty fast paced story, right now the story is in it's 4th year in hogwarts meaning tridakota tournament or whatever it's name is. one of the major weakness of this fanfic is it's grammar. how bad? low-average MTL bad. don't know what that means? good luck reading this. lastly for the author, please keep writing such a good story, i like it very much[img=update][img=update][img=update]
1)Качество письма - 3,5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 4. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 3. 5)фон мира - 3,8. 6)Общая оценка - 4. 1) Quality of writing - 3,5 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 4. 4) Character design - 3 5) background of the world - 3,8. 6) Overall rating - 4.
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