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Grim Reaper in OPM
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Welcome to my first ever writing I mean literally, it is my first ever writing piece but yeah join our protagonist as he goes to the world of one punch man how do you suppose he will rise to the top? well, why don't you read it and stop reading this I mean is this more important than the massive blue button up there with the sign that says read?
haha just messing with you but seriously read it
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Story isnt good at all. The writing is painful to read and everything is just so forced....... the idea is good but every other thing about this story is awful sooooo unless this gets a rewrite or somehow it changes then rating will change but as of hiw the story is progressing? No chance
hello there, I'm just here to give you 4 stars because I liked your story idea. also because I really like One punch man fanfictions [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] anyway just a question is there gonna be any romance if so, could you plz make it with tornado.. anyway anyway keep up the good work
average. mc got beaten by tatsumaki, even after that he is not angry with her, even start liking her, , ,
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( Written in translator ) Okay, I was one foot behind in sending a review because of two reasons: 1 - The author is beginner and 2 - He gets angry very easily (according to the crude response he gave to a guy who gave a criticism telling the truth). But after reading chapter 3 (and the beginning of the 4) I am simply disappointed at a new level. I understand that the author may be new to writing, but he must have some experience in reading, no? These 2 chapters were extremely painful to read, with each new sentence I felt like gouging out my eyes. The way the protagonist thinks or even interacts with the other Characters is so 'cold' and without a 'feeling' that even frightens me. I am not here with the goal of making the Author sad or making him stop writing, I am sending this criticism so that he realizes his mistakes and at least tries to correct(What I find unlikely judging by his attitude to other criticisms). The story could have very good potential if it were tidied up and events stopped being so embarrassing. In the end, that’s it. I don’t have much to criticize so I’m finishing my humble critique here. And I strongly recommend not ruling out that criticism.
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