Godly Thoughts

LV 2

JiaZuozhe

This review is not a short little sentence giving five stars and saying a single sentence which is I liked it, nor is this a short review giving 3 stars say that it's not good and I expect better latter on. This is a real review giving genuine criticism something only a human can do not just some recycled line from a comment bot. The writing is good simply put it's good your writing level is already near-professional I haven't spotted any typos or major grammatical errors most of your sentence flow well and have no issues with them. Though your chapters are very sporadic and random, I'd recommend that if you write more than you need in a day you should stockpile. Them and wait a day or a few hours before reposting so it gets as much exposure on the updated list as possible so more people can see it. That way your schedule would be more organized afterward, and you would be able to get more views. The main content for this is mostly religious text but the way that it's communicated is mostly through the author's personal anecdotes which is what makes the story worth reading. Just religious text and content may make a book but it probably wouldn't be good the bible already exists what's the need to rehash it. The anecdotes in this story are good usually, anecdotes don't just stem from how interesting your life is but the context and what your willing to share. This story is pretty transparent you can see the reflection of the author in it which is what makes it good. You need reliability and humanity in a book and that's what makes it interesting what lets the reader sympathize and learn. I'm not religious and I'm not interested in becoming religious I was an Athesist turned agnostic. I'm not going to lie I scoffed at parts in the story because it doesn't fit in with my ideologies. But I read it anyway so I'm going to share a personal anecdote. When I was in school, Elementary or Preschool I can't quite remember I was talking to this kid he was talking about God and I told him I didn't believe in God he told me I was a sinner and he would never talk to me again, and he convinced a few other kids not to talk to me either I was pretty upset at the time, but after a few days I pretty much forgot about it I had my own friend group at the time and wasn't really affected. But after a month he came up to me and said he was sorry, he was in the wrong and he accepted that and apologized. Although I was young at the time I accepted it and moved on. The point of that is it doesn't matter if your religious or not all people are human beings and deserve as much respect if someone is an Atheist and in the wrong, they should apologize, same with Christians or any other religion, we're all people so don't go out of your way to antagonize people for their religion. You think you're just trying to persuade them into dropping their religion but you don't notice what it does to them afterward. As for whether or not this really belongs on Webnovel who can say it's not something that you would conventionally see on this website. But as for if it belongs or not that's up to you author.

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