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Capítulo 79: Mentor and Disciple

"Mister Isaac... Aren't you coming to the Opera House?" Freminet, who was beside Isaac, said as he poured boiling water onto a teacup.

"Why would I?" Isaac, wearing his usual attire of a black waistcoat and white dress shirt, scoffed lightly.

"Well... If I remember correctly, a film festival is being held there right now." Freminet said with his usual soft tone. "Since you, Lyney, and Lynette partook in a movie to be released there... I thought you would have gone to see its opening."

"That is true... But then what?" Isaac, cleaning a teacup, nodded his head before softly sighing. "Other than applause, I'd gain nothing else just by being there. I'll just be there for the sake of it."

"As such, I'd leave it to the capable Lady Furina." He continued speaking. "She's... more suited for the crowds than me. She can handle it well."

It was true. Isaac was never truly a person to show himself in front of so many people at once, and prefer to talk to a small group of people.

As such, he decided to leave everything to Furina. Furthermore, he also told her to promote his shop if she could.

"Well, moving on from that," Isaac then turned his head over to Freminet and smiled with satisfaction. "You're getting better and better at brewing, Freminet. Continue at this pace and I might just hire you."

"Well, I owe this to you, Mister Isaac." Freminet, who was also wearing the same attire as Isaac, lowered his head and muttered softly. "If you hadn't taught me... I wouldn't have picked up this hobby..."

"It's not all on me, y'know?" Isaac admired Freminet's humility but decided to not accept it. "You have a natural talent for remaining calm in tense situations. Having that in itself is a skill."

"I-Is that so..." Freminet replied, hanging his head low. Although he tried it, Isaac still managed to get a glimpse of his red-tinged face.

'What an honest kid.' Seeing Freminet's reaction, Isaac chuckled lightly to himself as he cast his sights on the cafe. 'Ever since I started mentoring him, he's been doing a great job following my steps.'

'I wonder... Would this disciple of mine who is still training one day surpass me in terms of brewing?' Looking at the quiet cafe he had built with a few rich customers, Isaac first entertained the thought before immediately shaking his head. 'Nah, no way.'

'Gotta be the best of the best and have a certain amount of quality to keep these loyal customers, after all.' Isaac's pride didn't allow him to let his disciple surpass him by any means. 'Right. I'm just...'

'...Passing on my technique, that's all.'

Or was it more appropriate to call it an inheritance?

Having finished his internal monologue, Isaac decided to change the subject. "Oh, by the way, I met your Father yesterday."

"Father...? Our Father?" Freminet, taken aback by Isaac's sudden words, looked at him with slightly widened eyes. "You... Met her?"

'Why are you looking at me as if I survived a cataclysmic disaster...' Maintaining his courteous smile, Isaac lightly nodded his head in agreement. "That's right. She was a fine fellow, and we got along well."

"A bit on the cold side, but we made it work." He added.

Upon hearing Isaac's description of Arlecchino, Freminet fell into a short moment of silence as if he were contemplating something. However, he soon shook his head.

"I'm glad that you and Father got on good terms." Lifting his head, he looked at Isaac. "Everyone in the Hearth agrees that Father is cold and strict... But deep down, we respect her."

"As such... It brings me joy that the two of you can get along." Freminet curled up a soft smile as he said this.

Seeing him smile, Isaac still couldn't get used to it. 'He's been smiling a lot ever since I've taken him under my wing... It feels odd, but as long as he's happy and comfortable— it is what it is.'

The fact that Freminet was comfortable enough to smile around Isaac shows that he had established a haven for Freminet in his cafe. As someone who wants nothing more than the peaceful minds of his customers, this just gives Isaac a reason to be happy for them.

"Yeah? Then I'll make sure to treat her as best as I can." He said as his gaze looked back at him. "I'm sure she and I would... Have some wonderful meetings in the future."

As Isaac said this, the thought of his plan resurfaced in his mind. Remembering his grand plan, he looked at Freminet and recalled the faces of Lyney and Lynette.

A small, enigmatic smile then formed on his lips as he crossed his arms. "Well, that's enough of that. Let's get back to your training. For your next brew... Let's try another espresso."

"Oh, alright." Approaching Isaac, Freminet stood beside him and watched the coffee machine.

The day continued to move as Isaac taught Freminet his skills, while also using him as a staff in the cafe.

Since Lumine was still busy dealing with the Liyue crisis, Freminet was the only person Isaac could think of who could work for him.

Of course, he was still paying him. Isaac might be greedy, but he wasn't a monster. Professionals have standards.

And just like that, the afternoon passed by, setting the sun on the horizon.

---

"Bye Mister Isaac." Freminet, who had now changed back to his usual casual attire, waved goodbye to Isaac from the door.

"Walk home safe." Isaac, who was wiping a table with a cloth, waved back at him.

"Yes." Freminet nodded his head before turning around and going through the door, leaving the cafe.

Ding~

Hearing the bell chime, Isaac stood up straight and looked at the door with languid eyes. "He did well today. I should consider hiring him for real..."

After making this throwaway comment, Isaac scoffed at himself as if finding it amusing. "Well... Arlecchino might perceive it differently, so there's that. Hah..."

Shaking his head, he shook off those thoughts out of his mind and focused on cleaning the glass table.

Isaac cleaned each table diligently, not letting a single speck of anything dirty go untouched.

A clean cafe was a good cafe, after all. Moreover, Isaac didn't want to be put on some kind of government list for poorly hygienic establishments, so there's that too.

Ding~

Just then, the bell of his door chimed, indicating a new customer had arrived.

"Welcome—"

Isaac was just about to turn and greet the customer when suddenly, he was jumped on.

"Puh—" Getting grabbed by the neck, Isaac wanted to react in self-defense, when he noticed the person that jumped him. "Huh? Wait..."

"Furina?"

Hugging him by the neck, Furina, who jumped to Isaac after entering the cafe, looked at him with a bright smile and glistening eyes.

"You fool! You couldn't believe what happened today!" She said as her hands never left his neck. "Everyone loved the movie! All the judges gave good criticism and even wanted to buy the rights to publish it!"

"The tale of the hunter whose past hunts him in his nightmares, but finds solace in the embrace of his new family— such a simple plot yet so powerful!" Furina took one hand off from Isaac and imitated what seemed like one of the judges. Throughout her story, the look of pride never left her face. "It's a phenomenal story, they said!"

"Yeah? Well, that just means you did a great job writing the script and directing everything." Still locked on to Furina, Isaac smiled lightly as he praised her for her work. "Hats off to the director."

"Oh come on now, Isaac, there's no need to be humble." Upon hearing Isaac's reply, Furina rolled her eyes as she leaned in closer to him. "You also played a crucial role in this. Another judge states that your acting was immaculate and even wanted to get your information to scout you."

'That's to be expected. Acting is a must for a fool, after all.' Isaac lampooned to himself. He then shook his head and replied to Furina. "That might be so, but everyone who worked in the movie also did their best."

"For example... Lyney and Lynette?" He mentioned the two members of the Hearth.

"Oh, those two? Well, you're right. I also found their acting to be excellent— perhaps if they're properly taught, they even become great actors in the future." Furina, at the mention of the two, nodded her head as she praised them. "Yes, I should keep an eye out for those two."

"Alright. Well then..." After letting Furina speak, Isaac then looked at her with his warm amber eyes and chuckled lightly. "Care to get off now?"

Upon hearing this, Furina realized that she had been hugging Isaac for a while now. However, instead of immediately leaving, she instead did something else.

"Make me." She declared boldly, staring eye-to-eye with Isaac directly in front of her.

'Oh?' Realizing what Furina meant and wanted, Isaac raised an eyebrow at first before shaking his head with a smile. "My... how bold."

After saying this, Isaac leaned his face closer while also lowering his upper body to reach Furina.

- Chu

In this quiet cafe of Isaac, the two shared a long deep kiss, sharing a moment of silence and sweetness. In the midst of this, Furina's ahoge swayed a bit.

Finally, after a few moments, they parted, and only then did Furina let go of Isaac.

"Hehe, after a long day of dealing with all those people, a good recharge is all I needed." Placing her hands behind her, Furina smiled cheekily at Isaac as she breathed heavily.

Isaac, whose face also had a tinge of red, tried to hide his face while trying to change the subject. "Since you're here... Do you want to have dinner? I'm planning to have Chicken Confit tonight."

"Hah... As much as I want to, there are still a lot of things I have to do back at Palais Mermonia. Apparently, Neuvillette also wants to tell me something important." Furina replied with a soft sigh as the look of dejection was present on her face.

"Well, that's fine." Although it wasn't on Isaac's plan to share a dinner tonight, he still felt a bit of shame that Furina wasn't able to accompany him.

"Remember to eat well later though." He reminded her as he remembered her bad eating habits. "And no sugars."

"What?! Not even a slice of cake?" Upon hearing Isaac, Furina immediately reacted and protested against it. "Why not?!"

"It's bad for you." Isaac crossed his arms as he rolled his eyes while speaking solemnly.

"How about a crème brûlée?" Furina then tried to bargain with an alternative, but it was to no avail.

"...No." He answered, not accepting any other excuses.

"Aww..." Faced with Isaac's restrictions, Furina's head hung low as she lamented over this matter.

A moment later, however, she lifted her head and looked at him with puffed-up cheeks. "Fine then! You must think that I can't go a single day without sugar... But mark my words that I, Furina, have complete self-control!"

"Do it, not say it." Isaac reminded her as he smiled softly, finding her rant amusing.

"Hmph, fine." Turning around, Furina started walking over to the door. "Well, that's all I have to say. I'll be going now."

"Would you be dropping by tomorrow?" Isaac, watching her walk away, asked curiously.

"I don't know... I have many appointments and can't seem to fit a time for myself these days..." Furina, on the other hand, answered as she stopped walking. She then shook her head. "So no, I don't think I can."

"Well, that's a shame." Sighing, Isaac also shook his head. He then looked at her back and smiled with melancholy.

"Well, in case I don't see you,"

"Good morning, good afternoon, and good night."

Upon hearing Isaac, Furina stopped walking and turned around, only to see Isaac with a soft smile and languid eyes staring back at her.

"That's... A sweet thing to say." She said as she continued to look back at him. A moment later, she smiled warmly at him. "Thank you, Isaac."

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"No problem." He nodded his head, not letting his eyes leave her.

Ding~

And just like that, Furina left, leaving Isaac by himself in his cafe once more, with nothing but the empty cups in the kitchen as his company.

"Alright... Time to finish this." After staring at the door for a few minutes, Isaac finally returned to cleaning the cafe.

It took a while, but he finally finished cleaning, and soon, it was closing time. He pulled the blinders down and locked the doors, and cooked himself a delicious dinner.

After doing all of these, Isaac was finally ready to sleep. He headed upstairs and was about to lay on his bed when a notification suddenly appeared in front of him.

[Notice.]

[The quest 'Good Hunter' has been completed.]

[The rewards shall now be granted.]

[The host shall be forced to sleep to complete the process.]

"Huh—" Before Isaac could even process what the system said, his eyelids suddenly felt heavy, and his body also felt the same.

Before Isaac knew it, he had already fallen asleep.

And thus starts the transformation of not only his cafe but also his mind.


next chapter

Capítulo 80: Isaac loves upgrades

- Bang!

The sound of gunshots rang through Isaac's ear as his eyes locked on to the decaying body of what seemed like the corrupted body of a human.

Looking coldly at the previously sane person moments ago before he transformed into a monster resembling a werewolf, Isaac frowned.

He looked at his hands and saw that he was holding two things— one was a gigantic scythe whose sharpness could easily slash into the flesh of its victims, and another was a modified Blunderbuss gun.

- Awoo!

- Bang!

On this night covered by the crimson veil of the moon, all Isaac heard were the cries of the beasts as other Hunters following him hunted them down with their Trick Weapons and Guns.

Not a single word escaped the mouths of each hunter present in this nightly hunt— only the gruesome sound of their weapons ripping off bloody flesh from the monsters echoed throughout the streets of the decaying city of Yharnam.

Isaac then looked up, only to see the crimson-red moon shining down on him, providing a bloody backdrop for their hunt.

"When will this end, Laurence?" Isaac's mouth moved on its own without his control, uttering a sentence as if lamenting. "These beasts... Are never-ending."

"Trust the process, Gehrman." Beside Isaac, a man clad in white garb spoke calmly as he watched the hunters take down monsters. "I will soon... make contact with 'Flora', and offer a proposal to them that will put an end to this horrible nightmare."

"Until then, continue hunting, Gehrman." The man named Laurence said with a solemn voice as he looked at Isaac. "I believe we will achieve our goal through this. Have faith."

After saying this, Laurence turned his back and walked away, disappearing from Isaac's view.

The latter, on the other hand, looked at the dark city in front of him, which had horrible monsters hiding in the dark, awaiting their next victim.

Holding tightly to his scythe and gun, Isaac swung his scythe first before resting it on top of his left shoulder. With his gun in his right hand, he paused for a moment before jumping down the rooftop which he was at.

With nothing but strong conviction and responsibility to hunt the monsters of the night, Isaac silently muttered a sentence to himself.

"A Hunter... Must Hunt."

As Isaac reached the bottom of the building he was at, the darkness beneath him slowly engulfed him, and once he arrived at the bottom, the silhouettes of various werewolf monsters looked at him.

However, even at the sight of this, Isaac's expression never changed. Instead, fierceness appeared in his eyes as he changed postures. He then whispered to himself:

"What a terrible Nightmare..."

After saying this, Isaac dived straight into the beasts. Before he could witness it though, his vision suddenly cracked as if a glass was shattered.

Before Isaac could even start ripping the flesh from the beasts, his vision suddenly darkened as the cracks grew.

---

[Quest reward implementation completed.]

[Cafe interior has been upgraded.]

[Memories of Yharnam's First Hunter (1/4) successfully implanted.]

[Your skill, Evernight, grew more compatible with you.]

"..." Isaac, who was lying down on his bed, looked at the system notification floating in front of him. His eyes, slightly moist and tired, looked at the notifications silently before he let out a sigh. "That... wasn't a pleasant feeling..."

"My head... hurts..."

'I for sure didn't dream of that scene...' Remembering what had happened earlier, Isaac put his hand over his forehead as he tried to rationalize his chaotic thoughts. 'That was definitely Gehrman's memories during the Scourge of the Beasts...'

His mind still in turmoil, Isaac slowly lifted himself from the bed and sat upright.

He then looked at his hand, opened it, and closed it as if he was testing something. He then closed his eyes. 'This is reality.'

"That memory felt a bit too real... I could still even recall the stench of the blood in the air." Isaac sighed softly as he let his arm down. He then stared up at the ceiling. "..."

For a few minutes, Isaac just laid down his bed and didn't do anything. However, he soon let out a low groan as if releasing his frustration.

"Well... Since I gained a portion of Gehrman's memories, I should have also gained a portion of his experience, right?" Wanting to test this theory, Isaac plans to go outside for a bit.

However, just as he was about to leave his bed, his sense of balance became disoriented due to still adapting from the memory given by the system. 'Ah sh—'

He was about to fall from the side of his bed when suddenly, his body reflexively reacted fast and his hand stopped his fall.

"What the... Huh?" Isaac was just about to wonder about his body's sudden movement when he realized another matter. "Uhh...?"

Isaac looked at his room and noticed something off. He then immediately got the answer—

He was upside down. More specifically, his one hand singlehandedly lifted his whole body while he stayed still.

"...erm..." Looking down— or rather— up, Isaac saw his whole body balance itself perfectly still. Faced with this, a wry smile appeared on his face. "That's... New..."

Controlling his body, Isaac slowly took control of his muscles and, slowly, he put himself down on the floor. After doing this, he stood up straight and pondered over this matter.

"Well... That should answer my question. I did have good reflexes, but they were never that extreme." He commented. "I should... Take this moment to get familiar with my body again..."

After Isaac said this, he sat down on his bed and started meditating while doing small tasks like manually breathing and moving his fingers and toes, gradually regaining full control of his body.

After what seemed like minutes, Isaac finally felt settled and opened his eyes.

"That should do it." He smirked as he moved his fingers. He then continued to mutter to himself, "By the looks of it, my body seems to have developed an instinct to protect itself... Albeit extremely."

"Not only that, but I also seem to have grasped some bits of knowledge about guns and fighting styles..." He added.

"I bet I'd do well with a scythe or something." He joked to himself, letting out a small chuckle.

Looking out the window in his room, Isaac saw the rays of sunlight going through the glass, bathing his room with light.

He then turned his head and looked at the clock. "Hm, Eight in the morning... I slept too much."

Realizing this, Isaac stood up and looked around his room for a bit before deciding to clean himself. "I should go take a shower first. After that, it's another day for the café."

After muttering this, Isaac did just that

---

After taking a bath, Isaac decided that it was time to have a quick breakfast. He went downstairs and opened the door to the kitchen.

"...oh?" However, when he entered, he immediately noticed something different. "This... When did this place get bigger?"

The kitchen was now twice as big as it previously was. Moreover, there are also new tools and equipment present that weren't there before.

"This must be the upgrade the system mentioned..." Isaac said to himself as he went around and inspected the expanded kitchen. "There weren't any changes upstairs... So I'm guessing the upgrade only happened here."

After checking the kitchen, Isaac once more opened a door leading to the counter of the cafe.

When he opened the door, it was as he had expected. Upon seeing the changes, a small gasp escaped his mouth. "Woah..."

The cafe was now bigger, and could now accommodate more tables. Just like the kitchen, it had grown twice as wide inside. Of course, Isaac's counter also expanded, with new equipment appearing like two more brewing machines.

"Since it was only an interior upgrade, I'm guessing the cafe outside still looks the same..." Thinking of this, a troubled expression appeared on Isaac's face. "The customers would undoubtedly notice the changes..."

Thinking over this matter, Isaac pondered for a few moments before letting out a small sigh.

"Ah, whatever— I'll just tell them that I got a mysterious sigil from someone from Liyue." Isaac scratched the back of his head. "That should be a good reason."

Liyue's Adepti were known to create artificial spaces as their abodes and can alter the space inside them by either expanding or shrinking them.

As such, an excuse like a random sigil from Liyue was enough for Isaac to use as an excuse.

Moving on from this matter, Isaac set his eyes on the new cafe. He then smiled with vigor. "Alright... Let's start a new day."

After saying this, Isaac started cleaning up the newly expanded cafe, while also placing down new tables and chairs from the system's store function.

He made sure to keep the cafe's comfortable atmosphere as cozy as possible by adding warm lighting. It was basically just Isaac's normal cafe but with more tables now.

Finally, after cleaning up and renovating the new cafe, he walked over to the door and flipped the sign open.

Afterward, he returned to his counter and started preparing his morning coffee.

"I should try my new Gehrman abilities later in the woods... That would be fun." Isaac, who was pouring hot water in his cup, muttered to himself. "Hah... This reward is so useful. With this, my defense has gone up once more."

Another layer of defense to preserve his life was always welcomed by Isaac. Previously, he wasn't good at hand-to-hand combat, but now, he was positive that he could take on any normal person that he crossed paths with under normal circumstances.

Ding~

Just then, the bell of the door chimed, indicating that a new customer had appeared.

"Welcome." Turning his head, Isaac looked at his customer. However, he soon immediately recognized who it was. "Oh my, if it isn't Miss Navia!"

"Good morning, Mademoiselle." Isaac said with a courteous smile, welcoming her. "You're early today... And you don't seem to be accompanied by your usual entourage?"

"That's right, Silver and Melus are currently unaware of my location." Navia, who was wearing a casual outfit and a pair of sunglasses, nodded her head. She then took off her glasses, revealing her beautiful blue eyes. "However, I believe it won't be long before they track me down."

"Hm? Did you sneak out or something? Or did you do something that would make you want to avoid them?" Isaac, curious about her current situation, asked. He then decided to humorously tease her. "Gosh, I hope you didn't do anything illegal, mademoiselle. Oh, to be an accomplice..."

"Haha, that's a nice joke, Monsieur Isaac." Finding Isaac's sarcastic acting funny, Navia chuckled. She then walked over to the counter with a soft smile. "But unfortunately, I didn't do anything of sorts. I merely wanted to act independently for today."

"Hm? Why's that?" Upon hearing her reason, Isaac raised an eyebrow.

Navia, who was looking at Isaac, opened her mouth and was about to say something when she suddenly stopped. "Well..."

She then paused for a moment and entered what seemed like a moment of contemplation.

Isaac didn't interrupt her and merely remained stationary, while also making his cup of coffee.

After a few moments, however, Navia finally made up her mind and spoke. "Say, Isaac, you were Lady Furina's assistant for a time, right?"

"Indeed." Isaac softly smiled as he agreed to her question. He then continued, boasting. "I was quite good at it. My side job of being a private investigator helped me a lot."

"An investigator..." Upon hearing this, Navia's mind churned as her eyes blinked twice before she smiled brightly. "That's it... This could work!"

She then placed both of her hands on the counter and locked eyes with Isaac. She then smiled at him. "Monsieur Isaac, I want to hire you!"

'Why am I getting déjà vu...' Isaac looked back at Navia with a wry smile and quickly responded. "Well... What do you need me for, exactly?"

"Will you promise you won't tell anyone?" She said as she continued to have a staring contest with Isaac. "Not even with Lady Furina?"

"I promise." Isaac, not wanting to lose in what seemed like a staring contest, nodded his head. "Confidentiality is also the name of the game to us private investigators."

"Yeah? Alright..." Receiving Isaac's reply, Navia looked around for a bit before leaning in closer to him and whispering, "Actually, the reason I wanted to be independent today is because..."

"I believe I found the Masked Clown." She said, with conviction present in her eyes. "As well as... The painting of Lady Furina he stole."

"..." Isaac, upon hearing this, maintained his curious look. However, deep down, he was chuckling to himself. 'Oh... Right.'

'I did leave out clues for that painting... To think that it was Navia who found it first.' Isaac smirked internally. Finding this development entertaining, he continued to ponder. 'Well, since I've already been invited...'

'It wouldn't hurt to observe her as she figured out the puzzle, right?'

And so starts the partnership of the president of the Spina Di Rosula and the owner of a humble cafe.

* * *

A/N:

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