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King! The Strongest Hero in One Punch Man. Only...he's a fake. Hot air. My boi weak as dirt.
BUUT, What happens when someone else takes the reins? The New King immediately seeks Power with no reservations.
He wants to put some respect on his name. But more than that, he just wants to survive Boros, Garou and Saitama if he ever decides to destroy the world.
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From what i can tell this is just a copy paste of the king takes god checkmate fic over at fanfiction by acasualtrilby
The concept is generic, everyone likes a good old gamer system. It could have been a gem. But man could you edit your work after using chat GPT? Made everything boring with long paragraphs and wording that try to sound complicated but actually made it worse. A few points that could be improved. I thought I would get to read a funny scene since i like King cause his situation is always funny as hell. King engine is completely forgotten along with his ridiculous luck. Early time skip is fine but its filled with useless fights and system stats Too many powers with wide variety can be overwherlming since you probably wont even use half of them in the future chapters. Writing quality 3 stars Story development 3 character design 2 stars Anyway if it improves in the future I'll be back and change my review.