Game of Thrones and Domination System

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aleksandar2003

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_EMI_

English is my first language and I almost forgot how to speak while reading this fanfic. That's how bad the writing quality is. However, if you look past that, then this story itself has a lot of potential. You can see that the author is really trying to express his ideas as best as he can, and I appreciate that.

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Ashmodai

This story seems to be translated by someone who doesn't speak English. If you want to laugh about words and sentences like: Aragorn split America in half. (in the next sentence his name was waragorn) Assein Creed, Sparat or Assen Creed and more. Then this is for you. If you want to read a story then this is unreadable. Why someone would translate into a language he doesn't speak is the biggest question here. Also if you are a leader you understand the story it's not really worth the effort since it's pretty bad itself.

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Eggcellent

Too difficult to read in my opinion. I mean, there has to be some line that shall not be crossed in terms of grammar, right? Whatever, give it a try but don't say I didn't warn you

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Kane_Stone

This reminds me when I was young and couldn't write properly. I don't know why you write this in English when you could have written it in your language. it's Killing my brain cells.

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ShuYme

Very bad, lots of grammar mistakes and the structuring is also subpar.

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Lamafdg

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Infinit

I would like a representation based on the map of Westeros of where his house is and its location and the size of the territory, just for me to map and locate myself better before the wars start.

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DaoistyPKqmt

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Dragonfenixx

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Infinit

great story i recommend for those who like game of thrones fanfic

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Dragonfenixx

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Sumayya_Riaz

So it was my first time reading a story in this genre. I liked the introduction very much. This story was amazing. Keep it up, author! Good luck, with the next chapters! it was a marvellous web novel.👍

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HaoShu

Though there is improvement needed in the language the author can definitely do that, and its god there is such a system where I can summon an army for me to fight and use as well

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Infinit

Great story i hope you release regular chapters, and i would like to know how many chapters would be released per week or the release days, although i expect it to be 1 chapter per day kkkk.

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MonkeyDAnish

I believe this story to be one of the best out there and I don’t care for the mistakes. I hope you continue with this but slow down a little It will be great if you make him king of game of thrones world then move to middle earth start this great empire

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0DarkWolf0

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Justsome_nobody

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Carlos_Balbizan

it looks like the writing of a child who obviously hasn't read any other novels or fanfics, both from the lines and from the thoughts, really... I'm losing brains reading this (but the background is good, so the author is a kid with a good one imagination. if he could study his language better it would be a very good story)

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Queen_Karina

If you can look past the grammer then its a great story. And also some people might think that he is weak because his only power is to summon soldiers, but he is very good at fighting already (way better than anyone in westeros)