Flirting with Death

LV 3

BrewingFantasies

[Reviewed on: 12-09-22] [Reading status; 1 chapter] [Reviewer: aysel inara] -*-*-*-*- REMARKS: - Before i start praising heavily, i want to clarify that usually i don't review books without reading at least 3 chapters. - But upon seeing the opening of this book, till reaching the middle of the chapter i had this strange itch to review it asap. Haha! - Now firstly, have my bow for crafting out such amazing dialogues. I could see the expressions of characters while speaking. - Could hear those dialogues in my head, which is hard to create. And truthfully, i am working on that phase. - There were almost 3-4 characters who spoke but most authors fail there to distinguish them. Another praise here from my side. I didn't confuse anyone at all. - It felt like visualizing the movie called 'Charlie's angels' for a moment. The vibe is so strong in a good way. - The mysterious element was kept throughout and the chapter 1 itself along with the synopsis were great hooks. - In my opinion, the only place where you lack is the building of background. The room, the place, where was action happening? etc - Now, last thing, solely as a reader, i think the title should be tweaked a bit. Maybe "Flirting with the death called Mr Grey?" Or anything similar which could indicate the male character. - Will be reading this ahead, soon.

LV 4

CoffeePrincess

I really like mystery novels, and this is one of them.... I immediately got interested... I need more update... the author should work hard... Don't make your readers wait for too long... Good job author... 👍continue your writing journey

LV 2

Little_feelings

OMG! I got hooked up on the Blurb. Looks like this is going to be full of suspense, and action. This story structure had been the one I had been looking for and now it's here. Just make use of your punctuation marks well and update already.

LV 11

Abdulkarim_Latifat

Ooops I smell a lot of mysteries in this book...which gat me instantly interested in it. please bring the updates on. I'm obsessed already. and I would love to see how it goes with the so-called master Dominic 😂😂✌️

LV 1

Bookreads

Nice write up with mysteries. Judging from the few first chapters I read, I can hopefully tell that this book will be packed full of mystery and that's great. However, you seem to have an unstable plot, somethings aren't clear yet but it's just my opinion and it's fine. Wish you good luck on your work.

LV 4

_Carolina_writes_

Your story is very interesting. I must say I am hooked. And the synopsis was the most interesting things **wink**. I can smell mysteriousness , suspense and romance (灬º‿º灬)♡. Looking forward to seeing how our Marinnena deal with dominac grey (´∩｡• ᵕ •｡∩`) . Looking forward to seeing their chemistry. And will read your book till the end. Good Luck Author!