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Fey in the Dungeon [DanMachi]

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Waking up in Orario as a dark fey can be disorienting to anyone but also being a Dragonborn? Our MC will surely turn heads with her uniqueness, but how will Orario react to someone like her. Read as the story of how a winged girl takes the city by storm.


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This novel is purely written for my enjoyment, I get nothing from writing it.

There may be some inconsistencies coming up, I will try to explain everything as best as I could without a massive info dump but please keep in mind I am still human and will make mistakes.

I have no editor besides myself. I will try and keep things clear and readable.

English is not my first language so some spelling or manners of speech may be different than what is shown in either the Anime or manga, again I am only human.

I will try be as consistent as possible with chapter release as possible but please understand that I also enjoy other fan-fics and novels as well as draw inspiration from different sources.

Please leave ideas in the comments, differing points of view is always welcome.

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Please note the cover picture does not belong to me, the amazing art goes to Denahelmi and should they wish for me to remove it I will.

The first few chapter’s text is a bit squashed together but please bear with me, it is my first novel and it does get better. I won’t change it because in a way it shows either the betterment or worsening of my works and it’s a way for me to see how I’ve grown as a author.

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That_Lazy_Guy

good. hope you don't drop this like many authors tend to do. I personally really enjoyed it. her name gets spelt wrong in some parts. but not much of a problem. keep up the good work

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Super_Surprised231

Can’t post without giving myself stars so might as well be five 🤷‍♂️ Only wanted to comment that it’ nice being on the other side of the story and writing ahead that I know what’s coming and everyone else has to wait for the one chapter a day release 😜😌

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Router_1937

I really like it so far. The grammar is nice, and I like the skyrim system. Keep up the good work, would be a real shame if this got dropped.

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Daoist5SUG9A

I like the gradual disclosure of characters and plot twists. It would be great to see the story continue. Author, thanks for the work ............... ..................... . ....... .....…....

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Narvin

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Interestingly written. I look forward to continuing. Special thanks to the author ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Goldenswiftreader

While there are some grammatical issues, the interactions of the oc and the rest of the characters come through clearly. It is an interesting combination used for the mc’s system/power set, am looking forward to seeing the results. Thank you.

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ThorLong

At chapter 17 so far and I need to say that is is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Some elements are lacking but add an explorationary feeling that is not an infodump, good good good. I am looking forward to reading more.

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Alejandro_Tapia

Unnecessarily long paragraphs, little use of periods. I couldn't stand reading after he revealed his reincarnation and the plot objects, but the main problem that made me abandon the story was the text structure and dialogue arrangement.

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CyberBlancaX

The story is extremely good although a bit of the grammar is a bit off and now that updates have stopped for an indefinite period of time, I cannot truly give a 5 star review. Still, I hope you can continue as I love this story already and keep up the great work! Have a nice day or night wherever you are!

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