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Eye of Aragos: The Darkness comes
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[ ... In a momentous evening, Christopher Salvatore, a compassionate person who often feels manipulated by others, experiences a profound change when he encounters a mysterious woman. In a twist of fate, this unexpected meeting grants Christopher supernatural abilities as a vampire, forever altering the trajectory of his life.
Not knowing what powers he owns, he later discovers that there is an individual residing within his very soul. The individual is known as Ardelean, a servant of The Darkness, the embodiment of Evil, who possesses an intense thirst for revenge upon his previous love partner, The Light. After Christopher is chosen by Ardelean to become his host, The Darkness is determined to possess Christopher's body and unleash its vengeance upon the Universe.
If such an event occurs, his life will be lost.
However... Is that truly going to happen? Or Christopher breaks free from his puppet strings and emerges as an indomitable Vampire, striking fear into the hearts of all in the Universe ... ]
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! Warning: Narcissism, Manipulation, and other Toxic behaviors are present in the later development of this book together with R-18 Chapters !
! Reader is advised !
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[ Cover is mine. All covers are made by myself or at least edited if they are done by someone else. If an Author wants, I'll change it but only if you have proof the cover is yours :) ]
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[ This story is fiction and any connection to the RW is mere coincidence... ]
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Very well written. I really liked how the characters are written and expressed as well as the flow of the story itself. Not to mention that the grammar mistakes are almost non-existent! Really well written!
First of all - hats off to your consistency and hard work. The fact that you released so many chapters prove your commitment to your story, which really inspires me a lot. While I was reading your story, I could feel the passion and care that you put into it. The demonic style of the main character while fighting was amazing to read. The plot progression is great, and the scenes are all well thought out. I personally feel that you could describe things in a better manner. For instance, while describing the main character's body, instead of him saying that he had six-pack abs, you could have used a narrator to convey the same, because it just felt weird for a person to say, 'I have muscles in the right place'. Just my opinion. All in all, this was a wonderful read and it excites me in more ways than one :). I feel that this story will work very well in an animated medium, so I hope that it gets an animation too. Keep up the great work! Cheers!
The story seems nice and interesting with good lengthy chapters! I do love a good vampire book :D this pretty much tops the cake! Please keep up the good work author!
Embrace the darkness, vampire enthusiasts! This story is a captivating and enthralling tale that had me hooked from the very first few chapters. I couldn't put it down! I wholeheartedly endorse it. You'd be doing yourself a disservice to let this remarkable story slip through your grasp. Don't miss out on such an incredible narrative!
Vampire lovers Arise!!! The story is really good and intriguing that I read first few chapters in one go! Highly recommended! It would be your fault to miss such a good story!
I really liked this book. It's interesting and fun to read. The writing quality is good and no grammar mistakes as far as I read. The flow is maintained very well. Overall, it's a well written novel and I definitely recommend it. Keep up the good work author
Good start, grammar is good, haven't seen any mistakes so far. It's nice to see you making a comeback and continuing this instead of abandoning like others. Looking forward to more. Keep up the good work.
Liked so far as story is good and it is written quite well , like the character so far ,looking forward to read more.
Story flow is goodWord background is well done and character with story development is well thought.This story recieves from me a sygil od approvement 🖖
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It's definitely an interesting story. The writing quality is nice with very little grammar problems. The personality of the characters are portrayed very well in every chapter. The world built for the story is wonderful as well. Keep working on the book and aim for more readers.
hahahaha...What can I say!! Satisfying in a different way? I will enjoy this sinful reading... The story is so entertaining!!! This is what every man desires!!! The story dives deep inside our human desires and bring them out... Amazing storytelling, My friend!!
I remember reading the first few chapters, thinking, "Wow, this is good. There's no way it could get better than this"... Well I was wrong. Author please keep going!
love the book, the grammar flows well and the structure is nice. keep it up author I recommend you change your cover from time to time and update the synopsis it doesn't do this story justice
5 stars!, As a reader I really enjoyed reading your book, If it gets animated, I'd probably watch it no matter what! The way express the story is quite interesting to me! Keep up the good work!All the best...
Your novel is excellent, characterized by well-crafted pacing and a passionately crafted story. and I eagerly await what lies ahead.
First off, I really like that it follows correct grammar! It may seem like an obvious thing in a story, but it really makes a lot of difference. The words flow and it's easy to read. I have no idea how it will turn out but you're definitely off to a great start! Keep it up. :)
To be honest your good❤️no grammatical errors at all.. I'm reading your book so I can correct myself in writing. Overall I recommend it ❤️
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