Evolution System in High School of The Dead

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LastInkBender

As the author I will shamelessly give myself 5 stars. Fight me! Now, being serious, I believe that compared to many Fanfictions with high reviews, I deserve that much. But if I am being critical of myself, I think Story Development and Character Design might be up for four stars.

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The_Young_Flash

So far the story is cringy at best with the head pats and everything... It is well written and all but the character's personality and attitude are just off... The transition between emotional states is shitty so the author needs to find a balance. I can tell you are trying to write something complete, but you are constantly shifting between complete scenes and semi-complete scenes which makes the story hard to read. This is a nice read if you are bored and have patience, but it is not something you would read for fun or even to kill time because the author seems confused about the mood of this fanfic.

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Fellbane

Its off to a really great start and the quality of writing is extremely high. The characters also feel real, especially the MC. The characters speech is also easy to understand and not jumbled and it is easy to know who is talking and when.

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Nameless_Godless

Keep forgetting to do these for stories. Anyways to keep it simple and spoiler free. Overall a really solid story. The Mc actually feels like a person without being annoying to read like most human feeling Mc's are. Life basically beat the dude down with a baseball bat then called its friends who also beat him and instead of laying there and crying about it the Mc got up and limped away. Still Hurt but moving past it.

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Harem_fan

THIS WAS GREAT TILL......... I would have five stared this due to being an amazing story, but I cant stand R-18s that are copy pasted from the book...[How to treat a woman like trash]! I get mad when the story is so frig-en good then bam face full of sadist lovemaking from a virgin..note to author some men respect women and take offense to shifty treatment...anyway put the smut tag on next time.

LV 5

Psan

The novel is very good, the grammar is above average with just minion issues. Now i just posted this to encourage people to read it, all the NTR crap and such are FALSE. MC become lovers with the girls and Kouta (the gun otaku) found 2 girls that are also gun Otaku, one from another class that died in the original and the police girl.

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Eggscapeplan

This is one of the fanfics I absolutely love! The author is taking half of the chapter to make an authors note. The romance is a little bit cringey but hey balance is necessary. I thinks he does a good job of making the MC not a coward, but not also making him ALPHA MALE EVERY WOMAN SQUIRT HER PANTS AT HIS SIGHT! AND EVERY MALE IS JUST A BUG TO HIM AND HE WILL STEAL ALL GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GIRLSSSSS YEAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. <---- I hate those types of MC's. I like a MC with a heart and a brain, Like Hashimoto Ryo! Overal you get a big fat A+ for this one! (**: Don't let those people from GhostyZ's shitty GoD oF sEx ScEnEs fanfiction bother you. God I hate that guy. Also will he travel to the USA for the walking dead?(game and show). VEERRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYY NICCCCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Marsh_Melow

Let me rename this ................................................................................ ABSOLUTE CHAD In Highschool Of The Dead

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Edge_Lord357

incredible fanfiction friends, please don't stop halfway😊😊😊😊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏🏼👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🏼👏👏👏👏👏🏼👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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I_am_inevitable

Very nice!!

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Park_Dohyun

Writing quality 5/5 Almost no grammar and spelling mistakes and the few I see are almost unnoticeable. Great job! Stability of updates 5/5 It seems you update around twice a day sometimes more so that's great. Thank you for giving us chapters often! Story development 4.5/5 The only reason this isn't five is that I'm not a huge fan of harem fanfictions. I am fine with it but most authors aren't great at making it feel real. Then again they are in a zombie apocalypse so some things would be different. Character design 4/5 Nothing unique but still great! He isn't beta so immediate plus. Also, enjoy his personality, knows when to be ruthless but can still be caring. World background 5/5 This is fanfiction and inside an anime world so just going to give you this one. All in all a great read. Please don't drop or. I see way too many good fanfictions just getting abandoned on this site.

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Mirio_kun

Awesome fic. Just don't drop it. Keep it up. And even though the first part supposed to be a simple prolonge it was amazing. Don't drop if you are out of ideas. If that happens take time but don't drop the fic.

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FOX_ZRS

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GabbyTheKindSeraph

HAHHAHHAHA, I have ascended anfd took the eternal place of the 69 review! Btw great story!Btw great story!Btw great story!Btw great story!Btw great story!Btw great story!

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Baneofthedragon

Okay, first of all, the mc's background was a really good one, and loved the way you kinda described in detail without using too much chapters and pointing out the important points of his character. Next, the system isn't complex and not the girl who has a personality type so thats a plus in my books. Third, his interaction with the girls is not bad, not the best but not the worst either. Fourth, there could be a little more interaction or action from the other's though since it's a little vague from the other characters point of view in regards to the mc, but the novel hasn't been long so there's still room for that. And finally, the world background is really interesting especially since it feels like a mashup of different novels i've read. Good job.

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Moon_Lord_

Really amazing work you do here. Its plot is just great, and the protagonist is practically perfect............................................................

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Tupan

This fanfic so far is amazing. Give it a chance and read it!👌 The writing is excellent and the author gives a lot of detail to abilities and explanations. So far the relationships seem real, considering it is an apocalypse and people are more vulnerable and easily influenced, but the harem is getting too big. I like the way the author is interacting with the readers, especially the photos he is posting, and the updates are frequent which is great. I just didn’t like the prologue, thought it was too dramatic but whatever. Overall it is an amazing novel!🤘

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FOX_ZRS

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Aaronic02

well, I don't actually know how to do a review but I'd say what I liked from this fanfic. The MC is smart and cold-blooded at times, I especially liked what he did to shidou and his gang. and his choices and decisions were great. he wasn't a horny dude that tried to save every girl. and id tell you guys this right now, he has an invisible aura that he doesn't know if that makes girl notices his manliness, coolness, intelligence, fighting skills, leading skills, cold-bloodedness(is that a word), and godlike muscles. and with all that he became a perfect man in a zombie world in their eyes. and the author actually showed the struggle of the girls not like the other fanfic where the people just say this world is gone and he's a strong man so he will have many girls bullsht. and the mc was struggling as well since he was born in a world where polygamy was frowned upon but yeah the author told us the reasons and sht. and most amazing about this HOTD fanfic is not fcking every girl every time of the day or night.

LV 4

Enigmation

Reviewed as of chp62: WQ: Some typos here and there but overall grammar is solid and it's readable SD: Plotwise, it's written well and kept interesting. It focuses more on character interactions with each other and the state of the world. The author goes on his own plot after the manga ends and I have to say he did a good job of it. I was pleasantly surprised to find myself invested in the plot. Unfortunately it doesn't get far as author has dropped the story. CD: A few rough patches in the MC's thoughts and actions but overall he's very consistent with the type of personality he gave his mc. Author actually writes more than just a few sentences about the side chars as well. Story is often told from the MC's perspective which is fine and great though I believed the author tried to experiment with side char POVs as well which would have been interesting to read. While I don't particularly care if there's a harem or not, this one was done much better than some others out there. It could have been helped with more of their POVs instead of just MC's but it's good enough. I really like the characters, they're well written and fleshed out just enough to give them more "character" :P US: From the release dates of the chps, it was pretty consistent. Unfortunately it might have burned the author out :( WB: Overall, slightly better than average world building. But not much could be explored since it ended prematurely. Still could have been good though considering his pace. Overall, a good read. In fact it would rank higher than most ff I've read, not the best but certainly above average. I recommend giving it a read but be warned the ff has been dropped and author is writing on royalroad now. Still, it's good enough to warrant a read :)