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Ending the Immortal Era!

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From the oldest recorded annals of history, till the present day immortals and cultivators have ruled over all of creation with an unbreakable grasp!

They pillage...They steal...They destroy...They hold no compassion, no understanding whatsoever for us mortals! Because, aren't we less than insects in their eyes?

But no longer shall this reality continue to exist, for I will take away and burn this era of the immortals to the ground to achieve true peace.

Yao Tian: Destroying the world is easy, even a talentless weakling can do it.


This is a small project that I am working on in order to improve my English writing skills. There are still loads of grammar mistakes and some typos that I missed so please be patient with me. Also I am opened to critisim or even ideas of how you think I can improve my story. Thank you for reading!

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NimtheWriter

Hi! Honest shameless self review here! This is a personal small project that I'm working on to improve my English writing skills for my studies. The story is a bit slow towards the beginning but I promise you it'll get exiting very soon. As for characters I'm just recently getting the hand of writing them so I'll improve with time. Also I'll try to upload long chapters as I personally am not a fan of short chapters but I'll never go above 2000 words! Old chapters will be continually reworked on in order to make them at least readable lol. So if you have time please don't hesitate to point out the mistakes, I'll correct them later on.

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magalis1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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