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After crossing the first day, Hu Xiaoxiao beat the Emperor.
On the second day of travelling, Hu Xiaoxiao beat up the Imperial Consort.
The third day after crossing …
"The empress has left the palace!"
However, before he could walk out of the city gate, Hu Xiaoxiao was carried back by a man.
The extraordinarily handsome emperor was so angry that he laughed sinisterly, "You haven't even given birth to your son yet, where do you want to run to?"
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Story is good Fl is cool The only thing is if someone can beta it , it will be way more fun It not only has grammatical errors but it gets a bit confusing sometimes because of mistakes written
badly translated to the point of being unreadable. not just the usual hmpronoun mistakes but name swaps so you are confused about who is saying what
The plot looks fun. But the switching back and forth between he and she for the same character, multiple times per chapter, right from the beginning. nope. Just can’t read it. Pity. And since I can’t read it. I can’t tell how the plot, world background, or anything else is. Not with the writing how it is. Sorry.
It's a pity that there aren't many reviews for this novel. I think this one is an original and the writers' first language isn't English and of course, there aren't funds for editors just yet. Novel Review: This one is a good read. The Fl's character is really good and I really like how it was made. Even though there are minor grammatical errors I do believe this one has potential. Reviews can either make or break a writer so please be kinder. *just saying* I have read a lot of historical novels and this really piqued my interest. This is really a refreshing read. You guys should try it.
Very bad grammar. It makes difficult to follow the plot. If it is a translation, should get a better one. If it’s an attempt to write in English, should learn the basics. He/him/his= referring to a male She/her/hers= referring to a female. As for reviewing, it will be unfair to count with it because I couldn’t get pass the third chapter. But I will go with what I got so far.
The story is interesting. But it feels incomplete in development and does not flow. So the end is not really satisfing and the reader wonders what happened.
Wanted to read this book. However stop myself as there so many negative reviews on the grammar. I feel WEBNOVEL shld set a rule on the novels writings as WE the readers have to PAY to read it!!!!! It’s not fair for us to pay for all the errors made.
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the grammatical errors spoil the reading ..it's horrible ...you can't even understand the story
The idea was great 👍. But the execution was terrible 😕 The translation made it hard to read and even harder to understand. Hopefully there will be a revision.
such hard work, come on guys, can editing really be that hard? MTL is free on line. why should I pay AND do it myself
Seriously needs proofreading, there are so many mistakes that it's hard to understand sometimes. Plot starts very silly and over the top.
There is no other reviews here. Is this ang original novel here in webnovel? If not, can I get the link of the raw? pls?....................
The story is so good but the gramatical errors and typo mistakes makes it hard to read to the point i don't understand anything🤦♀️
Some chapters don’t make sense the storyline could’ve been better but keep it up 👍
It’s really sad that the translation is so bad that it’s really hard to read because this is a book with so much potential.
I can't pay attention to fully investing in the story because while I am used to some bad grammar or incorrect pronouns, about 80% of them are he. so you have the ML and MC in a scene, but it's all he, he, he. Or MC is thinking and it is all he. At first I thought that the MC was a guy that had transmigrated into a woman because of how much he was used. If it was just a couple, you could still follow the flow of the story, but it's so often that I had to read each sentence a couple times to check who was talking. disappointing because I can see the potential.
It’s too hard to read, the original plot it great but because of the wrong pronouns and wrong use of words, it makes this book terribly difficult to read and understand. So i have to stop reading this book, which is really a pity.