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DxD: A Blonde Boy
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After defeating Kaguya, Naruto finds himself in a new dimension with humans that had the inability to use chakra. As the last of his kind, with all nine Bijuus and with both yin and yang seal, Naruto blames himself for the death of his comrades. Wil he find people to call his precious ones in this supernatural world? Or will he fall to despair? Not very good at summary
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I really like the story and the premise and I want to keep reading but the author can not keep a plot line in place. It jumps all over the place with random flashbacks that are not labeled and ending chapters and the next chapter has nothing to do with the previous chapter and nothing tieing them together.
I honestly really enjoyed this fanfic during the earlier chapters, but after a certain point there start to be so many flashbacks and time skips that it becomes incoherent to read. if the flashbacks where consistent it would be different but during a single chapter I think it flashed back to 3 different time periods making it almost impossible to keep up.
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if it has naruto it has 5 stars..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i actually like the idea of naruto tossed there in dxd and all but you nerfed him too much, way too much that his level seems to drop back when he start training with jiraya. ironic how you did him that bad while giving him all those cheats like the rinnegan and the yin yang seal, all the six paths powered and all biju yet he still find it hard to fight a bunch of nobodies from the hero faction. and worse he almost lost in speed battle, like really bro? it would be much interesting if you didn't nerfed him and made him a softie that sona and rias can bark on him as they want. or if madara was there in his stead . overall i enjoyed the first 20 ch until the fight with that persus guy when he nearly kill naruto and ^surprised^ him with speed lol. best luck for your next work bro keep trying.
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