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Ye Tian travels through Douluo. His only relative his sister works as a maid in the Spirit Palace, and they only communicates with letters. After five years, she finally returns home.
Calculating the time, the Spirit Palace will be finished within three years, so Ye Tian mustered up his courage and said to his sister:
"Sister, Bibi Dong will die within three years, and the Spirit Palace will perish. When the time comes, the world will be in chaos. Stay here and don't go out!"
My sister was taken aback for a moment, then nodded in agreement.
Ye Tian: "This sister is weird!"
After some time, the beautiful sister smiled casually:
"Stop pretending, let's have a showdown, I am Bibi Dong
This is not my story and is written by a Chinese Author. I came across this fanfic a few days ago and it was one of the few decent Douluo fanfics out there but it was really annoying to translate every page into English.
Machine Translation is annoying and translating every single page takes too much time to read. So I thought of translating this novel into English. I hope you like it.
It is not a perfect translation as I am not a native English speaker myself, but it is somewhat bearable.
For those who want to read the original, the link is
https://m.uuks.org/b/51389/
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So, I'm finally writing a review for this fanfic and of course I'm gonna give it five stars. And now onto this fanfic I'm currently translating .The story is completly same as the original fanfic albeit with few changes as some unnecessary sentences are removed and some new added and also removing some unnecessary scenes . As I'm just translating that fanfic, So, the story will be same as the Chinese version. Note: Mild Spoilers below. But I didn't really like its ending as Mc left too many girls which would've been his Bo Saixi, Gu Yuena and Xiao Wu. Well for Xiao Wu I would say I don't want to add a girl in the harem which had slept with another man for six years. Which seems hypocritical for someone having many women and in modern age these things are common but so what , this is a fanfic. I mean people read fanfics for a reason To see the Character they love get a happy ending, Some people wants to see all the girl original mc neglected joining the harem, or to see original main character getting humiliated as his girls gets stolen by the mc or something like that, Some people wants mc to forge a new path different from the main character. Many also wants all the beautiful girls in the original novel in Mc's harem. It is called Fanfiction for a point I guess. All in all People wants something from a fanfiction which they didn't like in the original. So, Yes I will change the story in the end according to my wish and add others in the harem. As for translation . Translation is decent well decent according to me, Although it doesn't have perfect grammar and have a bunch of translation errors but atleast its much better than the Google translator. Besides that I don't really wanna add Xiao Wu in the harem but I'll just create a poll maybe before the ending to ask you guys if you want to see her in harem or not.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Translate till the end!! DON'T DROP !!!!!!!!!! If you do I'll rate it again. Five stars for now
A good translation of a decent Douluo Fanfic although I hope you change the later part of the story as the ending was so underwhelming. Add Gu yuena to harem with Bo Saixi.
I'm going to give 5 stars for the effort of translating this instead of using copy and paste and MTL.
I love a good Douluo Fanfic! Moreso if I can read it! There are many good fanfic that I can't enjoy because I can't read those MTLs. I really appreciate you translators!😉😆
5 stars for you my good sir don't drop and we'll be good hate when I am interested in a story, and they drop it although I'm sure everyone understands my pain moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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5 stars to support the translator, I already read the whole story, hopefully the translator can modify the ending, the original author did not do a good job 😅😅
I like this one 👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍👍🏼👍🏼👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏾👍🏾👍🏼👍🏻👍🏾😌👍🏾👍🏾👍🏼♋😂 👍👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼♋😂👍🏾👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻
Mc has no flirting skill , there is no warm love scene, MC is like a emotionless guy tells girl "marry me" like talking. No real trust or love between girls. No feelings bw them. Just a scheming idiot.
this is a great fan fiction i really enjoyed it it is very interesting and enjoying story . thanks for the book
abandoned in the end...sad...............................................................................................................................
Another quality FanFiction abandoned without an ending, nowadays it is increasingly difficult to see an ending for our favorite FanFictions, or if there is an ending, it is improvised and dull!
Please translate the complete story and don't leave us hanging like other translators . Both of these fanfics are good this other and BTTH one as that also has a story of him travelling to Douluo. I haven't read it after that as it is too time consuming to translate every chapter in English before reading. So, I hope you continue both of these.