Douluo Dalu: The Myth of the Haotian Douluo (English Version)

Interesting but there is some grammar mistakes and some of the sentences doesn't make sense, Like this, im gonna copy paste it here. "Tang Bufans thoughts wandered across the sky, an indescribable smile appeared at the corner of his mouth, a master of the first generation of Earth, the innate power of the pinnacle. At first, under the bombardment of the sixth thunder wave from the sky, he had already turned to ashes and lost consciousness." Im so confused because what is a master of the first generation of earth? Is he a young master? The innate power of the pinnacle can be explained as he reached pinnacle of Martial Arts on Earth, but im confused by the 6th thunder wave part. Like did he get hit by lightning when he was practicing? Or that in his past life which is supposed to be normal Earth, that there is a hidden cultivation world and he is undergoing his Lightning Tribulation which explains the 6th thunderwave. And people just doesnt turn to dust when theyre stuck by Lightning, unless it really is supernatural Lightning.

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