Douluo Dalu: Origins

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THELASTWORD

Well, I am here to tell you a little bit about what you can and cannot expect from this story. First, I would like to ask for the benefit of the doubt. At some points, this story will seem to be going in a specific direction, but the truth is that it is not. So I hope you will take it easy and not simply give up on the story because of things that haven't happened and may not happen. You can't start a story at its climax. You need to develop certain parts of the story before the climax happens. It is like weekends. Weekends are great, but only if you work or study during the week. Otherwise, it is meaningless. The text is like this. I need a beginning for the climax to make sense. And with that, I hope you will try to read at least until chapter 7 before thinking about the possible problem that there is in the previous chapters. But speaking directly of the text, I have a plan ready for this story, so the text shouldn't have problems regarding lack of planning, loss of direction, etc. Also, because of this, I have an expected number of chapters for this text. Something between 200 and 400 if things goes well. On the other hand, although this is fan-fic, this story takes place in the past, before the protagonists of Douluo Dalu were born. So you can expect that the focus will really be on the other characters of Tang Hao's generation. And of course, I am not the original author, so I can't be sure of the estimates I have made for this text. Thus, I hope you understand the levels and ages of the canonical characters. Anyway, if you have any questions or suggestions, just comment here or in the chapters.

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T0birama_Uchiha

i feel like no one has put an actual review on the book. i tought the book was kinda trash honestly. this dude got madaras memories and he if a fool. went back to the school where someone wanted to kill him. got abducted by slave traders. an idiot overall

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Kurosis

An unexpected gem. Unlike others this doesn’t follow the story everything is original. Looking forward to future chapters….well that’s if it isn’t dropped

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YoungSnipe

One of the best Douluo Dalu (Soul land) fanfic i've found out of the hundreds i've read. I just hope the author doesn't just end up dropping the book like so many others have, because it would be such a pity to lose such a great Soul land fanfic.

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Ezzaldien_s

One of the best one of the best One of the best one of the best One of the best one of the best One of the best one of the best One of the best one of the best

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Fallencrows

I wonder if the author has dropped this. If you did,why T^T If not,get back to writing fEeD UssssSSss I NeEd CoNTenTTtttttTttTt $&&&@$”$”@(&& Fo@)@@&d P@&l&&)s

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LifelessMan

Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work

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Felegranco

I like. But I don't understand if this is a harem? I hope the chapters will come out more often, but I do not press. The name Orange Amaterasu evokes an unpleasant feeling(Somehow not original).

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HotWetDream

won't spoil too much. READ THIS! 👍[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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vagavegta368

very very good ....................................................................................................................................

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Joao_Pedro_5293

Muito bom, tem muito potencial, mas gostaria que explicasses melhor a aparência dos outros dois anéis espirituais do madara, uma imagem seria ainda melhor, e poderias dizer de que tipo de besta espiritual vieram os dois aneis dele (que agora são de mais de 2000 anos).

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TabooExistence

alright just started out hope its not dropped. . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . ... .. .. . . . ., . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. .

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Malikim

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