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Author this story is fast-paced and unique, from switching between past and present tense, like it's literally my kind of thing! I'm sure anyone who reads it will enjoy it(well, maybe except for some light-hearted people lol) I like how the story is developing and your writing is great! Good job and keep writing!
this book is literally the pinnacle of writing. the way the author writes is mysterious and pulls you in. please update more!! would recommend fr 😍
Great story so far. Very well written and enjoying the pace and build up. Can’t wait to read more.
Really like the story. Everything feels smooth and not too many info dump or anything like that. Short and crisp. The plot thickens as the story moves along. We will see how it will turn out (Read up till Chap 6). P.s I think title didn't match the story yet.
Such great writing quality, man I need to get to this level. I enjoyed this read and will continue to read each chapter, it’s caught my attention!
The description caught my eye. I've read it all, and I like it. It is so cool. It is a interesting story. I can't wait to read more. I recommend it.
The writing style is excellent, I love the pace of the story. It raises many questions that want to make you read more. I am looking forward to the role of the new girl and the Mc
Your writing is very good (3 Chapters review). Now I am really interested in knowing how the story will progress.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's a very interesting story from the three chapters that I've read. The setting of the story is quite good. The only critique I would give is that I don't like stories that switch between past and present tense. It makes the sentences a bit wordy. Other than that, it's quite good.
Your story is thought out and clear. No problems on this end main protag has a good amount of depth for how long we've met them. The story has questions that have been answered while leaving room for theories. Not a lot about backgrounds but this is still very young. Over all 4.5/ out of five
I just would like to mention that main lead isn’t as mentally stable as he seems and i do have plans on making the story more darker in the future. anyways, if you wanna ask questions, do it here