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Divine Locket

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Autor: AutumnBreeze

4.31 (15 valoraciones)

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A locket filled with mysterious origins.
A young boy with a sorry fate.
A world with countless opportunities accompanied by dangers.
Fate moves in mysterious ways to intervene in the matters they wish to change.
How far can one reach before finally settling into history?

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Brezer
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Not really crazy about the story and it doesn't make a lot of sense. The MC finds a locket with a inner dimension at age 3. The dimension has a house a pond and planting plots for herbs and stuff. The house is full of training materials that all he needs to do is put them to his head and inject qui to learn them and the pond has body rejuvenate liquid and the dimension has a time dilation and heavy gravity.. So he gets this at 3 and hardly uses it at all besides learning basic stuff and using the pond to bathe in.. He meets a guy fried at 7 that is sexually attracted to him... He meets a female friend shortly after that makes the homosexual friend jealous and then they end up going to the same school also he is at the same skill level as his friend even though he has had this heaven defying locket. After all this the MC should be an op badass and not even on the same level as his new friends. The MC idea an excuse that he didn't want to get to far ahead of them which makes no sense at all. The author is always dropping hints about how harsh the world is and it's a dog eat dog world then the MC doesn't use the locket to his advantage to get stronger faster. He got the locket at 3 so at 7 he should be shooting out lightning and jumping over tall buildings not being on the same level as regular kids of the same age. Also once you get to the academy his Dragon bloodline is awakened and he still has trouble in the duels, which the blood makes him stronger and faster then everyone else but he still is mediocre and has trouble... I mean if the author wanted to write a happy go lucky let's be friends and be on the same level that's cool but don't build the MC up to have so many advantages and not use them. Also who writes about a 7 year old having homosexual fealings and asking his dad about them and his dad's tells him o it's ok you just want to protect him and as the MC he would know something isn't right when the guy and girl fight for his attention and the guy is wanting to play with him in bed since he heard his mom and dad do that..... Come on, any father would have freaked out and either got the mom involved or set the kid straight that that stuff is not right 😀 . Anyway that's my take on it. The author needs to decide if he wants the MC to be op and if not take all the awesome stuff away that he doesn't take advantage of to the fullest. You can't have a mediocre MC like this and all the advantages he has, it makes no sense.

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6yr
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AutumnBreeze

I wrote this work. If the author didn’t believe his own book was the most interesting and well-crafted book, then why would you guys bother to read it. Get right into it and read that block of text for stage 4 cancer!

6yr
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Natsu423

Give me more yaoiiiiiiiiiiiiii :3 BL s2 Love you AutumnBreeze ...........................................................................................

6yr
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javva
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judge me all you want. but i am leaving. at first character seems lack of soul. and sunddenly it become BL/yaoi gay or whatever you call. it give me goosebump

6yr
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MelHar

Great story! There’re still some little problems with typho, but it could be fix by editing 😊. What actually bothering me is the way MC call people around him. Since the story background has the eastern flavor to it, I expected the MC to call older people around him with a more ‘polite way’ of address the way eastern culture do it, for example Uncle Xiao, Aunty Mei, etc

6yr
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Riverway

The start did have some potential but lost it easily, MC reincarnated into cultivation world with his memories, randomly finds a golden ticket to cultivation at age 3 (which was truly lame no explanation). MC made a potential brother-in-arms who could have been the powerful rival in his tooth, but then MC was made gay. The story is a Disappointment.

5yr
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Enesclk

a potentially high novel. progressing more slowly than other novels. The fact that the main character acts like a real child also gives the novel better qualities

6yr
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bluerat
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The best novel out here. The best. The best. The best. AutumnBreeze is best. The true best. Best of best. Beeeeeeeeest. I am the best. Autummmmmmmmmn Breeeeeeeeeeeze for life.

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Zamo80
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Please please update want to know what will happened next. Interesting storyline nd felt in love with the characters. Update please, need to know what will happened to Hua fei nd her scandalous deeds

5yr
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Zamo80
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You know a good book is hard to put down while reading it. That's what I'm experiencing with this one and I'm enjoying every chapter cause you want to know what will happen next.

5yr
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koala28
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Seems interesting

6yr
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TrueDawn

The MC's name is Ye Xiu. Even though it's a worse version of him, he's still op as heck. Oh, did I say that Ye Qiu is his father? Instead of sleeping you'll be meditation

6yr
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Elicius

After seeing AhmadShahzad and Webzayne review this novel I had to join in on this fun and amazing novel. Since my seniors think so highly of it how could I thing in any other way about it. Great work with nice long chapters. This book is the cream de la cream of WN. Autumn Breezes for life. He is the best. The best I tell you. Like senior AhmadShahzad, he is the Best too. Both are the best you can believe me.

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Webzayne

A really good novel, written with really well-formulated words, about a really well drawn out character, by a really well-drawn individual. Best work I've seen. 10/10 ~Ign No, but really, great work. I hope to see more in the future.

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