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After clawing his way out from hell, Deon entered a land known as the spirit continent.
In the spirit continent, beings known as shamans ruled supreme.
By becoming a shaman and gaining the ability to cultivate one's own strength with the use of spirits, it was possible for an individual to transcend the limits of humanity.
As Deon stepped out into this fantastical new land, he began his journey towards greatness...
He, who had fought his way out from the depths of hell, had no qualms about casting his humanity aside and stepping onto the demonic path in his pursuit of absolute strength.
This is the story of a villain.
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Escribe una reseñaAuthor here! This is my 2nd novel, it's also my entry into the WSA 2022 competition on webnovel. This novel follows Deon as he explores the spirit continent and pursues strength as a shaman via the demonic path. If you like unapologetic evil/villainous/amoral main characters, or if you want to read about a shaman cultivation story (cultivation with spirits, essentially), then this is the novel for you! Going to go ahead and give my novel a 5 star rating again ;)
Giving 5 stars just cuz of the villain tag. Hopefully Mc is actually evil. I've read your other fic and was extremely disappointed as I was expecting a evil Mc. But loved the writing and the idea behind that. Can't wait to read this, I've actually read a few chapters but stopped as I hate waiting for updates. Will read when more chapters are there
Final Score: 3.6 (Good, But Needs Improvement) DISCLAIMERS: The rating given is my own opinion of the novel at this time. And may be subject to change later. The rating given is relative to the material on this site. Meaning a 4 or 5 given on Webnovel is not a 4 or 5 given on Amazon. ----------------------------- "A Story With Potential" Pay attention to this line, as it will be the focus of my review. There is no doubt that a compelling story of an evil protagonist is at the heart of this novel. 1. No romance? Check 2. Benefit Oriented MC? Check 3. Disregards Morality? Check 4. Decent Grammar? Check (This is required for any worthwhile story) 5. Excellent Release Rate? Check 6.MC Is Not A Waste? Check So, most enjoyers of the "evil MC's" genre will enjoy this story, and give this novel 5 stars. I will not give it this luxury. Despite its excellent qualities, this story has some flaws. It is my firm belief that this story will become one of the exemplars of this genre if the author resolves these flaws. 1. There are no meaningful conflicts that the MC has to overcome. What do I mean by this? After all, the MC fights and kills others for power, is in a war situation, and his ranks quickly grow. These things are all conflicts and should satisfy readers. However there is one thing that all these conflicts miss. There is no conflict in this story that forces the MC to struggle and prove his worth to the readers. There are no conflicts, which proves the worth of the MC's character and shows us what makes him so special. There are no conflicts in this story that makes the readers say "Deon is exemplary". All conflicts in this story serve no meaningful purpose. Seeing a MC trump the average person isn't interesting. Seeing him win battles isn't impactful. And Seeing him gain strength isn't as enjoyable as it could be. Basically there are no events that occur in this story that prove the worth of the protagonist's character. 2. Readers feel no meaningful connection to the protagonist. In normal stories the MC has righteous character traits that most people find admirable and can easily relate to. Evil protagonists stories do not have this luxury. The MC's are not exemplars of morality and sacrifice others for their own benefits. There are less things that readers can relate to, meaning it's more difficult for readers to form a bond with an evil MC. However, it doesn't mean it can't be done. The authors of this niche genre must take action early in order to foster that bond more easily. Ways to do this are providing the readers with the MC's thoughts, emotions, reactions and opinions on various things that happen through out his journey. Great evil MC's are usually philosophical. They provide the readers with a genuine understanding of the MC's thought processes and why he chooses to do an action. Evil MC's must prove why their philosophy or way of thinking is the most effective. The readers must have some way to feel a connection to a character they would never want to encounter in real life. Ultimately the goal is to foster an understanding between the reader and the protagonist. ----------------------- Minor suggestions: More dialogue would help (although finding the right balance may prove difficult). ----------------------------- Despite everything I said earlier. I still like this novel. I enjoy reading about Deon, and I still want to know more about the world he's placed in. If I thought this story wasn't worth reading, I wouldn't have done such a long review. Always improve and keep up the good work author!
I hope that the author does not change the mc, and does not make friends with others or those who reincarnated in this world. the personality of the mc and his lonely and cruel mentality with himself and with others, leave her, since she has no friends only benefits, I want her to kill the acquaintances of her past life, I think that killing them will be the culmination of her determination by force
(Fang Yuan) Absolute Evil (The building of the world is amazing, I see that you benefited from reading the novel of the mad priest, the main character is especially special that he takes the demonic path directly, there is a gradual and consistent development of the story which is amazing) What matters most is the real villain and his cruel actions because that is what makes The story is exciting and it's the traitorous demonic mind) Keep going and good luck, excited to see where this amazing novel will land
Im enjoying it thus far.I think some of this story has RI inspiration but its not overdone. _---------------------------------------------------------_
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I especially loved her smart, immoral, evil character 😈😈😈😈, simply because it causes excitement and excitement, I wish there were another 1000 evil chapters 😈😈😈😈, author please put all your attention to this work of fable, I'm sure if you cross 500 chapters this will become Work is popular on this site and it will transcend a lot of boring work
Shame you have stopped writing this, gave me RI vibes. Great read! The only negative, that I can think of, is the lack of detail between time skips. I really enjoy reading a more detailed story and this one lacks detail. Not once (up to chapter 10) did we read about anything menial. I would have loved to read more about the MC's daily routine. Food, inn room, checking the local stores, baths, ext. Again while those aren't important, the reader knows they're are happening and by writing it, it gives life to the story. From my experience, experienced writers will use fillers. These minor tasks that living people do, in my opinion, are great fillers that while not a necessity,(as you've shown) they give a realism that I believe is great addition. Heck, sometimes writers do such a well job of explaining the food the MC is eating that it will make you drool in real life. Thank you.
wow wow wow 😳😳🥰 look another evil gem in Webnovel it's so refreshing, I wanna hug you all day and night. We should stick in such a manner that no one can tear us apart. Let me sing a song You've never met someone like me My heart has teeth, my heart has teeth And it's looking for something to eat My heart has teeth, my heart has teeth Oh, isn't it so bittersweet That I love to watch you bleed? You've never met someone like me My heart has—, my heart has— Because my heart has teeth
A masterpiece only few can write this way spicydaoist has a gift.keep mc evil please deny change him I like him a lot as he is now read till cop 46
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I don't have much to say, read the other reviews and you'll know why the five stars. now go read 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Revelar spoilerHonestly I was intrigued, the hero is a 4 star villain, the world building and the path of power 1 star, the events and scenario 1 star deserves 6/6 stars, actually it's hard to get my interest because most of the works for me I can't read because they are so boring, frivolous and stupid
a true hidden gem. I'm loving the mc and I hope this novel gets more traction because it is most definitely one of the better novels I've read on here.
a true gem of a novel and both the author's novels are none romance which is a huge plus. The only thing I can say to criticise is if we could have more chapters, please great Daoist? 😔🤲
It’ a beautifully written book and I am extremel fond of it since it shares a little of its power systems and such with one of my favourite books “reverend insanity” excluding its similarity to RI the book itself has a lot of potential and it is it’s own piece and I am truly excited to see where it goes since I have been reading the book when it had only 8 chapters or so
This novel it’s gem hope that the author doesn’t add poison tho this novel and the mc keep getting evil and more evil tbh this nove it’s worth it to read it aka great potential do not add any to or any trash like that
Autor SpicyDaoist
It's good so far. Don't drop it. I hope there to be no romance and mc to be cold and cruel, and evil if possible, throughout the novel. i want him to seek only profit and never change his style. I hate if author suddenly change the style of the whole novel. But this one looks good, so far. Let's see if this seedling can grow into something wonderful or this is another fall. But so far, good. Keep up the good work and don't drop. -Thx.