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This story is a typical op reincarnation japanese style story. Which follows the same tropes as other written stories, with little to no variation. What this story needs is development on characters and the background of the story. We know that there exists a slave compound a kingdom and a village but other than that nothing is explained the distance, the terrain, the seasons. As for characters woman throw themselves at the main character with little to no character development, who are these woman, there motivations. What reasons did they fall in love with the main character. Until the characters and backgrounds of the world are developed i have no reason to read this story.
The story follows a cliche and at the same time not cliche plot. Somebody dies and reincarnates with their memories intact. The twist here is this time the one who reincarnates is a hero, who already has battle ready abilities.
If you have checked this persons work before *cough cough* at a certain website before. Then you know what to expect of his work. A reincarnation story that has a mixed of Chinese, Japanese, and even Korean troupes and is really well described in this web novel. The only issue with it is the lack of updates which can span a month or even a year.
There's nothing else to say but I really like this novel. Sure it has faults but what book doesn't... I just really have fun reading this for some reason. :)
This novel seems to be trying to do something new with a tired cliche, I mean reincarnation after reincarnation, first time I read something like that. Well anyway cute novel. :)
The story is great eve in wattpad so pleas continue it and the other story of yours and specially the book lets play ut really take us to a fantasy world
Not my cup of tea. A guard lower himself to explain himself and say that he is trustworthy to a 2 year old kid. When generally kids at that age don't even have too much vocabulary and so on. Then. He trained until 7 years old and he nearing the level of his SS ranking parents ? 😑😑😑😑😑 Well might as well kill themselves because decades of efforts equals to 7 years of training a little kid without so much magic and he can only be good with his own style sword that even he told that is inferior to any of this world swords arts. Sorry but I'm a logical reader. Too much inconsistency on the reading make me quit. Also chapters lenght of less than 1000 words just to add more chapters ? Idk man. I prefer long chapters even is 1 per 2'days. My advice? Make the chapters longer fusing a lot of chapters together. Make events before the time skip. Also make it act accordingly to his age. He is 2 years old and walked alone of the mansion without bodywards ?' He bath with his infant sister even he past life is already adult ?' Sorry. Maybe if you makr it better I will come back
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Absolutely Amazing. This book is a rare one. So intriguing and well written. You’d never get tired of reading this over and over. The characters are well developed and they have great personalities, the names are unique and the way they use magic and weapons are unlike any other.
Hi, I really like the novel so far and I think you should keep going with it. I think that the reason this novel isn't more popular is that there were some mistakes in the early chapters, one of the examples was that in chapter 2 there was only a "t" when the word I'm assuming was supposed to be "chant" which maybe frustrated readers too early on in the story to hook them in and keep them reading until the main draw of the story, so my advice would be to go back and correct the mistakes so that the story flows better. Oh and of course updating more often is always a plus.
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I really like that kind of writing. The protagonist narrating his story. like Kumo desu ga, nani ka? or Re: Monster, very fun
Immediately fell in love with the story when he started talking. That interaction was just amazing!!! Keep up the hard work eventually people will find this amazing story!
I remember reading this like 4 or 5 years ago, it was a really good novel, but the end it feels like it rushed way too much. But otherwise it is a really good novel, i suggest people who like fatasy reincarnation novel to add it to your reading list
I really really question people choices, some stories have 4.5-5 stars rating but completely utterly boring with lots of useless fillers, yet this story have 3.7 stars but deserve to be at least 4.5 everything else is great the main character is OP but others as well... well mostly his friends but this story I recommend you reading this it has a hint of japanese novel in it without the pussy main character, a chinese novel without a mindless killing machine.
Where can I find this story now????? Only the very first chapter is here. It sounds so great and I really want to read it. .... .... .... .... ....