/ Horror / DEATHLY APP

DEATHLY APP Original

DEATHLY APP

Horror 109 Capítulos 705.5K Visitas

4.68 (42 valoraciones)

Sobre Tabla de contenidos Reviews

Resumen

Hastin was running out of ideas for his horror novel. By chance, he comes across an app which gives him ideas for his story. In the beginning, everything was smooth flowing. But later he finds out that whoever reads his story disappears and becomes the story character themselves...

Restricted

Aficionados

  1. DaoistTQ4Xu0
    DaoistTQ4Xu0 Contribuido 831
  2. KuroganeOfBaothien
    KuroganeOfBaothien Contribuido 511
  3. oyelekan_Tiwalade
    oyelekan_Tiwalade Contribuido 511

Regalos

Regalo 0 Regalo recibido
  • Yard_Min Yard_Min Regalado Ice cola
  • Yard_Min Yard_Min Regalado Ice cola
  • ZHeKinToS ZHeKinToS Regalado Ice cola
  • dream_write_06 dream_write_06 Regalado Ice cola
  • dragon70empire dragon70empire Regalado Ice cola
  • Speak_Mi_Mind Speak_Mi_Mind Regalado Ice cola
  • Speak_Mi_Mind Speak_Mi_Mind Regalado Ice cola
  • Yard_Min Yard_Min Regalado Pizza
  • rain_berry_ rain_berry_ Regalado Ice cola
  • Yard_Min Yard_Min Regalado Pizza

Estado de energía semanal

También te puede interesar

42Reseñas

4.68

  • Calidad de escritura
  • Estabilidad de las actualizaciones
  • Desarrollo de la Historia
  • Diseño de Personajes
  • Antecedentes del mundo

Comparte tus pensamientos con los demás

Escribe una reseña
PUJIT_FADTE_9415

FINALLY A GOOD ONE OTHER THAN THE NOVEL MY HOUSE OF HORRORS,I HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL CONTINUE YO WRITE THIS NOVEL AND NOT DROP IT IN THE MIDDLE JUST LIKE MOST OTHERS DO NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

4yr
Ver 5 respuestas
RainlessShine

WOW! Goosebumps! It's my first time reading this kind of genre but it really caught my interest. Everything was perfectly described. You’re great Author.

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
O_Wolfs

I haven't read or watched any horror in a while, yet I felt those tingles again just by reading the first chapter of this novel. The introduction of the protagonist's personality and ambitions was done very well. The descriptions of the gloomy mansion and the frightening events are really vivid. The plot flow and characters aside, the writing itself needs some more improvement. First, "Hastin" the name of the protagonist is used too frequently that just makes it sound a script of a movie or game rather than a novel. I suggest "He" would be used at some instances since there are few characters around him and it wouldn't be hard to know who it refers to. One more thing is about the scene where innocent people get scammed by the app and are suddenly teleported to that spooky mansion. I suggest the author showed what happened and not told. For example, he could shift to the point of view of one of those people. This way, he could show how they thought toward this invitation and how sudden and frightening it was for them to find themselves immediately in that strange place. Overall, I say the author did a very great job. The story is unique and the characters are also distinguishable. Keep up the effort until this novel reaches the top!!!

Revelar spoiler
4yr
Ver 2 respuestas
LordSamurai

I was attracted to the story and I want to continue reading. However, I found the term to mention it used as "he" in almost every paragraph very repetitive. I advise you to decrease when using your own name. Hastin thought ... Hastin was curious ... You can refer to it using "him", but not very often, because it gets tiring. The novel has a good premise, I will accompany and support you!

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Sigmao
LV 11 Badge

Although I am not personally a fan of horror novels, this novel is really good. It takes a unique approach to its system and makes it fun and unpredictable.

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Zinni
LV 5 Badge

fresh and new idea i really like the plot of the story so far , good description, dialogue are nice as well. i love the characters and the app is creepy it gives you the right feeling for horror . great job so far keep it up . **: you over use the name hastin a lot .

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
BaeVida
LV 15 Badge

Well catchy Umm title (gulp). Nice writing style, hmm good description, dialogue are nice as well. Well the story almost gave me chills cos I am one person who thinks a lot, I had already started thinking of his unfortunate life with the app and me in his shoes and the 5 random humans every month... Damn he is gonna be turned into a murderer. Hmm, for a first time writing a horror novel, you sure are doing a great work. Recommended for all horror and thriller fans. Come support this book, vote, review and leave a comment for our author here. She is doing a good job. Keep it up Darlene.

4yr
Ver 2 respuestas
NotUse

Your book is great! It actually gave me spooky Siri vibes. The descriptions are creative and well thought. The dialogues are good too, and it really makes me interested on what's going to happen next. Nice work!!!

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
ryfulrifle

I am reviewing this story with only 3 chapters so far, this will be more like a general first impression. I would say I am quite hooked and am looking forward to newer chapters! Enjoy the plot so far, though the story develops too fast for my liking. Narration can be smoother, but that's just me being nitpicky. Punctuation can be better, but it's more than readable. Otherwise, I don't know about the characters and world background as there are only 3 chapters, so I'm leaving it at 4 stars for now. TL;DR: Some quality of life changes, but the story has got me hooked with its 3 chapters. Happy reading!

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
TheVersalStudios

I don't know if it's just me but I don't understand anything about this novel. I feel that both the title and the synopsis completely misled me. Since after reading 25 chapters, the stories that are supposed to trap people to death have so little prominence And almost everything comes down to how the MC suffers. To be honest, I found this story a big scam and hardly coherent. I do not recommend it.f it were not for the good writing I would not have even read it.

3yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Shadow_Magus

A well written novel. Creepy in general, but still I liked it. I normally don't find writing scary. Most horror movies are also boring most of the time. But this was not boring as things like The Nun, and others, and it was interesting to read. You could try and make it scarier by giving more description just before the climax of the scene, similar to how the background noises increase in tempo just before the ghost is revealed.

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
SMomoTempest

Wow, I only read 1 chapter, but this book is excellent 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓😐🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

4yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Hender

Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
deanbunter88

Thanks for the novel 😊😆😄😆😐😉😯😐😯😑😇😅😇😂😀😂😀😁😀😊😁😄😆😆😄😉😐😐😯😑😯😇😀😂😁😁😊😆😄😆😄😆😉😯😇😇😅😇😅😇😂😀😀😁😊😁😆😄😆😄

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
northpoem

Sigh.... there are so little good horror novels on this d*mn app, this one is one of the rare few good ones. Please don't drop this author, imo there are 3 good horror novels here, my house of horrors, plague doctor, and this one. Keep up the good work!!

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Skull_
LV 10 Badge

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Zaver
LV 7 Badge

Bc edvs e f e f 4 b s he due r fee e rd egg f egg ha trd f e he r us erd e grrr dc y rev uhh try yt? Th f t gwhy'd t f2f vs r g r but 5 tv uhh

Revelar spoiler
4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Lee_Ches

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Yard_Min

Been reading everything you write, every one of the books has been unique and eye catching. Can imagine the story in my head while I read and things fall in place very well in an orderly fashion. Scary parts are really well written and pop up like real surprises, story’s pace and build up is amazing for fast readers like me. keep writing. cheers!

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
rain_berry_

I'm usually a person who is easily scared of ghosts but this novel is really addictive because of its interesting chapters .. author narrated in such a way.. loved your novel soo much

4yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Escribe una reseña Estado de lectura: C0
No se puede publicar. Por favor, inténtelo de nuevo
  • Calidad de escritura
  • Estabilidad de las actualizaciones
  • Desarrollo de la Historia
  • Diseño de Personajes
  • Antecedentes del mundo

La puntuación total 0.0

¡Reseña publicada con éxito! Leer más reseñas