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Dark desire: Getting his revenge
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Denis, a businessman and lord of the hidden underworld army, faced the cruel reality of betrayal when both his friend and fiancée sought to deliver him into the hands of his enemies.
Devising a plan to trap his so-called friend (Mark) thinking that he was merely selling information… exposing him to his adversaries , but little did he know… his very life would soon be in danger… they were hasting to commit coldblooded murder and by the time he found out, it was too late.
Above all, he was truly crushed learning that his fiancée, Irene, had plotted against him with the rivals seeking his demise.
So having survived the near death experience, Denis returns with a vengeance to dominate… to claim what rightfully belongs to him and retaliate with no mercy on those that wanted him dead.
He thought it would be easy, but too many forces were involved, including those from an unknown magical realm…
Would he be able to escape death once more? Or will this be his final straw
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I am not a native English speaker and may have errors in terms of grammar.
The story is still in editing. You are much welcome to help with the editing
Oooh before I forget, the book has Mature content. Read at your own decision
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I've read the first two chapters and I was surprised at how visceral the fight scenes were. The story itself has an intense vibe, I can clearly see what the author is going for. The grammar mistakes like maintaining auxiliary pronoun structure.
it is lock on 8 really? I mean it is a really good story and I like it but seriously why did you lock it on 8 but anyways keep up the good work and your doing great 👍 👌 😌
Nice story. Cant keep it down. Worth my coins. I recommended for those that love mixture of intense romance, action and a bit of magic[img=recommend]
Wow. what are ending. I cant get over all the twist and turn and the ending is really something else. the suspense is too much hope to see a second book
Hi friends. Thanks for your support. The book is on editing. If you are an editor and interested in working with me on editing my books, feel free to contact me. Your help is appreciated.
Ever chapter I read is amazing. Keep up the good work. The story keeps on getting better and better. I am surprised about the portal and the power it contain to sent Omar burned up
Oooooooo, I was actually hooked, what an organic progression, loved it. 10/10. Definitely would read again some day. Nice job author keep it up please!😉😉😉
well I must say this is a unique story, a dead hunting a living. but what I noticed emmy is that u write almost like I do when I describe a scene or an appearance. well everyone should give ur book a chance, even though u locked ur chapters early enough 👍👍👍
Hm. I have read several chapters from the beginning and I can say that it is a great story that is easy to follow and understand. I can only say that you did a good job :D
Excellent job is done, Author Enjoyed reading your work and looking forward to more chapters from you. It's a lot of time and effort put in. May you soar to greater heights and achieve all your dreams!!
I absolutely loved this book. Amazing story with such a good writing. I loved how i could visualize the scenes as if I was sucked into the book and watching everything happen before my eyes. Great job!
wonderful story indeed. i can see the suspense and the plot is interesting. nicely done, author. i do hope you will update soon. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story has potential and honestly intrigued with the synopsis once I've read it. Recommendable book! Looking forward for more, Author. Keep it up!
I love the way the chapters are organized Nice writing style and story idea This novel has great potentials Worth the read! Thumbs up to the author for a job well done
Though i have not read the whole plot yet , i am sure this book has potential. The way the author walks you through this story is wounderful and definitely a worthy read for my time i spent. good work author.
Such an exciting tone the first chapter has. I am really drawn into the situation the the protagonist is encountering. Think I am in for an adventurous read.
Despite a couple of grammatical errors the story is very well-written with a steady flow. The first few chapters are built in a realistic manner with action that is slowly building up. Overall,a very good job and congratulations to the author. Keiep it up.
I adored your story, you have a different approach and I think that is why I keep reading it. You have a great storyline and in my opinion, you must pay attention a little more to the details, but as far I can tell this is an amazing novel, can't wait to see how it's ending.
Great story that gets you hooked at the very beginning. There is so much tension and suspense that keeps you wanting to know more. Just few chapters in but I'm already hooked. Kudos Author
Wonderful story. I have read and got hooked from the beginning. So many things are unfolding as we read forward becoming more interesting. Update more chapters soon. we are waiting