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DAGGER
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There is a family in Georgia mr and Mrs Smith. Mr Smith is a business man and is very nice while Mrs Smith is a full house wife they live in a mansion with their two lovely grown up daughters, (Sonia and Miranda) Sonia is the elder one, she loves fashion so much and Miranda is the younger one she likes baking cakes both of them are graduate and they loves each other so much..... As time goes on, Miranda becomes aggressive and want to seek revenge.
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One word, only one word is needed to describe one of the fatal flaws in this book. And that word is grammar. I understand that though since this is the author's first book. I'm not a native speaker either, but I know that there is a flaw in my review. My advice is to fix the grammar and punctuation before other things. Overall story is good, but is really foreshadowed by the bad punctuation. I hope you write a good book in the future, have a nice day :)
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