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Creating Navy In Naruto World
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*THE STORY IS NOT BASED IN KONOHA BUT RATHER KIRI*
[Ding! Side quest: Establishment of the naval branch completed. Reward: (Naval Special Operations Unit – Giant Warrior Corps!) (Naval Standard Judicial Pursuit Unit!)]
[Ding! Consumed one advanced naval officer recruitment order. Congratulations, host, on successfully recruiting (Marine Admiral – Kizaru!)]
[Ding! Consumed one advanced world conscription recruitment order. Congratulations, host, on successfully recruiting (Tremor-Tremor Fruit Ability User – Whitebeard!)]
[Ding! Side quest: Formation of the World Government completed. Reward: (Advanced Conqueror's Haki) (Rumble-Rumble Fruit) (Ancient Weapon – Pluton Blueprint!)]
UPDATE SCHEDULE - 1 Chapter A Day Minimum unless something urgent comes up which results in next day having 2 chapters published.
Important notice about timeline - The story begins around the time when the Third Kazekage got Kidnapped and the Third Great Shinobi War was about to start.
I'm not the writer of this novel I'm just translating it. Also, this is FAR more readable than any machine translation you'll find.
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Ok, how should I put it. Reading this feels like eating a stale piece of bread. It is bearable, you can read it. but i recommend you turn your brain off while reading this. because honestly, the only thing special about this is the setting. but story itself is nothing special. The characters, including the mc have little to no personality whatsoever. They treat the characters other than those from the mc's group like animals. And plus, everyone other than the mc have below average IQ and EQ. So if you expected plot driven story with amazing political maneuvering, kingdom building, relationship management, and battle of mind and wits between the legends of each world, this fic is not for you. Its just pure crushing might of the Marine againts the shinobis.
the story should be summoning the navy to Naruto world instead of creating because you did not create anything
Great Translation. You chose an Interesting Story. I checked the machine translation and that sucks. Here it's a million times better, almost perfect and the release schedule also seems good for a chapter a day at this quality. If you can maintain this quality, I'll be very happy.
The story is acceptable if your looking for anything to pass the time, but honestly if your looking for something more then don't bother reading this forgettable story. The translation is pretty good though.
La historias que tienen ese tipo de invocación en Naruto no tiene sentido si vas hacer una construcción de reino que sea desde cero esfuérzate un poco
I have read till chapter 26 before writing this review. This fanfic's plot is quite nice and the system concept of One Piece world is also intriguing, however my problem is with the translation. The grammar is quite bad and the flow of the sentences is very broken as if it is written by an immigrant who doesn't how to speak English. There are many mistakes between present progressive, present simple, future progressive and in general all the tenses have a lot of mistakes, making it very hard to understand what's going on. Although I appreciate the translator efforts in attempting to translate this fanfic, I'm afraid I didn't quite enjoy reading it. But considering he actually finished translating this fanfic, I will give everything 5 Stars except for the Writing Quality.
The mtl novel itself was very good till chapter 300 , honestly in my opinion the chinese author should have just ended the novel with 300 chapters , instead he kept dragging it, even went to the fairy tail world and such , and then finally ended the novel which is pretty bs, if you ask me , So i just want to say that MR. Translator should just end the novel around 300 and make a new and good ending cause the last hundred chapters were utter nonsense.
A great translation that deserves 5 stars. Hope you'll continue translating it till it ends. ..................................................................................................................................................
I haven’t read it yet so I’m gonna have this review here as a place holder. Let’s hope it remains a 5 star
The story is interesting, but too implausible (the author is new to the history of the Naruto world, and stupid plot holes often appear). and MC is stupid and incompetent (seeing his attitude towards the science department will make you realize how much of an incompetent idiot he is). Also here, plot armor is turned on to 100% of its capabilities... from the good side: if you turn off common sense, it’s very interesting (people who don’t know the world of Naruto well and don’t care about plot armor will like it). What I liked most was how the author combined the worlds of Naruto and One Piece (in an unusual way). If you have nothing else to read, I recommend it (the number of chapters is also a big plus). There is also a good translation here (the translator is trying hard). Well, one of the minuses is also worth replacing as the author is trying to make him smart... (but actually makes him a very dumb lucky guy...)
Wow great improvement!! I read this a couple months ago and am now reading it again, and just such a big change. The quality jump is so good. Thanks translator/ author!!!!
Por favor n deixe isso cair, gosto muito dessa historia [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story, very good translation. I highly recommend reading it, keep up the good work translator, thank you for doing a great job. :))))))))))))))))))))))
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