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Just a warning the first few chapters may be worse because I wrote them when I couldn't write well but in my opinion 15+ chapters will be much better than the previous ones, please give it a chance.
Bob Reloud was a strange kid—psychopathic, autistic, and introverted. On the surface, he didn't fit the typical image of a psychopath, but when he got angry, he became something else entirely: a bloodthirsty predator, driven purely by instinct.
The first sign of his violent nature emerged in kindergarten when he was just five. A classmate destroyed his favourite toy car, a cherished gift from his grandfather. Enraged, Bob's face turned red, and foam gathered at the corners of his mouth. In a fit of uncontrollable fury, he gouged the boy's eye, causing severe injuries that left the child hospitalized for a week.
His parents, horrified, took him to a psychiatrist who reviewed footage of the incident.
But when the psychiatrist met Bob, he found a calm, seemingly ordinary autistic boy. After weekly sessions revealed nothing abnormal beyond his autism, the psychiatrist concluded that it was an isolated incident—a strange, unexplainable outburst. However, Bob's parents remained cautious, assigning him a special tutor and treating him with apprehension, afraid to provoke another violent episode.
One evening, his father came home drunk, as he often did, and began his habit of throwing insults at Bob's mother. Bob had grown accustomed to these rants. Afterward, his father sat down to watch football. Bob, fiddling with a stolen phone, accidentally blasted music at full volume.
Bob’s dad started beating him, and his mom tried to calm him down, but it was too late. Bob became extremely angry, went into his psycho mode, and murdered his parents.
Officer Danzel responded to the call. Breaking down the door, he was met with a chilling scene: a boy covered in dried blood, sitting calmly on the couch, the decomposing corpses of his parents beside him.
"Don't move, or I'll shoot!" Danzel barked, his hand on his gun.
Bob raised his hands.
Danzel covered up the murders, taking Bob under his wing. Over the years, he moulded Bob into a spy and assassin—a tool for his purposes. Bob excelled at killing, but he despised espionage, finding it tedious. Worse still, Danzel kept him trapped, threatening to expose his past if he ever tried to leave.
Eventually, Bob devised a plan to free himself. Over months, he deliberately botched missions, creating enough trouble to provoke Danzel's wrath. Finally, Danzel snapped.
Now, Bob stood on the subway platform, a grin on his face and a backpack on his shoulders. For the first time, he felt free. Boarding the train,
Bob heard the powerful voice of the demon. The apocalypse was about to begin, and his story could finally unfold.
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Escribe una reseñaThis novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it, The apocalypse element with the system was done wonderfully, and Bob's different and bloodthirsty personality is wonderful. I liked it very much, let me go back to reading now, bye.
I created this cover for your novel! Hope it complements your work well. Looking forward to reading it and sharing a review. Keep up the great work!
I really like your introduction and follow up as you make the connections and extend the possibilities. keep up and please provide more of the possible plots and growth of the journey
Aight, here's an honest review for ya. If you like Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, then you'll have mixed emotions about this book. It's good, and fast paced. But fast paced isn't my cup of coffee. That said, it's still a good book. I just don't like how the story is directly derived from Omniscient Reader, it's a basic copy and paste with a switched concept. I highly recommend fleshing out originality because there's nothing wrong with inspiration. Dandadan and Hell's Paradise were inspired by Chainsaw Man afterall. Otherwise, really good book with great grammar and no mistakes on comprehension!
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Am I pretentious when I give my own book 5 stars?