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Combat Maid Harem
3.91 (87 valoraciones)
Nomination Award for WSA 2021 Contest
Resumen
I turned my assassin into my maid with the power of money! Money is all-powerful!
It was a world full of swords and magic; Lawrend was the son of the wealthiest merchant in town. Since the age of 7, he had been having dreams. A dream about a past life in a modern civilization where monsters are nonexistent, and humans dominate the world. Lawrend saw Iron birds, Magical bricks that display moving paintings, Thunder wielding, and many more.
There was a scene in one of the dreams that made Lawrend’s heart beat fast. A row of a dozen maids bowing in front of him. Each dressed in a french maid outfit.
Something awakened inside Lawrend when he had that dream. A fervent desire to have his very own Maid Harem!
NOTE: READ THE AUXILIARY CHAPTER FIRST
Chapter 69 is the first smut chapter.
UPDATE December 2, 2021:
I have provided a summary for Chapters 1 - 37 as I'm starting to rewrite them. It can be found in the Auxiliary Volume. Please give this novel another chance. I want to redeem myself as an author.
UPDATE January 19, 2022:
I already wrote the sequel for this novel called, "Lewd Cultivation System". The connection will be mentioned in the future, but for now, the connection isn't obvious. It can be read without prior knowledge about Combat Maid Harem.
UPDATE February 11, 2022:
For reasons I do not know, this book got nominated for WSA 2021, which is a huge success for this book. Basically, it means that this book is good enough but not good enough to get the gold, silver, or bronze places.
UPDATE October 3, 2023:
I've decided to pause this novel. I will end it when I have the time. For now, I'll go resume "Lewd Cultivation System"
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Chapter Length: 1000 words
ADDITIONAL NOTE: PLEASE READ TILL CHAPTER 40+ BEFORE DECIDING ON ANYTHING. I'M SURE YOU WON'T REGRET IT
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UPDATE DECEMBER 2, 2021: I have written a summary for Chapters 1 - 37. It's very short and should spare you from the bad chapters I had written in the past. I know I should've done this sooner, but I really hate rewriting. It's very mentally taxing to that point that I get lazy. Before 2022, I aim to finish rewriting all of those chapters for a brand new start for my novel, and I hope all of you gain a maid fetish after reading my novel. Thank you! Spread maid love to the world!!
this is my thought on this novel after reading up to 48 chapters i will be dead honest, this is a novel that i must say.. a hidden gem with extremely big potential to grow with good marketings. It has nice story, good and normal pace plot development, and good character development. I prefer you to put the power level in this world as we still don't know how does one determine their strength. I wish you will have these in the future but anyway its a good novel for me to spend my money on but at the same time, this novel have something that might make veteran readers burst into anger. First of all, although i said the character development is good, the way you write it out can piss people off. I almost threw my phone out of anger reading the first 40 chapter. Yes you want to make MC a naive dumb boy but smart i can accept that, but you exaggerate it. You make him look like a beta japanese male weeb in japan. I suggest you need to fastened his maturity progression in the next 10 chapters or veteran readers will immediately drop this novel. Also about Aleshia, just like I said, u exaggerate it. You make her way too paranoid and this will leave reader a bad taste in their mouth regarding her. Its nice to see a proper relationship progression over his maids one by one as to make the story longer and interesting but dont make it too out of line that it disrespect MC dignity as a noble. Also he is not giving any punishment at all. I would like to see all his maids total obedience to him Also for future readers.. i suggest you all to fast read chapter 1 to 40 as to avoid you leaving this novel.Trust me you will be eager to swipe your card past those chapters. Also trust me as long author not losing few screws in the head for future development, this novel will be a good workout for your slumbering dragon. I will give 4* at the moment because of the updates, character development and world background. I will give 5* after this have more chapters, clarification on power level and a better, brave and mature MC with his maids not being so paranoid. Best of luck. I have insulted and scolded a lot of authors in webnovel considering how they are so terrible making improvement in their novels. I have high expectation on this. Dont let me down My 💰 on you
Tbh, I've only read until chapter 22 because the MC is bad and waiting for character development for 39 chapters isn't worth the read. Author could've made the character development in a much shorter time frame than having to wait almost 40 chaps, I GUARANTEE that most of your readers have dropped the story because of how long the character development is. The writing quality is amazing since you can really understand the story well and the Grammer mistakes are next to none. The story can be slow at some points but it fleshes out the side characters well. All in all the story is great I love it but the MC is really off putting and some readers can't handle that, including me. If you can handle waiting for a character development then try this story out, it's good. If you can't then don't waste your time reading this.
Look, I sacrificed and read everything (64 ch's), I don't know why the author dragged such a bad start, he wanted to show a character evolution while increasing the mc's strength, but it took a long time and I bet that's why he lost so many readers , it was a good read, I don't lie, I liked what happened from chapter 45 on, it was torture to read before that, but it was good even after the fight with the noble devil , it has potential, but you need to prepare to read in 40 very frustrating chapters, until this chapter the mc will be weak, fearful, perverted, cowardly... so far it was the worst mc I've ever seen, but in chapter 40, something happens to him that changes everything, besides changing his personality, he gets stronger and more confident, in addition to correcting some of his flaws, he doesn't become the best mc's, but he's readable. The story is good, after chapter 40 it gets very interesting, if you wait until then, you'll like it. Writing Quality: 5.0 (I don't complain about this, I didn't find any errors) Update stability: 5.0 (I don't follow since the beginning, but since I started every day new chapters have been posted) Story development: 5.0 (the story is great, it has everything to last a hundred chapters, but the MC development is depressing and frustrating because it takes so long) Character designs: 1.0 (only 4 things are quoted from the characters: whether he's handsome or not, apparent age, hair color and whether he's fat or thin, it's kind of hard to imagine the characters with these descriptions where they don't even talk about details , not even for the main characters) World Background: 2.0 (difficult to assess, almost nothing has been presented yet) PS; But the next arc has a lot of potential, I confess that I'm a little excited about it, so I can increase my score more, remembering that the soap opera is at the beginning, there's a lot to happen, I'm not offending this comment, but I give my honest opinions about romance.
don't like story begineeing section. Too much coward type mc. come on man you could at least developed the scenrio. mc lacking some gut man.
I liked it a lot, being a strong supporter of the maids but unfortunately it's over for me, what can I say I hate the yuri in the harem, especially here I feel like the mc is getting ntr by his maid, in short so disappointing it should at least be said in the summary, I don't mind it's a threesome but here bruhh anyway it's chap 150 for info 😤
Don't do it, Save yourself .................................................................................................................
What can I say? This novel is just too disgusting. I've read till the chap 100. Don't know how I was able to endure so far. The author degrades a girl because she isn't pure. It seems like he is a 40ty y.o. virgin and doesn't know what a true relationship means. Futhermore plot is too chaotic. Mc is going to be a merchant, then mage, transmigrator and so on. Quality is bad too. I'm too lazy to explain all flaws of this novel. Drop
If I was the author I woulda stopped writing. All the reviews but like 2 are how bad it is 😭 honestly that just tells me I shouldnt read it and indeed I wont. Gg on you for still writing but I suggest make ur mc better next time u make a novel
As you start reading , you can tell the writing quality is quite high , the author does indeed have talent. Normally I would get excited whenever I encounter this level of writing because this tells me the author is capable to write at least a decent story and somewhat compelling characters. Once you have those elements ..other flaws can be more or less ignored. Well ...with all I said above this should have been at the minimum an ok novel for me to read ....and yet...I stopped at ch 22. Why? Due to the author's choice of MC. Within the first few chapters we have the interactions between the MC and the "first maid". In every interaction between them the MC is getting (to put it mildly) bullied , humiliated and extorted and yet he is getting more and more excited about her. This tells you everything you need to know about the MC. In short , the author presents the MC as being a generic , "lame"/ "beta"/ "doormat", taken straight from any mediocre JP novel with an added twist of the "step on me" fetish.
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I really like this story especially how MC evolve with each contact with his past life personality. Besides, the plot of getting the maids is amazing, as well as growth of their relationship.
Within 100 chapters the story went from mediocre to absolutely stupid. Massive plot holes, literally the entire plot just drops off a cliff for no reason.
I like the concept of this novel but... When I ever think the Beta Mc make me want to throw up.................................................................
it would be a better if mc wasn't a beta I read 200+ chapters mc is still beta and idiot
The start was bad, but then it got better when he was getting stronger. The children were the clincher for me that MC and Author don't seem to think much about their actions.. First MC gets a bunch of them Pregnant, they sail across the ocean to a new continent. MC then ends up doing something and cultivating for a Year straight... Wakes up, and finds the girls have bought an Inn and made it profitable. He decides to do a stupid competition, then goes back to the main continent. What was the point of going over there if he only spends 2 - 3 months on the continent and comes back. Now back home, he and the Moms decide to raise the Children to age 5 (FIVE) to when they start developing their relationships and memories yet MC and MOMS say ok time to ditch the kids to run the original Country.. At AGE 5.. come on. I dropped it after that chapter.
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fk this novel............... the mc should have left aliesha even if he didn't kill her or punished her.. whole mood is ruined.. ufycigivibobbibiviviviv
Right, the first 10+ Chapters were so STUPID, CRINGE, FORCED, and LAME. The Guards' behaviour & reaction, the girl action to the MC, the old healer behaviour, the conflict, everything is so forced and stupid. THE MC haven't shown up yet after the first chapter. it gets better. But that beginning is too horrible. i'm the 'first 10 Chapters guy', and those chapters are 3 star almost 2.
the books a massive headache. it's hard to care about the main character because he's like thin air besides getting bullied in the beginning. I don't like to use terms like beta but this mcs as lame as they come. What is there to look forward to? Not much some chapters deep. Im sure this book is just the antithesis of my being and cause pain only relieved in review. Good luck to the author and fans
POTENTIAL SPOILER: This would be much higher. At least 4's across the board. However, in a semi-smut novel, the author has opted to make the MC a cringe, purity worshipping man. Thats why its not higher. I wont spoil the scene, but the MC blames a character for not being a virgin in a situation that clearly isnt her fault. Not cool. Outdated, immature and misogynist thinking.
I practice the Dao of Shamelessness! You'll see how cultured I really am when you read this novel. Why don't you tip maids too? Maids are special, you know? They clean your clothes, cook dishes, and especially do night services! Crazy, right!?