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Kotarou finally had the courage to start reading and watching One Piece ... As he regrets not having read it before ... After dying in an accident, he had no choice but to be Transmigrated to the world of One Piece.
Hello guys. This is my first fanfic, and English is not my language, any spelling mistakes you notice and want to correct me, I will be grateful. I think my idea for this fanfic can be a little greedy, and being my first fanfic, mistakes have appeared everywhere. ^ - ^
Mc may not be everyone's favorite. Kotarou is not a Mc badass, he is weak, and has his problems, many will not identify with him. So if you want to read something with a Mc badass that is reborn or transmigrates with many desires, system, being Overpower and catching all the girls just looking at them, this fanfic will not be to your liking. You are lucky, 9/10 of the Webnovel fanfics fits this standard, so give these fanfics a chance, they will certainly be to your liking. (Many are well done, but this is not the story I want to tell.)
The harem tag is included, and I must say that I am a big fan of that tag, BUT, as much as the story is harem, I will try to make the progression of the romance slow, you can see cute and romantic moments, but the dating itself does not it will make progress so soon, I want to try to make everything as natural as possible.
And finally, One Piece does not belong to me.
Only my ideas and OC belong to me.
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Escribe una reseñathis is like a limited poor cracked addicted imitation of this bites. not a copy mind you but an attempt in having the same effect as this bites where we emphatize with a useless psycho MC. worthless for me. but someone has to love it right. like how disgusting people are unconditionally loved by their parents or just parent.
LOVE IT!!! DIFFERENT FROM OTHER FANFICS!!! NEED MORE UPDATE MORE!!! ..................................................................................
Story’s great but mc is a bit stupid and the writing could be better since the recent chapters have words that are not english but portguese (sorry for the spelling) but otherwise everything was good.
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it's good the build-up is getting pretty good it's not an overpowered character but it is an interesting one .............................. .................... ................................. . ................ .. ......... ....................... . . ... ........... ..................................... . ................... ........................................................................................................................................................
he should have taken the 1 choice. true death . he is basically useless person. no useless person still can cause other people misfortune or worst case kill them. mc is idiot that will gladly die for fish if he can die for fish. I think i am starting to like ussop character I usually hate ussop but after reading this ussop is better than him .
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Autor Tennouji_Kotarou
Writing Quality 4-Stars Story Development 2-Stars Character Design 2-Stars Updating Stability 5-Stars World Background 2-Stars Writing Quality [It is better grammar than the average Webnovel, even If it is not perfect!] Story Development [ Yeah, I am not that impressed right now but that may change in the Future, we will see. I will Tell you that because that's what I always find irritaiting. Why do people keep creating more One Piece FF where the Mc joins the Strawhat pirates...I could as well just read the Original and it would be way more interessting than any FF out there. Make something interessting and ...join the marines, create a pirate crew, build an Underground Empire ...etc etc there are so many options!] Character Design [ While I find it good that the Mc cares about his mother...this is so Stupid. Any mother would want the Best for their child. His mother would rather want him to have a good life in his next 'life' than wasting his wish for her, considering that he goes to such an Evil World where strength rules and the weak can watch from the sidlines. If you aren't strong in the One Piece World than you can go suicide. Also the fact that he joins the Strawhat Pirates is a -1 for me.] Updating Stability [ Not much to say here] World Background [ I have the Feeling that the Author doesn't know anything about Devil fruits except that there are 3 different types! ] [ While it isn't outright Bad, it isn't really Good either. I myself won't continue reading it ...read Story Development, than you know why!] (AN: English isn't my mother language and I don't prove read what I write, soooo .....just Deal with it !!!!!)