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Yun Heng lacks emotions and dies at the hand of a desperate wannabe lover. Bound to a system he traverses from world to world saving the Cannon Fodder in hopes that these missions will help him find a way to learn how to feel emotions. However he never expected a puppy-like Male lead sticking to his side trying to teach him how to love.
ML: Wifey, I love you! (*kiss*)
MC: ...
ML: Wifeyyyy....pay attention to meeeee (*kisskisskiss*)
MC: ... *confused* (what is this man doing? I don't get it...)
BTW This is BL!!! It is boys love. As in it's a novel depicting gay love. You have been warned!
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I can't say much about the stability of updates since it just went up but I LOVE the characters. It's true that there are some cliche tropes, but CONSENT is so fresh. I'm so tired of the low-key forceful and kinda rapey ML's. This ML is still kinda yandere but his need to get consent is super hot. My fav character is probably the system Ni Ni. She's hella sassy and I love it. There's only 1 arc and a bit of the second up right now but so far I love it! <3 <3 <3 <3
Mc is too passive, i get he doesnt have emotions but it gets tiring after a point, ml is the only one putting in efforts fr their relationship. Otherwise storys nice, just mc isnt that likeable.......
I hope he or she will do up too 100 chapters great start up too!!! I loved it all character detail spot on great transition with roles great job so far author.
Es una novela que te puede hacer llorar, los personajes están muy bien diseñados aunque no tenga muchos capítulos y recién vaya por el segundo mundo es súper .
Stopped at around chapter 6. All in all, this story isn't really bad; it's just not something I'm all that interested in. Let's go through what I liked first. I thought it was interesting that the MC had trouble experiencing emotions, which made him quite apathetic and perhaps a bit oblivious. It's new (at least for me) and I haven't actually seen that in any of the webnovels I've read. I also liked the System's reactions to both the MC and the things that people think about him. She's a funny System, though her character seems slightly forced. I also liked how we get a full understanding of the original plot of each world; however, it's always in such long paragraphs that might seem a bit troublesome to go through. Maybe if it was separated into smaller paragraphs rather than these huge chunks, it would seem like less of a chore to read. Now, on to the things that aren't as great... first off, the quality: the grammar and punctuation is just okay, as far as I can tell. There are mistakes in every chapter, but I think you can ignore those. It can get a bit tiring when you read that in addition to the weird and forced characterization of the characters though. The characters always seem a bit exaggerated and odd to read about, especially the System and, in the first arc, the villain (or the original female lead). Right off the bat, I could tell that the female lead couldn't be called anything but an unreasonably stupid and vengeful cannon fodder villain. Some people might be okay with these types of rigid roles, or heck, even really like reading about them, so don't let my words discourage you from reading this if you really do like/tolerate these characterizarions. Another thing that struck me as odd was how the male lead just seemed so taken by the MC on their first meeting. All that happened was that they met, MC behaved respectfully, and left. And then the male lead wanted to learn everything about him, which... okay, maybe I'm being a bit too critical for a fictional story, but the pacing and development seems too off for me to fully enjoy. Idk, maybe the MC's protagonist halo is just too strong and makes everyone (except for the cannon fodder villains) love him. Again, if these things are right up your alley, don't let my review stop you from reading it; it's just my opinion.
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This is a great BL + transmigration novel. I love how the MC is so carefree and nonchalant, which makes him so cute! It’s also the first transmigration novel I’ve read where the system doesn’t have a robotic or childish personality. I can’t really rate the stability of the updates since there has only been updates on about two days, but I definitely recommend this novel readers who are looking for a cute BL story 😆
I absolutely love this novel! Sure there are some cliche parts, but the writing is amazing. The characters are all very well developed as the readers get to fully see into the main characters' thoughts. The story development is good as well. I personally love the different arcs. It's such a cool idea to have the arcs set in entirely different worlds and societies. One thing that is not so amazing is that the stability of updates is not great. I often have to wait a rather long time to read the next chapter. However, overall this story is a wonderful read if you like BL romance and adventure.
A good story, full of plot, drama and a bit of comedy. I liked the mc, is a cute and very funny, very naive to understand the ml. generally, if you want to read a story of mc that goes from world to world, who does not know what love is and a possessive ml that does not drop it at all, following it in all worlds. This is the story.
I love this story!! I downloaded this to re-read it everytime i felt like it...❤❤ the mc and ml's relationship is so cute that i can't help myself but fangirlll❤❤❤
Verry good story, the système is so funny and this relationships with MC is perfect. Mc is a cute guy and is emotionless are perfect. ML is very possessed but it is so sweet and MC need that. (Sorry for fault I'm French)
I just found this one so I couldn't say anything good about the stability of updating. But, it is a good funny story with a 'robot-like' MC and his expressive system partner. The characters have their own past so every actions they made are kind of make sense. About the story development... I only read Arc 1, I could only say : If there are no other people, I guess the plot won't be that good since the MC has no feeling. Thank goodness there are supporting characters.
Well im still looking forward for the update its been five month since the last but we’ll wait its such a great story to hold onto right author so comeback😊
The story was very marvelous it even made me cry even how much i read it still when the scene of yixuan and xiao jun to their meeting place always makes me cry
Oh mu gosh please author update we really need it now hope that you would notice us probably please update. But isnt it true that this story is being updated in wattpad?
Oh please author the updating stability as far i can see is not good ,your story was very good so i hope you continue it please its been 4 months since last
Before, i already read this story in wattpad. What i want to say is this is an amazing story that captured my heart to read it until to the end of each arc
Well I'm here just to say HOW I LOVE THIS BOOK but my problem is WHY CAN'T I VOTE!? I LOVE THIS BOOK YET I CANT VOTE!? IS SOMEONE KIDDING ME!? I CANT ACCEPT IT!!!!!😤😤😤but btw I'll give this book a five star⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐😁☺️😚and I'll try my hardest untill this freakin stone accept mah vote🙄😒😤🤧
For me, this was written well. Even though there indeed some cliche, what can I do?, I totally hold those type of cliche. It is amazing how the main character got pretty much halo. Well, he deserves it considering his 'disability' to have feelings. But ignorance is a bliss though.
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Ah I love the premise of this story so much! I love that there's not much problem concerning homophobia when it comes to those who care about the MC such as his system and the ML. The system is actually very interesting and supportive of MC, plus we get to see a whole other side to systems as they aren't merely robotic and strict. The MC can't feel so his world-hopping is basically his journey to find the meaning of life (or in this case, his feelings). Thank you for your hard work, author! Please continue this amazing work! :DDD