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Warning: This story contains adult scenes.
Alex didn't say anything and moved forward toward the girl standing in front of him. He simply kissed her.
"What was that for?" she asked, clearly shocked.
It was the first time she experienced what happened next.
"What? Do you have to kiss to...?" she trailed off, flabbergasted by the unexpected turn of events.
Alex wasn't born ordinary; he was born with alexithymia, a condition that makes him unable to feel pain or emotions. Raised in a military family in an era dominated by advanced technology, Alex's world turned upside down when asteroids fell, causing animals to mutate into Ravagers—the deadliest creatures known, capable of obliterating entire countries.
How will Alex navigate this perilous new world?
While the story will focus mainly on the main plot, there will be elements of romance, including a harem. The lead includes many mature women, but rest assured, there will be no NTR (Netorare) involving the main character. Few members will be who will be ntr by main character.
What is in for you?
1.) I will be honest the first volume will be somehow less enjoying as it is not fast-paced also as my first book you might find it hard to continue but from the second volume there will be no doubt about all this I have worked hard to improve it.
2.) Also there are almost no R18 chapters in the first volume because. The protagonist is a child. And I know you are not into these types. You know what I mean.
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Escribe una reseñaStarting part may contain some grammatical errors after 30 chapter story becomes best ,more interesting. He will be encountering the factor which will give boost in his power
Revelar spoilerNice bro, Keep it up After 16th chapter the story started to become interesting.You guys should also give it a try . The beat rank system also kind of new I have not read before in any novel. You should give it a try.[img=exp]
Revelar spoilerNice story let's wait for more chapters Superb if you read this story from your under you will feel like heaven land Believe this is story is purely based Alex childhood to his old days so please enjoy your day. Just there need some character development
Well strongly i would recommend reading it but upto chapter 40 there is not much to know but in later it starts to get intresting i like the most info about his power
Revelar spoilerThis novel techniques are somewhat unique and its just lack the word count in every chapter you should increase those. Alex having axylthemia made it somewhat boring feeling less try to work for it.
Revelar spoilerYour novel, Champion of Cosmos on Webnovel, offers a captivating adventure blending sci-fi and fantasy elements, with a richly detailed world that readers will find fascinating. The diverse realms—such as the oceanic territories of the Aquarians, the sky cities of the Aeronauts, and the subterranean empire of the Subterraneans—each bring their own unique cultures and environmental adaptations, which add depth to the story. Each group’s distinct traits and technologies, from advanced breathing adaptations to bioluminescent underground cities, build an immersive world filled with mystery and intrigue. Moreover, the introduction of antagonistic forces, such as the mysterious Dark Regins organization, adds tension and stakes, particularly with its ambitious experiments and unsettling robotic soldiers. The storyline's progression reveals layers of conspiracies and power struggles, making it both thrilling and thought-provoking. As the protagonist, Alex faces these formidable adversaries while navigating a military school setting, setting up an exciting hero’s journey that keeps readers engaged and eager to see how his story unfolds. Overall, Champion of Cosmos balances strong world-building with suspenseful storytelling, and it appeals to fans who enjoy layered sci-fi [img=recommend]universes and complex character interactions. It’s a solid read for anyone looking for an intricate and evolving narrative.
Revelar spoilerNice story i want more keep updating. Great world building just looking for next chapter. I do prefer you to keep constant updates.Every thing is nice.
From a story development perspective, Champion of Cosmos showcases strong world-building and thoughtful character arcs that drive the narrative forward. The novel introduces a variety of unique civilizations, such as the Aquarians, Aeronauts, and Subterraneans, each with a distinct setting and culture, which provides a rich backdrop for the unfolding events. This world-building not only establishes the stakes but also adds depth to the conflicts, as each group has motivations and abilities grounded in their environments. Character progression is another focal point, as protagonists like Jhon, Ava, and Alex encounter increasingly complex challenges. The gradual escalation in the threats they face—from local adversaries to larger cosmic dangers—adds momentum and keeps readers invested. The antagonistic character Thema, for instance, evolves from a mere rival to a significant threat with complex motivations, heightening the tension and creating suspense. The development also focuses on building alliances and rivalries, enriching the narrative's complexity and moral landscape. By integrating characters’ backstories and the mysterious forces driving the central conflicts, the story allows for both personal and large-scale stakes, which is essential for long-term engagement in serialized fiction like this.😇
Revelar spoilerChampion of Cosmos dives into a fascinating web of cosmic conspiracies, secret factions, and supernatural abilities. A hidden organization, Dark Regins, lurks in the shadows, capturing talented young individuals to turn them into elite, almost inhuman warriors. Their goal? World domination through genetic experiments and advanced technology, which they conduct in a high-tech, eerie underground facility. Meanwhile, protagonist Alex, a student at a military school, unknowingly becomes a key target. As he uncovers the truth about the school's hidden connections with Dark Regins, he realizes he possesses rare cosmic powers that make him a significant asset—and threat—to them. The story escalates as Alex must evade capture, survive intense confrontations, and uncover the truth behind his abilities and their connection to cosmic secrets that could reshape his world.
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