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The novel has open ending with the ML end up with villain girl and FL with her best friend. Although the tag rebirth is here but it seem the FL is quite good at holding a grudge against the ML mistake in before rebirth. ML after rebirth did not do anything against her yet but she already judge him even when she knew the reason behind his action. I don't like the FL.she is not worth of his love. At first when I was reading it, I enjoy the story cause it was all just misunderstanding.. But when the third party mess up with the ML memory, that's I'm done. No one has the right to erase someone else memory on the name "peace". Because of memory losing, ML end up with the villaon Rather than with villain, it is better for him to end up alone.. That's what my opinions..if anyone is ok with this kind of ending.. just continue read that.. I don't mean to offend anyone..
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This novel is different from other reincarnation novels written today. The only thing that I'm not happy about is how everyone got their own happy ending but the male lead who somehow just did everything he could to protect the female lead from harm atleast deserves a good ending. It's okay if not with the FL but not with the villain girl.
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Author I love you so much more ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ this webnovel is really gooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddd. The plot is really really good i admire the female protagonist alot
As of ch153. This is one of those novels which started out great but is going downhill as it progresses. Character development is poor ESPECIALLY in the case of the FL—The author forces its readers to sympathise with her, which is quite reasonable in the early chapters. But after the rebirth? Her actions towards the ML was beyond unreasonable! It is a rebirth where none of the things that happened in the last lifetime happened in the present, but she was so hung up with her last lifetime that she’s making it hard for the ML everytime, Always being a ***** without any rhyme or reason. Seriously author? Are u confused with the concept of rebirth? Why are u making the story like it was a case of past and present? The only good thing here i see is the char devt for the ML, i can see how the author is slowly redeeming him and i applaud her for this, that i hope she wont end up butchering this progress. Now on to the latest chs, i dont even know dude, all i can do is *sigh*
Story went good in the beginning, ending didn’t go well,I was very disappointed with the ending, lushen was perfect for her,.this was the first novel disappointed me in Webnovel
Objectively speaking as I already read several transmigration novel, this one stand out. The plot is quite different, in a sense that the plot clearly explain to us how the FL got second chance, the rule to jump to another time line, and who allow her to do so. Unlike the other novel where the FL transmigrated like "BOOM", without reason nor explanation. Just like that. So this novel start out great, BUT the ending felt too rushed and as loyal reader I was utterly speechless with the injustice that ML got from the author. To describe the ending that ML got here it was comparable to Kaname from Vampire Knight. If you ever read that, and felt hurt for him then don't read this. It'll leave you the same scar.
The ending really satisfied me..in other romance novels good friends are friendzoned forever but overbearing and illogical male leads end up with the female lead. It’s true that the ML hadn’t hurt the FL after rebirth YET, but that didn’t mean that he wouldn't...if the FL still chooses the ML..that means the sufferings of FK in her previous life had taught her nothing and she totally wasted her second chance. The ML didn’t want to hurt her in her past life and wanted to call protect her life...but he didn’t think about her mental health..dying happy is much better than living a long miserable life..and what’s worse..she still ended up dying. If ML had communicated with her more, she wouldn’t have been that miserable. Their might be spark in their relationship but the relationship wasn’t healthy. The relationship between FL and her friend is considered healthy. At least he would never hurt her the way male lead did. This story is really satisfying. Thanks to the author ^_^
I give it a full rate!!! YOU MUST READ IT! It's really a damn good! I started reading this in another place. It's transmigration story that really make you wonder, what is the next thing that MC will do. It's like riding a roller coaster. You won't know when your heart will send flying or down to earth. It's not really a fluffy story. Balance between comedy, romance and reminisce is good. The plot is in the wonderful path. Maybe sometimes you will find it cliche, but that's not really make you think 'this again...?' No, i think it's good ╮(╯▽╰)╭ Story that i wish for every day, fortunately that the author kind enough to update almost everyday without fail. The characters are really well done, which is make me surprise that some of characters were REALLY innocent, i'm not extravagant that though... When I write this review i wonder if i can write some spoiler, but i think the other must read it first. It's really good to be neglected(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ I wish the story will always go on!!! Thanks for writing awesome story Author-sama!!! ♡⃛ヾ(๑❛ ▿ ◠๑ )
5 stars..Love the plot Nicely pace, ML.and FL seems to be right for.each other but got to work over the misunderstandings .aiyah too much Misunderstanding but love conquers all.
I’m really enjoying this story! I love how although she has been reborn. She’s still in love with him. When you truly love someone it’s hard to just let go, even when you need to. The emotions she has is real and understandable! Can’t wait to see how this story develops!
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I read this novel in passing. To summarize, although the female lead is happy with the turn of events after she was reborn..I still think that in a way, i dont think she is happy with her decision at all. What she did in the end was more on choosing the safest path instead of embracing her desires. The male lead although portrayed as evil, was actually totally in love with the female lead. But the ending part is like an open ending with a bad ending. Bad coz they still both lost. I mean..the looking back with each other at the epilogue..its like a tragedy. Who experienced this anyway? Its more of pent up emotions where both person involved were fed up. What a heartbreaking ending.
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i love how the writer developed the FL chara, but im kinda hoping this story not ended with this kind of open ending. i just kinda disappointed with the ending. but overall its good story to began with.
Ok so i am following this from the very start and sorry if anyone mind but i have to say writter did not do justice to ANY character specially Lu shen. Like come on We all know he did some mistakes in his life but who didn't..? 1. He never cheated on Hui yan. 2. He kept his marriage even when he feels she is not in love with him & think she is with him only for his money. 3. He didn't listen to his parents for her sake,he didn't mind her low class and weird behaviour. 4. He divorced her just to protect her life from his enemy. 5. After her death he take revenge of her death & stay loyal to her even he didn't need to. He only did JUST one mistake of trusting Nin Zhen. And what he got in the End? "NOTHING". Hui yan is selfish to no extent and her character as well as her love for Lu shen take 180° turn when ever she want. 1. Before her marriage she is too dumb to let everyone bully her. 2. She think LS cheated on her without confirming (she just hear and assumes eyerthing on her on). 3. After she was Reborn she practially use LS for every little thing & She is even using JX. 4. In the end She act like to love her brother but seriously she didn't..she only love herself. 5. She didn't have any feelings for her unborn child...sigh!! With all this you can assume what kind of character she has. And the last thing i don't like Twins and Wuji character at all,it is too fake,unreal neither funny nor interesting even the sleeping disorder of JX don't make any sense. I read the novel only bcoz i hope it got better and atleast have some decent ending but i am DISAPPOINTED. Give 3 start only for showing some good kind of character development of LS while all other characters only got down the ith passage of time.
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My thoughts are unorganized! I enjoyed reading this story but in all honest opinion it went from interesting to unsatisfying. The story revolves to much on what the FL wants though obviously it’s her story, this doesn’t give spotlight to other characters except for the FL and hurtful past of the ML. I felt like the minor characters was only written to have more characters. Therefore making me exhausted most of the time when I read this. Another thing is that it doesn’t justify the ending of every character especially the ending of the ML. Though I am happy for the FL it’s too unfair for the ending of ML. I without a doubt still enjoyed this but I hope for either revision or making a second book that can give more life for the other characters while still focusing on the life of ML and FL and also making the flow of the story more organized.
I like the story.. the more u read it the more interesting it can get.. i like it, i will give my vote to this novel tom.. i support ur writing skills.. ur brilliant i hope the 2 mc would end up happily together without any heartache.. 😁😁 i hope the lead guy will dote and love her fron her rebirth..
I really enjoyed reading this story, its one of the few stories where the Fl doesn't have to be with the Ml. It leaves with a open ending that it's not great or bad. Its right in between, and lets us decide on what might happen and who the Fl choose to be with.
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Hmm really wish they will come back and start everything new .since she have caught the person who brought them together. Something thing like start from a fresh like meeting each other in deferent circumstances and fall in love again.
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The story started so ~~ slow~~... To the point I started thinking... 'When she going to start revenge?' 💢💢💢 'why she and his husband [villain] are always in the story?' 😵😵😵 'when the new lazy male lead going to start WORKING HARD?! '💢💢💢 And second half... The story starting to be better... I 😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭... 'so that what happened' Then the ending is... 'Why the one who never-mentioned / never-done anything is the one she end up anyway... 'senior is right' is really PITY The story is really interesting.... And the one that looks nonsense.. In the end the pieces fit each other... The ending is really......... I guess the Human have never ending wants... I thankful for the author for wonderful story... In it's imperfect... And perfect... Structure... [😫 I'm making nonsense] For author here is.... ♡⃛◟( ˊ̱˂˃ˋ̱ )◞⸜₍ ˍ́˱˲ˍ̀ ₎⸝◟( ˊ̱˂˃ˋ̱ )◞♡⃛ (ﾉ*>∀<)ﾉ♡
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The worst ending ever! I mean why does the ending have to be so sad😭😭😭 I wish they ended up together, I really felt kinda bad after finishing the novel.
Why do all female mc's end up with trashy males? The dude is stupid, and because he is the only handsome man in the world all girls love him. They even compare him to a god. I get that mc is pretty but really, every damn man she meets want to do her. You'd expect that because of all the abuse she went through in her last life, she'd avoid the bastard ml, but nope. she gives him mixed signals by not rejecting him. Even when he asked her 'do you hate me?' The retarded mc neither said yes or no, despite screaming yes in her mind multiple times. I don't know why brain dead stories like this have such good reviews. The reason i dropped it was when mc got aroused when she was raped by the bastard ml. Rape is rape, no matter how much you try to justify it. Author has a lot of potential, just don't write such stupid plots. This is honestly trash, the villains are bad for no good reasons. Except hating the mc, and because of that they definitely deserve to die. Because nobody in this world has the right to hate the perfectly retarded mc and her scummy perfect hubby. Go to wattpad and search up CEO, you'd get stories with the same plot and characters but with different names. It's that cliché.