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Boruto : reborn with white karma
4.24 (16 valoraciones)
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lets get over with it God gave me a skill reborn in boruto at first I protested but after 'persuation' ▪︎cough▪︎ beating ▪︎cough▪︎
I relented after reincarnation what I see is a guy with mohawk hair style putting his hand in a pot with some fluid and pipes attached to it
and that was when I know that I funked up
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This is the best Boruto fanfic I have read till now and if we add naruto fanfics as well , this comes in top 5. Please increase the number of chapters uploaded per day and please don't make M.C. a simp or pushover (his current character is already very good) And please don't drop I would hate to see a series as good as this be dropped
Amezing love it i am addict i even gave power stone thing tho i dont know what it does and i dont care he asked for it so i gve but still i hope this will not be dropped it so sad when something is dropped
It's an interesting novel but it lacks you know the flare. It's fast paced sometimes it's good but it's too fast, insert more event you may have had many chapters but the total events that occured withinthose chapters can be written in a single page like I mean he got reborn, researched about his powers trained under jigen did a mission.... Like that's it. It needs more unique events different from the original storyline and try to make it longer use cut scenes to different scenarios, POV's and explain about background, give attention to details.One more thing use a cover. 😁😁
Bad narration as if the hero is telling his story in the past I did and I fought and then I took a shower Why is there no interaction like pov
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please continue this story is amazing. I has amazing pacing the plot is good and the character is awesome
pretty ok , but the double personality🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲 puts it to 1 star and there is an overpower tag it doesn't live up. to expectations also the abilities the God gave is super lame
Should add some romance it will help stabilise the story.🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😘😚😙😘🥰😍😂😍😍🥰😚🥰😍😍😍😍😝🥰
A god fanfic u should read atleast 5 or 6 chaps then u will understand whats going on.................................................................
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man that was awsome keep up on updates cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
Great Ideas, Originality/Creativity - 10/10 Interesting Story, Digging it, Looking forward to next updates, .....................................................