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The world has changed. Brought to its knees by the Impact, it is now infested with the Tainted and Awakened Beasts. Humanity, deposed from its throne at the top of the food chain, struggles to rediscover its place and find a new way to live.
Join Adam as he awakens in this new world ruled by the mysterious Ouroboros System and embarks on a risky journey to save his family. Watch as he struggles to obtain power and further his understanding of Mana.
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Escribe una reseñalove the story so far I was reading it so I could get better at writing but I love the story premise it a system book done right look forward to more chapters
Such a wonderful start. Really good foreshadowing, and i love how it is non-cliche. I'm definitely gonna read more of this, very well done author.
SYSTEM novels are my favorite! The premise is pretty unique tho. The writing style is easy to read, and similar to the top performing ones. If Author keeps this up, he can reach the top 20 easily.
Loving itt!! The storyline's impressive, ur writing style is quite unique. U have been expressive and i really like the way this story's developing as well. Great work mate<3^^
I like getting a view of the main characters life before everything happens, it's something not done a lot of times. But as I've enjoyed reading so far I can't wait to see the path the Mc goes on and I'm interested to see where this story goes! keep up the awesome chapters :D
MAGNIFICENT! The novel starts by showing the regular life of our MC. But then BAAM... The author hits us with a catastrophic event... The way the story progresses is very well written. I am looking forward to more chapters of this book
to be honest, i loved the start of this novel, the first chapter is great and shows that the author has potential. the apocalypse theme mixed with cultivation is a great way to prmote your novel because of these themes are interesting. the author has a great way with words and i can't wait for the next chapter . one more thing ,the author is mature in his thoughts and that's a good thing .
This story is quite interesting and not something you would typically find on webnovel. The idea of focusing on the MC's life before then after the apocalypse arrives really helps us empathize with the character. However, i hope the author would pick up the pace and start updating regularly; even one chapter daily would do. With that said, I really don't have any other issue with the story. Looking forward to seeing the MC climb the ladder of heirarchy and blaze his own path to success. The author really did a great work on this one. 👋👋👋👋
This story is very good, especially since it’s a new writer. It starts off slow and shows that the MC actually has a life and makes it seem realistic and relatable, and then all the sudden that is ripped away as he is awakened and the real story starts. Blood manipulation is also a cool and not commonly used ability. I like the story idea and it is very good, only thing I would say is make paragraphs a bit shorter and speared them more. Other than that, the story is superb. Well done, author! 👏 keep up the good work.
Honestly, everything in this story is amazing. I can actually feel the amount of thought put into the words and storyline, unlike other novels with authors that carelessly throw events and characters around and call it a story. Though the writing is not the best, it's understandable because English isn't the author's first language. For someone without English as their first language, it's very good. But the whole story and plotline honestly make up for this. If I could, I would read a thousand chapters of this book. This story has great potential; I hope you keep up the amazing work and keep writing, author! ^^
Autor Valhaller
Here's a shameless author rewiev (not so shameless to give myself a 5). It is my first time writing a story of this magnitude and on top of that, english is not my native language, so if you spot any errors or problems, please do point them out for me so I can get better. Having said that, my goal is to create a story and a hero that I genuinely like and relate to. I've read a ton of novels here at Webnovel and at other sites of course, and many times I've ended up wishing for the story to go in the other direction, for the hero to choose some other class, other master, other skill or some other girl. As the time went by I started to entertain the thought of writing something myself, so I can finally have control over these elements and tailor the story to my liking. So, here it is, the story that I hope will be to my and, of course, yours liking. Cheers!